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Time For Upgrades; iJst Reached 50SD[Flagged]
Topic Started: Mar 28 2015, 03:07 PM (436 Views)
Zavy-Sama
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Ive edited to add counters ...
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You still have the original issue of your techs not being what your mastery lists.
It says its based on powerful punches and kicks and counters, so from that the counters should be done via punches or kicks. So for the side step one you still need to add that it's done through a kick to the legs. Also the wording would need to be "can knock them to the ground" instead of will.

Finally either change the third tech or remove the mastery. It's a shoulder tackle, which is not a powerful punch or kick nor is it a punch/kick based counter.
Edited by Singularity, Apr 17 2015, 01:15 PM.
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I'd say these techs have a little bit too much information. They're fine, but they're a bit more specific than they need to be. Just putting that out there.

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