Character:Kay. T. Law Request:Approval For New Techs And Traits Changes:New Techs And Traits
New Gen Trait: Super Sense (1 trait) - Requires any Zoan Devil Fruit This character has achieved mastery over their heightened senses, gaining a single sense on par with Observation Haki. They gain special Technique Points that can only be used on this sense, of the amount of a quarter of their fortune.
New Pro. Trait: Kay Slay Style Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, which focuses on no wasted movements with precise and powerful strikes. This style focuses powerful strikes that stem from a fighter that is already using a consistent motion(IE bouncing on toes, leaning left to right etc). From that consistent motion, by using the momentum, the fighter can shift their body into any strikes in a punching or kicking motion or counters. (can make techniques greater than rank 14) . All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
Description:Using the power of the Zoan Sense, Kay can now hear the intricate sounds that a regular person cannot. He can distinguish sounds and anomalies around him.
Yell of The Beast (11) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+4 Strength, +4 Speed, +3 Stamina
Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a complete bull standing on all fours, 6'5 long, From horns to tail, Weighing over 200lbs
Grunt of The Beast (11) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+7 Strength, +4Stamina
Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a bull-Hybrid standing over 8 Feet covered in fur with a bulls head with big thick human-like arms and hands and large human-like feet covered in fur
New Techniques
Kay Slay Style: Taurus Charge (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Close Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent. A Successful Attack Can Leave The Opponent Knocked Off His Feet
Kay Slay Style: Taurus Turn (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Close Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way. If Kay successfully counters his opponent, he can knock his opponent off his feet as he side steps by kicking them with as he bounces on his toes.
Kay Slay Style: Mighty Taurus ChargeBranched From Taurus Charge (10*) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent, Twisting His Body And Strikes in a punching motion. A Successful Attack can break Tier 1 Objects.
Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
Taurus Charge And Psych-Up Will Replace The Old Tech That Are Already On The Character
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Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
Aww iCant Change It Now To A Stance ? *Insert Sad Puppy Dog Face With Emotional Music In The Background*
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Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
Animistic Sense: Hearing's range is "Short", practically only a few yards. Remove the part about 500 yards.
You can make one of your zoan techs a signature technique and get it to maximum rank for free. In this case, your maximum rank is 11.
Kay Slay Style: Taurus - It's rank 8. Rank 4 for the strike and 4 for the knockback. You should also specify what he "strikes" the opponent with. Is it his fist? His palm? His foot/hoove? His weapon? His head? chose one and only one.
Kay Slay Stance: Mighty Taurus Charge: it's rank 18, rank 14 for an iron breaking strike and +4 for knockback. So you can't afford it right now.
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Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
2000 lbs is an obscenely high weight 200 would be fine though.
Mastery - Need to post a revised description of his combat style, it's really vague. Just have it describe like 3 different types of move it focuses on, i.e. shoulder tackles, punches, elbow strikes.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
I might be missing it but it seems like you still havn't fixed your combat description of what the style actually does. You need to narrow it down so it's clear what the mastery applies too.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
The combat section of your app describes what is involved in the "Kay slay style" which is what your mastery covers. Your current description is too broad, make it more limited and clearer what the mastery applies too.
Something along the lines of: Mastery - Need to post a revised description of his combat style, it's really vague. Just have it describe like 3 different types of move it focuses on, i.e. shoulder tackles, punches, elbow strikes.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
* Your Mastery is far too vague, it shouldn't be applying to buffs either (you needs stance mastery for that). Punches and kicks are a bit too catch all imo. Could you be a bit more specific? For example kick boxing focuses on quick movements in a punching motion; coupled with knee / shin strikes. So far it seems like you're looking for a power producer.
* Rest seems fine.
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2) since the buff isn't included in the mastery, I've changed it to 'Taurus Turn'
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Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
If you just edit the wording of taurus turn to "side steps and aims a harsh kick at the opponents legs with the aim of knocking them off their feet" then you're good. Since your mastery is stated as focusing on powerful strikes you can't really apply it to a tech where you just trip someone up.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
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