Character: Djazz Hyperion Request: New Tech, Addin' em. Changes:
New Shit
Superior Edge (14) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Stats: N/A
Description: By unlocking armament haki, the user gains the ability to solidify their will into an opaque shell that serves as a temporary suit of armor or second skin. Not only this, but as a swordsman, the user can fortify their sword with this armor, adding addition force behind their blows while simultaneously protecting their sword. This novice version coats the users arm from the elbow down, including the weapon held in that same hand with an opaque armor of t1/Iron durability. [Focus=]
Description: By unlocking armament haki, the user gains the ability to solidify their will into an opaque shell that serves as a temporary suit of armor or second skin. Not only this, but as a swordsman, the user can fortify their sword with this armor, adding addition force behind their blows while simultaneously protecting their sword. This moderate version coats the users arm from the elbow down, including the weapon held in that same hand with an opaque armor of t2/steel durability. Additionally, this armor can be clad upon the users entire body by decreasing the durability a single tier. [Focus=]
Description: A superhuman sword slash, comparable to the power of a giant swing the sword. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the opponent, the follow through can have crushing knock back; throwing the target backwards, even if they succeed in blocking the attack. [Focus=]
Description: A supernatural sword slash, comparable to the power of a titan swing the sword. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the opponent, the follow through can have pulverizing knock back; launching them backwards, even if they succeed in blocking the attack. [Focus=]
Description: A supernatural breaking sword swing, too overwhelming to be compared to anything in reality. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the target, the follow through will have devastating knock back. Even if they succeed in blocking the attack they can be jettison back by an overwhelming force. [Focus=]
Hardening techs you'll need to alter it to - can cover the users elbow down to their hand or their swords. You don't get both.
I don't have much problem with the knock back descriptions, just alter it to something along the lines of "hit them with a crushing knockback which can knock the opponent backwards" you can't definitively define their reaction in your technique.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Hardening: A heavier coating of armaments that creates a black coating over the affected area. The coating is considered Tier 1 at Rank 14, Tier 2 at Rank 28 and Tier 3 at Rank 44. These ranks apply to a pair of limbs or weapons, anything more or full body will lower the Tier by 1 for every rank. Hardening does not raise the tiers of items but does make them more durable. Techniques augmented with Hardening are also stronger than usual.
According to the rules, it can apply to a pair of limbs, or weapons. Having one limb and one weapon fits the bill of the 'number of things that can be hard' (wink wink).
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
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