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New Tech; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Mar 19 2015, 04:11 PM (51 Views)
TGIFlash
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Character: Djazz Hyperion
Request: New Tech, Addin' em.
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New Shit

Superior Edge (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: By unlocking armament haki, the user gains the ability to solidify their will into an opaque shell that serves as a temporary suit of armor or second skin. Not only this, but as a swordsman, the user can fortify their sword with this armor, adding addition force behind their blows while simultaneously protecting their sword. This novice version coats the users arm from the elbow down, including the weapon held in that same hand with an opaque armor of t1/Iron durability.
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Supreme Edge (28)
Branched from 'Superior Edge'
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: By unlocking armament haki, the user gains the ability to solidify their will into an opaque shell that serves as a temporary suit of armor or second skin. Not only this, but as a swordsman, the user can fortify their sword with this armor, adding addition force behind their blows while simultaneously protecting their sword. This moderate version coats the users arm from the elbow down, including the weapon held in that same hand with an opaque armor of t2/steel durability. Additionally, this armor can be clad upon the users entire body by decreasing the durability a single tier. [Focus=]


Giant's Blade (8*^) [1+7]
Branched from 'Eos'
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: A superhuman sword slash, comparable to the power of a giant swing the sword. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the opponent, the follow through can have crushing knock back; throwing the target backwards, even if they succeed in blocking the attack. [Focus=]


Titan's Blade (20*^) [8+12]
Branched from 'Giant's Blade'
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: A supernatural sword slash, comparable to the power of a titan swing the sword. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the opponent, the follow through can have pulverizing knock back; launching them backwards, even if they succeed in blocking the attack. [Focus=]


Theophany (36*^) [20+16]
Branched from 'Titan's Blade'
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: A supernatural breaking sword swing, too overwhelming to be compared to anything in reality. Upon clashing with the target, should the attack fail to cut the target, the follow through will have devastating knock back. Even if they succeed in blocking the attack they can be jettison back by an overwhelming force. [Focus=]
Edited by TGIFlash, Mar 20 2015, 08:13 AM.
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Hardening techs you'll need to alter it to - can cover the users elbow down to their hand or their swords. You don't get both.

I don't have much problem with the knock back descriptions, just alter it to something along the lines of "hit them with a crushing knockback which can knock the opponent backwards" you can't definitively define their reaction in your technique.
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Technique Rules
 
Hardening: A heavier coating of armaments that creates a black coating over the affected area. The coating is considered Tier 1 at Rank 14, Tier 2 at Rank 28 and Tier 3 at Rank 44. These ranks apply to a pair of limbs or weapons, anything more or full body will lower the Tier by 1 for every rank. Hardening does not raise the tiers of items but does make them more durable. Techniques augmented with Hardening are also stronger than usual.


According to the rules, it can apply to a pair of limbs, or weapons. Having one limb and one weapon fits the bill of the 'number of things that can be hard' (wink wink).

http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5317704/1/#new

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Troo, wording changed from 'will' to 'may' or 'can'
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Sorry i missread that as "arm's"

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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