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Cynthias peachy tech's; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Mar 11 2015, 05:49 PM (147 Views)
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Character: Cynthia Valentine
Request: (New) Tech's, Tech Branch's and Description edits(spelling correction)
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Devil Fruit Techniques
Supa Supa no Mi (28) [24+4-Free]
Type: Devil Fruit
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Turns the user into a "Bladewoman", allowing them to turn any part of their body into a sharp blade. This fruit also grants the user the ability to give their skin the toughness of steel.

Rank 4: At this rank the user is able to create blades all over her body at once, even cause them to move about like a saw.

Rank 14: At this rank the user can create blades on any part of their body that may extend up to 2 feet from the skin. The properties of the blades can also be changed such as making them serrated, jagged edged or even branched. These blades can also be moved across the surface of the skin, allowing existing blades to move without physically moving ones body.

Rank 28: The user has completely adjusted to their Devil Fruit powers, to the point that their body permanently has steel properties without them needing to consciously think about it.
Petal Grind (20)
Type: Offensive
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: She sprouts circular blades up and down her forearms or legs and then makes them spin at high speeds, turning her forearms or legs into a mini-tiller blades that shred anything up to iron quality. Her fists or feet remain unchanged during this attack.
Peach Bloom Palm (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Blades in the shape of an X come out from her palm, so as she thrusts her palm a small X like shockwave comes out causing cutting damage.


Viktoria & Ilse: Twin Blades Style
Momo no Hana Ha (10*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Holding onto the Scabbard of one of her swords she lashes out the blade in front of her causing the force of the slash to send a shockwave towards the opponent that causes cutting damage.
Momo no Hana Bakuha (10+8=18*) (Branched of Momo no Hana Ha)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Holding onto the Scabbard of one of her swords she lashes out the blade in front of her causing the force of the slash to make a powerful shockwave towards the opponent that causes cutting damage and is able to cut iron. The force is so great that it can also push the target back.
Twin Dance (14*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Holding her blades in an X formation in front of her, she rushes at the opponent and slashes outwards at them, causing them to spin about. The force of the cut can also pierce iron.
(new)Gemini Downfall (28*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Cynthia would jump into the air and spin herself into a ball at high speed, she then slash's both blades downwards which makes a downwards shockwave that seems to look like two streams of watery waterfall crashing down into the target, this attack is strong enough to cut pass steel tire and lower.


Viktoria & Ilse: Blooming Tree Style
(new)Peach Tree Hammer (28*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: With her blades still in the scabbards, she violently vibrates her arms and slams the target with great force with the side of her scabbards, sending a crushing blunt shockwave directly into the target that travels through the body, the force of the shockwave ignores target's defence's and also sends the target back with great force.


Edited by Supermaou, Mar 23 2015, 07:46 AM.
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Just put [24+4-Free] if you don't mind.

Change Petal Grind and Fire Flower ranges to Self.

Replace the word "close" with "short" for the rest of your techs.

Denote that Fire Flower is branched from Petal Grind.

Momo no Hana Ha, range should be just short.

Momo no Hana Bakuha, range should be just short.

Momo no Hana Bakuha, range should be mid.

Is Peach Tree Hammer a "ignore target defense" type of attack?

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The edits has been made, and yes, peach tree hammer dose ignore defences, which I have added.
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Your base df tech talks about making blades sharp enough to cut iron, that needs to go. Freeform creating blades with passive material breaking techs isn't ok. You would need an individual tech that's aimed at material breaking.

Fire flower needs to be an individual tech that isn't branched into and would be rank 36.

Baku hatsu ha as you've described it would be rank 36* with a range of long-v.long





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cool, glad we got that sorted, anything else with the devil fruit needs changing? I removed the two techs that need to be rank36 because I can only get to rank 30 at the moment, I might replace them with other techs but I'm going to have to update that a bit later.

Added Gemini Downfall and Terror's Wrath
Edited by Supermaou, Mar 20 2015, 06:28 AM.
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From the the way you've phrased it about looking like it multiplies, it sounds like you're going for that effect where it looks as though the number of your weapon has multiplied. That plus the gatling effect would make this rank 32*. But if you take out the part about it looking like your weapon is multiplying you're good.

Also just alter the wording slightly to "the force is enough that taking several hits is enough to pierce steel tier material and lower" just so it's clear that it's not every hit of the gatling that has the material breaking effect but cumulatively.
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I just realized I wouldn't be able to afford all them techs, I took out terrors wrath and edited the rest, sorry for the trouble : P
Edited by Supermaou, Mar 23 2015, 08:00 AM.
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Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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