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ME-ta; New Traits & Tech Overhaul[Flagged]
Topic Started: Feb 19 2015, 06:18 PM (583 Views)
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Request: Approve New Traits, Tech Upgrades and New Techs
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New Traits: William has passed 275 SD, surpasing 250 SD in the same SL, so he gains one general trait and one professional.

I would like to spend the professsional trait on upgrading Rapier Mastery into:
Advanced Rapier Mastery (2 Traits) - Requires 100 SD earned. This replaces Rapier Mastery if the character already possesses the trait.
The character has attained supreme mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. Additionally, all techniques which gain this benefit have their focus cost reduced by half.

I would like to spend the general trait on:
Technical Mastery [1 Trait] - Increases total technique points by 100% of your fortune score, but does not stack with Technically Adept (this benefit overrides the previous benefit). Requires Technically Adept and 100 SD earned.

Technique Upgrades:

I'll separate these into unrelated sections to make it easier to tackle the topic, since I'm trying to rearrange the branching of many of these techniques, so individual sections will require some concentration to get through.

Section 1: Buffs
TP cost: 9 (to upgrade Full Form) + 18 (to branch Hunter) + 9 (to upgrade Strength) = 36
Hybrid form is signature form.

Section 2 - Stymphalian Feather Techs
TP Cost: 18 (to upgrade Bullet)

Section 3 - Shockwaves
TP Cost: 8 (to create Bird Invasion)

Section 4 - Rapier Thrust Techs
TP Cost: 4

New Techs:

Rokushiki
Silver Flash
(28)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Once a post, William can use this technique to put on momentary bursts of speed that make them invisible to the untrained naked eye. The user may move to any location they could normally reach within a number of meters equal to the rank of this ability near-instantaneously. During this movement, they cannot be seen by anybody who's accuracy is less than double this technique's rank, appearing as a blurred streak (often of silver color, like his feathers) to anybody who's accuracy is above that point. Additionally, the user cannot be hit by a targeted attack by anybody who's speed is lower than the user while the technique is active.
Kami-E
(Rank 32)
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Using instinct-driven, reflexive movements and loosening up all of their muscles, the user dodges an attack much the way a piece of paper in the breeze does. While in use, this technique allows the user to automatically dodge attacks made by an individual with accuracy lower than it's current rank and reduces the effective accuracy of any attack made against the user by a value equal to this technique's rank. Attacks can not be made while using Kami-E.


TP Cost: 28 + 32 = 60



Total TP Cost: 126

Both Regular TP and Used Reagular TP increase to:

Regular Technique Points: 296 (222 + 74)
Used Regular Technique Points: 294
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For the rankyaku ones, the description in the techniques topic is correct; at base, rankyaku only cuts through up to stone. You'll need to spend extra ranks to make it armour breaking. Otherwise you're fine.
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I changed the iron ones to stone and kept the steel ones as is.

Sorry, forgot I'm upgrading from a tech already containing iron for a moment there. I think everything is fixed now though.
Edited by Franky, Feb 22 2015, 12:40 AM.
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Moon dance bird and the two sword branches still say it can cut T1 materials.
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I edited them back because I realized the techs I alread have cut iron, so I can't drop it in an upgrade. I've raised their rank, raised the steel rank too, and had to remove the upper branches of the steel version since I don't have enough arnk to pull it off.

I think everything should be good now.
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Yeah, I think that's everything. Sleeping now.

Topic is flagged for approval.
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I edited once again (sorry). I dropped the iron shockwaves to their original version, upgraded only Great Bird to rank 32* and added some branches.

I also dropped the doctor buff one rank to be able to afford everything.
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Bah.

80% of 36 is 28 for the strength buff.
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Fixed.
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k, reflagged
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So first up you can't change which technique others are branched from. If you want you can make duplicate techniques branching from bullet 2.

The whole marksman bullet speed deal is kind of a weird area. But if you want the sort of run of the mill super speedy effect they get just for using fire arms and the like then you don't need to add anything to the description.

If you're gonna specifically state it's a bullet speed type attack then it'd be a higher rank 28* for bullet 32* for bullet II

Which would make shadow 38*

Rain 36*

Storm 40*

Again with the rankyaku you can't simply turn a normal shockwave into rankyaku nor are you allowed to branch non rokushiki techs into rokushiki. So the rankyaku stuff would have to be seperate.

Bullet speed attacks much like elemental attacks start at 28 and go upwards so you couldn't branch your rank 14 thrust into it. You'd need to start with a rank 28 bullet speed thrust and work up from there.

Conversely you could start with a sword-shigan since you have all the roku stuff and go from there
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I removed Bullet II, and upgraded Bullet to steel breaking and bullet speed instead.

That means Bullet is rank 28*, Shadow Bullet is rank 34*, Rain is rank 32* and Storm is rank 36*.

Kill me now! In other words, I removed all the Rankyaku and shigan traces from the shockwave and thrust upgrades.

I also replaced Roku Master with a TP trait. Removed all custom rokushiki (Soru became regular) and added a zoan form and Kami-e.
Edited by Franky, Feb 24 2015, 01:38 PM.
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Bullet rain - Mid/long

I'd say for storm just alter the wording slightly to "taking multiple hits from these feathers can cause damage to T2 materials" since as it it kinda sounds like they pierce the material at random which they don't, it's cumulative.

Take severe out of of the second bird description, all you're really paying for there is making the shockwave somewhat larger.

Invasion - Is it saying you spin in a circle while releasing shockwaves which creates a tornado of shockwaves you then send at your opponent? If so, bump it another 4 ranks.

Second breaker - just alter the wording slightly to "Suffering multiple blows from this can cause damage to T2 materials"

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Done.

I removed Second Bird II to be able to afford Bird Invasion II.
Edited by Franky, Feb 25 2015, 09:16 PM.
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Still need to bump invasion to 36*
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