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| Rasen | Jan 2 2015, 09:40 AM Post #1 | |||||||||
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Character: Seinin 'Spice N' Dice' Hanare Request: Modification Changes: Updating 1 technique, and adding in two more. They should all be within the criteria of a Rank 28 technique. - Updating Piercing Crimson - Adding in Flaming Sonic Wave, which branches off of Searing Sonic Wave. - Adding a new technique, Crimson Speed - With these new additional techniques, this should max out my TP. - Also changing many of my current techniques from Short to Melee per the new specs of Tech Ranges. - Adding in Stance Mastery to replace Professional Trait.
Edited by Rasen, Jan 5 2015, 10:22 AM.
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| ♥ Singularity | Jan 2 2015, 10:11 AM Post #2 | |||||||||
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You'll need to remove the ability of the first technique to cut through things behind the target as well since that effectively turns it into a shockwave technique. Change the wording of flaming sonic wave to "Will burn targets with the potential to set them alight" it's pretty situation dependant wether they catch on fire or not, not gonna force it through techniques use. The way screen divide is written makes it sound like he cuts one place and a slash magically appears somewhere else. If you want a ranged cut it would have to be a shockwave with a linear travel path. Having a technique where you can just make a cut appear at will somewhere ahead of you short of being the result of a DF power wouldn't be ok. |
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| Rasen | Jan 2 2015, 10:34 AM Post #3 | |||||||||
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- Well, if I take that out, Piercing Crimson might as well just become a typical Rank 14 Tech with the only exception that it cuts Steel. I guess the approach I'm trying to get at is kinda like below So What Rank Would This Be? - Edited 2nd tech. - Well that's a shame. No point arguing there I guess, it was worth a shot. Made a Stance Technique instead. Keep in mind that it's 28(0.8) = 22. |
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| ♥ Singularity | Jan 2 2015, 11:14 AM Post #4 | |||||||||
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Yeh no worries i get the effect you're going for, it's just it doesn't really translate very well over to an RP forum. If it can cut through materials behind the person then logically it can cut other people. I'm not saying the effect itself is not doable but you wouldn't be able to branch into it from a normal sword slash. Stance needs to pick 1 stat it buffs not an option between two. |
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| Rasen | Jan 2 2015, 11:20 AM Post #5 | |||||||||
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- Alright, so what additional effect can I add to make this technique a legitimate Rank 28 tech? - Are you serious? Blah fk this, this is the last time I'm handling this character. Changed. |
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| ♥ Singularity | Jan 2 2015, 11:24 AM Post #6 | |||||||||
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Cutting through steel already makes it a legitimate rank 28. Rank 28 is the base rank for T2 piercing standard slash's. Sorry should have mentioned this last time actually, you would need stance mastery to get the bonus on your stances. As is they wouldn't get it. So it's a normal rank 24 |
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| Rasen | Jan 2 2015, 11:43 AM Post #7 | |||||||||
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- Bleh done. Added effect saying it destroys the steel. - Hm, scratch that. Now that you mention that, I'm going to replace my current "In-Training" trait with "Stance Mastery" trait. Also, kind of out of context, but could you update the Rules for Top Gun trait under Marksman? It's missing how many traits required to take it. Edited by Rasen, Jan 2 2015, 11:47 AM.
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| Shizuochan | Jan 3 2015, 09:09 AM Post #8 | |||||||||
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ver-well. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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| Darkoda | Jan 5 2015, 09:20 AM Post #9 | |||||||||
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The slash will cut steel but it won't be able to just destroy anything with steel in it. Something sufficiently thick isn't going to go down in one hit. | |||||||||
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| Rasen | Jan 5 2015, 10:22 AM Post #10 | |||||||||
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Sounds like another way to say "destroyed".
Sounds like destroying steel to me.
Oh, it even says destroy. I mean sure, you guys have a DF to accompany this possibility, but c'mon, there's got to be some kind of "key phrase" that we can all universally accept upon for Rank 28 Tier 2 destroying. Edited for clarification and changed it to "breaking", because that's what it officially says. |
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| Darkoda | Jan 6 2015, 03:41 AM Post #11 | |||||||||
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That works. Just keep in mind that there's a difference between cutting someone's armor or weapon and something like a safe door. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| Shizuochan | Jan 6 2015, 05:31 AM Post #12 | |||||||||
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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