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Last Tech Update; Adding in three Rank 28 Techs.[Flagged][Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 2 2015, 09:40 AM (111 Views)
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Character: Seinin 'Spice N' Dice' Hanare
Request: Modification
Changes: Updating 1 technique, and adding in two more. They should all be within the criteria of a Rank 28 technique.

- Updating Piercing Crimson
- Adding in Flaming Sonic Wave, which branches off of Searing Sonic Wave.
- Adding a new technique, Crimson Speed
- With these new additional techniques, this should max out my TP.
- Also changing many of my current techniques from Short to Melee per the new specs of Tech Ranges.
- Adding in Stance Mastery to replace Professional Trait.

*Denotes techniques used for Advanced Longsword Mastery trait
**Denotes techniques used for Stance Mastery trait
Longsword Mastery Techniques
Piercing Crimson (24*)
Signature Technique
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Seinin leaps up into the air and spins his sword
downward, holding it effectively with both of his hands. With
a mighty force, Seinin delivers a powerful diagonal slash that
maximizes its proximity. This slash pierces through anything
that has steel material, effectively breaking through it. When
the technique is finished, Seinin stands in a stance where he
crouches with his sword by his side.

Flaming Sonic Wave (24*)
(6 + 18)
Branches from Searing Sonic Wave
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Stats: N/A
Description: This technique requires the Red Sand Sword to
be lighted up in flames. Seinin delivers a powerful slash and
unleashes an air-compressed projectile that's entirely
composed of fire. Any collision the projectile makes has the
potential to set it alight.

Crimson Speed (24**)
Type: Stance/Toggle
Range: Self
Stats: -22 Stamina
+22 Speed
Description: Seinin focuses deeply, channeling his energy
and distributing to his legs. This imposes a debuff to his
stamina, but in trade he can buff his Speed through the
same amount.
Edited by Rasen, Jan 5 2015, 10:22 AM.
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You'll need to remove the ability of the first technique to cut through things behind the target as well since that effectively turns it into a shockwave technique.

Change the wording of flaming sonic wave to "Will burn targets with the potential to set them alight" it's pretty situation dependant wether they catch on fire or not, not gonna force it through techniques use.

The way screen divide is written makes it sound like he cuts one place and a slash magically appears somewhere else. If you want a ranged cut it would have to be a shockwave with a linear travel path. Having a technique where you can just make a cut appear at will somewhere ahead of you short of being the result of a DF power wouldn't be ok.
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- Well, if I take that out, Piercing Crimson might as well just become a typical Rank 14 Tech with the only exception that it cuts Steel. I guess the approach I'm trying to get at is kinda like below

So What Rank Would This Be?

- Edited 2nd tech.

- Well that's a shame. No point arguing there I guess, it was worth a shot. Made a Stance Technique instead. Keep in mind that it's 28(0.8) = 22.
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Yeh no worries i get the effect you're going for, it's just it doesn't really translate very well over to an RP forum. If it can cut through materials behind the person then logically it can cut other people. I'm not saying the effect itself is not doable but you wouldn't be able to branch into it from a normal sword slash.

Stance needs to pick 1 stat it buffs not an option between two.
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- Alright, so what additional effect can I add to make this technique a legitimate Rank 28 tech?

- Are you serious? Blah fk this, this is the last time I'm handling this character. Changed.
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Cutting through steel already makes it a legitimate rank 28. Rank 28 is the base rank for T2 piercing standard slash's.

Sorry should have mentioned this last time actually, you would need stance mastery to get the bonus on your stances. As is they wouldn't get it. So it's a normal rank 24
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- Bleh done. Added effect saying it destroys the steel.

- Hm, scratch that. Now that you mention that, I'm going to replace my current "In-Training" trait with "Stance Mastery" trait.

Also, kind of out of context, but could you update the Rules for Top Gun trait under Marksman? It's missing how many traits required to take it.
Edited by Rasen, Jan 2 2015, 11:47 AM.
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The slash will cut steel but it won't be able to just destroy anything with steel in it. Something sufficiently thick isn't going to go down in one hit.
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From Marketplace: Mid Tier - Tier 2
 
A balanced tier of materials that provides quality for a reasonable price. The durability of these materials is also much better. It would require a rank 28 tech devoted to breaking steel to break this material.

Sounds like another way to say "destroyed".

Your Character: Valkyrie
Purgatory Flare (28: 24+4) Branched from Fiendfyre
Type: Attack/Support
Range: area/long
Stats:n/a
Description: Valkyrie takes all of that magma that she normally tosses out and condenses it into a swirling vortex of magma and sharp obsidian, shot out like a massive beam of fire and death that will drill and grind its way right through steel.

Sounds like destroying steel to me.

Marcus Bradbery
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Type: Offensive/Supportive
Range: Close-mid
Stats: N/A
Description: By forming diamond over a hand of his choosing, Marc strikes an object in such a way that it may destroy a Tier 2 material.

Oh, it even says destroy.

I mean sure, you guys have a DF to accompany this possibility, but c'mon, there's got to be some kind of "key phrase" that we can all universally accept upon for Rank 28 Tier 2 destroying.

Edited for clarification and changed it to "breaking", because that's what it officially says.
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That works. Just keep in mind that there's a difference between cutting someone's armor or weapon and something like a safe door.

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