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Spiritual Journey
Topic Started: Dec 31 2014, 01:59 AM (47 Views)
KileyBarker
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A True Hero
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Link to SL: Spiritual Journey
Characters/Primary Profession:

Satori: Martial Artist

Zella: Inventor

Felix Crasher: Smith

Ship(s): N/A
Request: Grade Please
Notes: Felix was only in for one post. It's really short and due to time constraints we never got to reveal the cool NPC villain I had planned us to originally fight. Still, we wrapped it up nicely I feel.
"And says 'at last' just as the time bell rings
Goodnight, now it's time to go home
And he makes it fast with one more thing
We are the Sultans
We are the Sultans of Swing"

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Shizuochan
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a real naga
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Shizuochan
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Thank you for your patience. Your storyline has been reviewed.

Satori16 SD::beli:: 4,000,000Bonuses::
Deductions::

Zella
14 SD::beli:: 3,500,000Bonuses::
Deductions::

Felix
1 SD::beli:: 250,000Bonuses::
Deductions:: lol


Shame about the tempo-shift and rushed ending, although I think the story actually allowed for it to not quite be so awkward. As it was a sort of supernatural, ghostly adversary, cutting it short actually lent it a sort of 'mystique'. In any case, outside of spooky scary skeletons, a pretty decent 'meeting SL'.

Cevian: typically - in reference to your initial usage of Get-Away Kick - techniques, when used, are referenced to at the end of the post (with a copy pasta of their effect). It's not a particularly big deal in most cases, especially in an amicable thread like this, but it does provide an easy and convenient frame of reference for the partner!

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Your topic has been Graded!
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