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More techs; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 23 2014, 12:16 AM (145 Views)
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Character: Sai Smith


Request:Add new Techs


Changes:

Techs
Lightning Flash 7
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: -4 Accuracy
Description:
Sai sprints in close to the opponent and slashes at full speed aiming for the eyes to hinder their vision
Rain Shower 8
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:
Description:
Used when he his falling on top of an opponent, Sai rapidly delivers stabs with both knives down towards his enemies.
Lightning Bolt 8
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:
Description:
Used whenever he jumps straight downward, delivers a single deep slash attack to an individual enemy.

Edited by StiX, Dec 24 2014, 02:03 AM.
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Well, right off the bat I'm going to say that the characters need to be updated for the patch. The most obvious change I can find from a cursory glance is that Assassin primary's changed (for instance, no longer offering Speed traits as a professional trait option).

Rain Shower would be rank 8.
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Changed what i found myself, and updated Rain shower.
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Your character should have 6 traits total, 4 gen and 2 prof. You're missing one.

Debuffs need to have a profession or trait basis, so given you have assasin primary you can make poison debuffs. A debuff from running fits into no such catagory so you'll need to take that out.

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The debuff is from the quickstrike trait so if anything i could change it to a stealthier approach, but it should still work. and updated traits to include another in fated.
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Specify which traits are general and which are professional.

Your techs themselves are fine.
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Edited in, am i able to add my new techs?
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Wait till this stuff is approved.

Furthermore, you should have edited prospective edits up above in your opening post, as opposed to directly editing the sheet.

You cannot use a Professional Trait to purchase Fated of the Mighty.
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Changed, And i havn't added anything to the sheet, just updating it to the new standard.
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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