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Dog Problems 2: Bitches So Pretty; All the green of your eyes say: "go, leave it all behind"
Topic Started: Dec 8 2014, 03:48 AM (101 Views)
AngelMayLaugh
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Link to SL: All The Pretty Girls
Characters/Primary Profession:
  • Jessica Amber Parker Markswoman
    • High-Roller (1 Trait)
      Masters of gambling, these characters not only bet often, but also live by the motto, "Go big or go home." These characters can rarely go a day without making some high stakes bet, and it usually pays off well for them, netting them an extra 25% beli each SL.

  • Domingo Suede Merchant
    • Tough Bargainer (1 Trait) – Ever the successful businessman, merchants know how to extract money from people and to keep as much as they can from leaving their pocket. Thus, they will always earn 20% more Beli in their Storylines.
    • Rare Find (1 Trait) – A keen merchant always has his eyes and ears open for an exceptional deal. At the end of every SL, the character will be offered a rare and valuable item determined at random (weapons, armour, devices, dials, materials, etc.) This item will have double their normal discount applied if it is purchased.

Ship(s): Florica
Request: Grade this shit niggachan.
Notes:

I noticed that I made a lot of allusions and foreshadowed things that were going to happen but I ended up rushing or just completely forgetting about them.

I don't know if Blades will post or not, but I figure that if he will it will be up before you snails even get around to grading this. (Don't deduct him).

I don't care if Shizuo grades this or not but he graded the SL that came before this. There aren't really any ties between the SLs besides Amber getting injured and Domingo and Amber learning Haki. So if anything is weird ask that nigga(or me, but don't).

As I mentioned in the last post I didn't proofread it. I usually don't proofread posts but that one especially, lmfao.

RIP dials.

Thus ends Domingo's Calm Belt Saga. Well, i actually have to do an exit post but you get the point.

Almost forgot to mention there was some awful part in the beginning. Just adont mind that. I fixed it. Youll know it when you see it...
Edited by AngelMayLaugh, Dec 8 2014, 07:47 AM.
Head Courier Weapon Specialist/Courier WORMS Division Beli: ::beli:: 50,750,000
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Location: Skypiea, Grand Line [Sky Islands]
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Location: Raijin Island, New World [Row One]
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Location: Couture Island, Grand Line [Sea Train Zone]
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Claiming.
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Shizuochan
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aml is a faggot (if you pronounce the word 'tagged' like a retard, it almost sounds like faggot, just fyi no flame)
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I'm not planning to post because, at best, it would be a short one that basically just said, "Amber watched what happened" or just about the short aftermath of the fight, and I don't want to make a crappy post for the sake of having a post to finish it off.

That being said if a lack of a post would give me an incomplete, then let me know and I'll post.

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Your topic has been Graded!
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