Like I said in the cbox, it's pretty damn good. I don't have much critique since it's a very good manga-ish style. I absolutely adore her shading for these sketches, just a little something I really like seeing.
Kudos, she's pretty damn good and should keep it up.
AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
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I agree with Icy, it looks really good. She's captured the one-piece like drawing style, especially with the drawing of Julia. Other than the fact that she's good, I've got nothing else to say, can't wait to see future work.
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