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Topic Started: Mar 18 2014, 10:01 PM (1,405 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Devlok Colt
Nickname: Red Hunter
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Bounty Hunter
Threat: 86
Bounty As Vodlek: 60,000,000 Beli
Achievements:

● Defeated a Cyborg and stopped an horde of mind controlled people.

● Together with Leroy Wolf defeated Senor Tres of the Salamanca family.

● Survived an encounter with Raine Argose father.

● Took down Lucille D. Oro along with infiltrating the ranks of the Carlepone Family and taking down a vast amount of their underlings.

Profession:

Assassin

The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge, as well as skills with a small weapon such a dagger. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight.Assassins are able to create poisons that weaken their foes, and have access to stealth techniques. Additionally, they may spend professional traits on Speed or Accuracy stat traits.

Marksman

The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions.


Physical Appearance
Height:5'9
Weight: 60kg
Hair:Spiked black
Eyes: Brown
Clothing/Accessories: Switch's between wearing black shades or just glasses has a long red dark coat.
Wears cargo pants with 2 holster in his belt and a ammunition pouch.
General Appearance: Devlok has small spiked hair like an hedgehog and with is glasses gives a feel of a noble. Slim but muscular with thin arms and strong legs it portraits a athletic look. His face is always the same when you meet him his deadfish eyes and closed poker face doesn't let you know what he is thinking.

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The Character
Personality: The first impression you get is a cold person without emotions specially if he is on a job.

Devlok can be contradictory. He is practical, yet idealistic and intuitive, capable of selfless devotion to someone he cares, yet look to receive payback. He is bold, independent, inquisitive and interested in knowledge. He knows what he wants and why he wants it.

Devlok have a great sense of responsibility and duty. Devlok is comforting, appreciative and affectionate. His obligation in life is to hold justice and truth. He only shows his true self to his friends, and is loyal to them.

Hates betrayal and disrespect especially if it targets his friends or loved ones.

When he fights he is calm and collect and cracks stupid jokes specially when a fight does go his way... rarely snaps only if someone who is dear to him gets badly injured or when someone talks trash about his friends.

He distances himself from other people and try to show no emotions so when they get to know him he turns into a more cheerful person.


Hometown: Baterilla, South Blue
History:
Devlok was an orphan without knowing what happened to his family. So at an young age he was adopted by a old man in the village that said he wanted to leave his trait of gunsmith to someone before he passed away, unfortunately after several months trying the old man couldn't make the kid learn his job, so he just decided to taught him some skills he learned from when he was a adventurer.

So until Devlok 16 birthday the old man imputed all the knowledge he had so they everyday would play Chess, for training anticipation and development systematized thinking, Poker for reading facial expressions and lies, Blending for hiding his presence, how to brew some potions mainly to coat weapons or bullets, various traits, and last but not least marksmanship where the boy truly show some talent.

When the day of his birthday arrived the old man gave the boy two red coated flintlock guns and sends the boy to accept the jobs on the village inn no matter what the job has. So he made a bit of everything through the next 2 years.

In his 18 birthday the old man said to the kid to sit down and listen closely “I know who you really are and where you came from, you aren't just a kid I picked up in the orphanage by chance, your father was an old friend of mine that put me on a straight path, back in the day I was a pirate spy in the world government and your father caught me red-handed, fortunately for me instead of capturing me and throw me into jail he decided to let me go, if i promised to leave the world of the sea and when the time comes when he needed my help, I would obliged to his request… I was tired of all the sneaking around so I accepted without thinking, so he provided me an escape declared me dead, and here I’am.” Devlok had a surprised face on; well he suspected that the old man wasn't just a simple gunsmith but never to this scale.
He continued to talk “Now to why are you here, that you probably already figured out you are the simple request your father gave… After a few years I went under the radar, he sent me a letter saying that their life’s where in danger, yes… both of your parents were bounty hunter’s, they left you at this village orphanage and said if they didn't come pick you up when you reach 5 years of age for me to pick you up and raise you in their stead…”
Devlok never thought that the man that raised him lied for 13 years he was trained to hide his emotions but the betrayal he felt couldn't keep his anger to show on his face.
“Why now?” just what he managed to say after this load of information about his past got dumped in such a short time.
The Old Man continued” Hey kid i’m just gonna ignore that expression and continue… The reason is simple your parents took a bite off more than they could chew, they pissed both the world government and one big organisation of pirates, they found something that could seriously injured the two factions evolved, so they were being hunted by both…that’s the only information I got from his letter.”

How much time had passed since that conversation if it could be called that… he explained me that he didn't tell me when I was younger because he didn't want a young fool go to the sea seeking blind revenge and getting himself killed. “If you want justice remember that the things that expect you are on a different level so just think for awhile, I got an easy job for you on the neighborhood island so gather your thoughts and then we will talk about the next step.”

Fucking old man never thought that from day one is intention has to make me a bounty hunter to track my ghost parents and the fuckers that did this to my family. Shit, never been so pissed in my life, got played for a fool till now, found out my parents are probably dead for trying to do things right. Argh, I have to unload this frustration on the old man or I will go crazy.

When returning from the job the old man had disappeared without a trace “What the…” did he just bailed on me? No, that’s not his style, not even a note in the house or a message at the inn. Wait a second, the old guy said something strange before I left for the job “Don’t forget to proper clean and maintain the guns if not the next two one’s are coming out of your pay” I brushed of at that time was still pissed so I left without even talking to him. “Let’s see…”
I started inspecting the guns wait there's some small metal attached bellow the grip with the inscription Devlin and the other gun has Lokelanne…

So Devlok with the skills and the guns left by the old man he decided to set on his own adventure following the steps of his family as a bounty hunter, to search for the old man, and to gather information about the clues he got about his parents and make justice in their stead…
Abilities and Possessions
Combat:Relies on Both speed and technique tries to finish his battles in the first strike, always starts his fights with only one gun that matches his opponent. When the fight gets harder he dual wields. His agility and perception permits him to dodge and predict the enemies movement. Likes to do unexpected things but always carefully calculated.
Weaponry:

Lokelanne - single-action dark red coated iron flintlock pistol
Devlin - single-action dark red coated iron flintlock pistol

Custom Mateba "Viriatus" and "Thanatos"

Custom Mateba "Hypnos"

A.D. and M.


Items:Medicine, ammunition, pack of cookies, green paperclip, joined paperclips Y/R, den den mushi(island range), Seaking Leather Gloves.

The Power of Friendship!!!
Parallel Uni-View Master
Fighting Kicks
Luigi's Pizzeria Shirt
The Flayer
Squeaky Duck
Special 8th Anniversary Swag Bag



Beli: 500,000
SD Earned:394
Stat Points:312((32+150)+(100/1.5)+(99/2)+(44/3))
Advancement Points:0
SD Remaining:0
Stats:312

  • Used for Stats: 281
  • Used for Fortune:10

    • Strength: 51
    • Speed: 90
    • Stamina: 55
    • Accuracy: 100(85+15)
    • Fortune: 76 (70+6)
Traits:
(9 Gen)

Specific Devil Fruit (2 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Nagi Nagi no Mi (Calm Calm Fruit) - Tier 6 (2 Traits)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: Turns the eater into a calm-man and capable of silencing sound. The method can be through creating fields which block sounds from entering or leaving its radius of influence or silencing all sounds created by an individual even by indirect means such as firing a gun or an explosion.


Awakened Haki (4 Traits) Requires 100 SD and must be located in the Grand Line.
- The character has awakened their dormant ambition and is able to utilize this mysterious force in combat. They may specialize in one of the two basic colors (The Color of Armaments or The Color of Observation) or a Dormant Specialization. For their specialist color, the character's Haki maximum rank is 1/2 Fortune. For any other color, the maximum rank is 1/4 Fortune. They are also capped at rank 44 for their Specialist color techniques, and rank 28 for any other colors.

Disciplined Haki (2 Traits) Requires Awakened Haki and 150 SD earned
- The character has trained and disciplined their ambition, allowing them to unlock their true potential. They are no longer limited by Rank caps, and their non-specialist maximum rank is 1/3 Fortune.

Conquering King Haki (1 Trait) Requires Disciplined Haki and Dormant Specialization
- Those who chose to have a Dormant Specialization are able to take Conquerering King's Haki at 200 SD earned. This will allow them to overpower weaker enemies and combat their foes with sheer force of will. They will specialize in the Color of the Conqueror.


(5 Prof)

Handgun Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.

Keen Accuracy (1 Trait) - This character's accuracy is boosted by 20%.

Quickstrike (1 Trait) – Because of their training in making stealth attacks and hitting vital organs, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.

Ansatsuken (1 Trait) -The character has become so adept at striking vital areas and pressure points that they may do so passively in the course of their normal attacks. Any time the character lands a blow on an enemy, they may apply the one of their critical hit/quick strike technique debuffs. This debuff is half as strong as normal, but otherwise functions exactly like a normal critical hit/quick strike debuff, in terms of stacking and duration.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:228
Used Regular Technique Points:108
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Nagi Nagi no Mi (Free 4+12)16
Type: Supportive
Range: self
Stats: N/A
Power : N/A
Description:The Nagi Nagi no Mi turns the eater into a calm-man and capable of silencing sound. The method can be through creating fields which block sounds from entering or leaving its radius of influence or silencing all sounds created by an individual even by indirect means such as firing a gun or an explosion.

Rank 8: The user can remove the effect of any target he wishes with a snap of his fingers, however he can only do so if the target isn't further than medium range.

Rank 16: The user becomes more adept at utilizing his silence ability, nagi nagi no mi medium aoe techniques will have the effect costs of the minimum rank of the tier below.


Mauna (8)
Type: Supportive
Range:Medium (AoE)
Stats: N/A
Power : N/A
Description: With a snap of his fingers, Devlok creates a spherical soundproof field to surround within himself, another target area, or foe. The field prevents any sound coming from within from leaving, as well as blocking all outside sounds from entering. [Effects: Medium AoE 16]


QuickStrike Techniques
Crippling Shot (4)
Range:Medium
Stats:Stamina -2
Type:Offensive
Description:Fires a shot to the knee that has a chance of crippling the opponent.



Handgun Mastery Techniques
Blind bullet (2*)
Range:Medium
Stats:N/A
Type:Offensive
Description:Fires two bullets with the same travel path making the second bullet have extra damage if it hits the same spot.


Hook Strike (4*)

Range:Close
Stats:N/A
Type:Offensive
Description:When in a close fight he fires the gun off to the side and uses the recoil and the weight of the weapon to strike the opponent with a hook punch. It could knock the opponent down.



Rama Techniques
Rama Arcing (4*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Stats: N/A
Description: Devlok quickly rotates his hand spinning the gun right before shooting. Firing a bullet that can curve altering its flight path.
Sīghra Rama Arc (8*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Stat: N/A
Description: Branched from Rama Arcing. Devlok swings his arm and quickly rotates his hand spinning the gun right before shooting. Firing a bullet that can curve altering his flight path. The technique looks the same but the fired bullet will fly stronger making the curve sharper, allowing the bullet to go around tight corners and high covers.

Sīghra Over Arc (12*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Stat: N/A
Description: Branched from Sīghra Rama Arc. Devlok fires repeatedly at the target using different rotations affecting the angles the bullets make. Using the exact same motions of Sīghra, the arms of the hunter appear to duplicate due to the speed of the attack. Each bullet carries the effects of Sīghra Rama Arc.(Gatling)
Rama Rave(14*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Stat: N/A
Description: Branched from Sīghra Rama Arc. Rotating the entire arm (shoulder, elbow and hand) Devlok extends his hand and fires, generating a twirling wind and momentum. The bullet curves with a sharp turn and carries on the small rotating wind with it, adding an extra spinning power capable of penetrating materials of Tier 1 (iron) hardness or lower.


Debuff QS techniques
Sita Debilitate(18)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Long
Stat: - 11 Speed

Description: Devlok carefully targets the opponent's leg before firing the a bullet. After it hits a vital point, those who get injured will feel hampered, lowering their maneuverability. This Debuff lasts for 4 posts.

Sita Paralyze(28) branched from Sita Debilitate
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Long
Stat: - 22 Speed

Description: Devlok carefully targets the opponent's leg before firing the a bullet with the intention hitting the knee. After it hits a vital point, those who get injured will feel their limb momentarily paralyzed, lowering their maneuverability. This Debuff lasts for 7 posts.


Support techniques
Garuḷā Step (28)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stat: N/A
Power:20

Description: Once per post, an individual can use this technique to put on momentary bursts of speed. The user may move to any location that they could normally move to in a single post, but they do so near-instantaneously. During this movement, they cannot be seen by anybody who's accuracy is less than double this technique's rank, appearing as a blurred streak to anybody who's accuracy is above that point. If attacked while moving by a foe who's speed is less than this technique's rank, the attack can be passively dodged without any expenditure of Focus. Attacks cannot be made while moving with Garula Step. (Quick, Perception Formula)


Supportive /Defensive Techniques
Agility (4)
Range:Close
Stats:N/A
Type:Defensive
Description:Analyses his enemy movements and patterns and dodges to a safe position.



Development History
Gains/Losses:
A Time to Sing, A Time to Dance: + 14 SD, 3,440,000 Beli, 4 Threat, Green Paperclip
Viriatus and Speedloader: - 2,700,000 Beli, - 250,000 Beli
A Crowded SL If There Ever Was One + 5 SD, 1,100,000 Beli, Joined Paperclips Y/R
Treasure Hold in Brick Blues + 9 SD, 4,300,000 Beli
Under the Salamanca Cafeteria + 19 SD, 9,500,000 Beli, 4 Threat
September Contest + 2 SD, 1,000,000 Beli, and The Power of Friendship.
Happy 6th Birthday OPRP + 6 SD, 6,600,000 Beli
Operation Jack's Knife + 9 SD, 4,500,000 Beli
Burn your Dread + 17 SD, 8,500,000 Beli
Joat Fleet - 6,490,000 Beli
November Contest + 3 SD, 1,000,000 Beli
New Techniques - 18 TP
Sky ticket - 2,000,000 Beli
April Contest + Fighting sneakers, + 4 SD and 2,000,000 Beli
Jacks Mafia Saga - Second SL: The Gang Within + 35 SD, 17,500,000 Beli, 21 threat, Luigi Pizzeria Shirt.
May Goldenweek Contest + 1 SD
Weapon upgrade - 12,650,000 Beli
Clownkings + 77 SD, 38,500,000 ::beli::
Second gun - 11,600,000 ::beli::
July Contest + 12 SD, 7,500,000 ::beli::, and contest items.
New techniques - 56 TP
Jack's Palace - 5,000,000 ::beli::
Green Circus + 45 SD, 22,500,000 ::beli::
7 Yrs OPRP + 7 SD, 7,000,000 ::beli::
Dancing With Dragons + 6 SD, 3,000,000 ::beli::
February Contest + 1 SD, 500,000 ::beli::
Of Greed and War + 16 SD, 8,500,000 ::beli::
Phone Snail - 1,500,000 ::beli::
Return to the roots +40 SD, +25 threat,+ 20,000,000 ::beli::
8Y OPRP + 8 SD, Swag bag
The Thousand Year War + 5 SD, + 2,500,000 ::beli::
Travelling Troubles + 4 SD, +2 threat, + 2,000,000 ::beli::
Withers' Break + 12 SD, + 6,000,000 ::beli::
Nagi Nagi + devil fruit.
Upgrades along with some new guns and gloves - 121,400,000 ::beli::
New Fleet - 19,350,000 ::beli::
Arma d'Exotique + 34 SD, 30 Threat, + 17,000,000 ::beli::
New Jacks Fleet - 16,500,000 ::beli::
July event +2 SD
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Edited by TechnoVash, Jul 16 2017, 05:34 PM.
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Delete "Assassins are able to create poisons that weaken their foes, and have access to stealth techniques. Additionally, they may spend professional traits on Speed or Accuracy stat traits" from Assassins as only the primary prof gets the bonus.

All weapons should be in weaponry not Clothes, Combat, or items.
You have too much weaponry, as a starter you can have either 1 twohanded weapon or 2 onehanded weapons. The weapons should be of iron quality and single shot before reload.

Your Mastery is too diverse, pick a specific gun type for the bonus.

No to debuffing a random stat, choose a stat now.
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- "Assassins are able to create poisons that weaken their foes, and have access to stealth techniques. Additionally, they may spend professional traits on Speed or Accuracy stat traits." As this is your secondary profession, you do not gain this bonus.

- "Achievements: Captured a gang of 30 criminals in one day." We generally rule out, on starter characters, anything that gives you a large degree of notoriety (threat).

- Weaponry:Guns, Mountable Rifle. Detail each individual gun that you own. Specify them as iron quality. Additionally, the free starter weapon package only accounts for single shot before reload guns, which dual barrel shotguns don't really far under, naturally. Additionally, each additional weapon over the limit of either 1 two-hander or 2 one-handed weapons requires beli expenditure.

So I'll come back to price if needbe you've detailed everything in the Weaponry section.

- Daggers fall under weaponry, and would also need to take the above into consideration.

- Smoke-bombs are limited to those with the inventor profession.

- Stat Points: 32

- You have one extra trait to spend.

- Quick Strike: Crippling Shot - (4)
Range:Medium
Stats:Accuracy
Type:Supportive
Description:Fires a shot to a vital spot that has a chance of crippling the opponent and debuff a random stat.

This won't do, pick a specific debuff, as well as a specific vital spot. This should be one critical strike technique as opposed to an assortment of them. The debuff is -2.

- Spraying - (2)
Range:Close
Stats:Speed
Type:Offensive
Description:When forced to a close fight uses the dual barrel shotguns for less accuracy and more damage.

Simply stating that you'll be using your guns doesn't really constitute a technique, this should be like a shot or something.

- Stun Bullet can't be done without inventor.

- Bump Blind Bullet up to 4*; this is just shooting one bullet after another btw, the extra damage thing is just what comes with... well, a second bullet being shot and probably hitting what the first hit, it's not a case where the first bullet hitting suddenly makes the second stronger. Just wanted to clear up the wording.
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thanks for the quick response :) profile updated.
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- I admit I was a bit obtuse, you currently can't afford either of those guns with the six-round cylinders. Starter characters get very rudimentary one shot and then manually reload guns. You might be able to afford these after one or two or the average Storyline threads?

- I'll eventually have to apply an upkeep once the guns get fixed up, so sit tight.

- Trishot needs to be bumped up to 4*. (this takes you over 16)
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Removed trishot and fixed the guns... i don't know how to make them more rudimentary that flintlock pistols.

Also changed the mastery to handgun instead of revolver.
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Hook Strike is technically okay, but could you clarify what you mean by "Using the momentum of a single shot"? Like, does he fire the gun off to the side and uses the recoil to add strength to his punch? Or does he shoot someone close range and then like, punch the guy in the same motion? Again, the technique is fine, I just don't really know what's going on.
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Hook Strike is technically okay, but could you clarify what you mean by "Using the momentum of a single shot"? Like, does he fire the gun off to the side and uses the recoil to add strength to his punch? Or does he shoot someone close range and then like, punch the guy in the same motion? Again, the technique is fine, I just don't really know what's going on.
Fixed it. It was actually the first one...
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  • Your history could be a bit longer but I shall not get picky. However, please remove the line about "capturing small criminals" as this could warrant threat which we prefer you get all IC. Assuming you did that...

    Your character has been approved.

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    Edited by ShadowBlade, Mar 21 2014, 12:39 PM.

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Removed the line and i don't have a problem of extending the character history so i will do that when i find the time :)
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