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Topic Started: Oct 5 2013, 06:13 PM (5,855 Views)
Shizuochan
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Dance of the Crashing Adder Branched from Dance of the Diving Taipan

Don't see Diving Taipan tech.
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Huh thought for sure Shizu said something about haki shockwaves. But yeah haki can't be used in conjunction with shockwaves literally at all. Sorry.

Btw i'd like to once again state your ice doesn't reach absolute zero or anywhere close to it. It's simply really damn cold, so cold it can very quickly freeze bodies of water, surfaces of objects and even living creatures. This doesn't mean it can actually freeze most elements. So if someone starts a campfire launching ice at it wouldn't be the best way to put it out.

Perfectly reflective is overselling your ice mirrors a bit much at rank 4 for frozen reflection. At rank 8 you could get a fairly good image of a person. But at rank 14 maybe you could qualify for a real mirror since ice isn't that great at reflecting stuff back.

Sight of scholar would be best if you chose either to select one target and gauge their strength or a short ranged sensory tech to get a sense of the area around you completely.

sight of soothsayer feels like it should be higher ranked since putting predicting actions on par with reading emotions is silly. One is clearly showing a greater insight into a target's mental state. Rank 20 perhaps and describe that they just get the sense that the opponent is about to attack, evade, defend or whatever and thats it. No real details to it.

For Arctic imprisoning are you actually creating a dome of ice? Not that you'd actually be able to turn ice into a t3 material as that'd just be rp'd out. But yeah i'm not really seeing how thats possible given all the other techs are about freezing an area and weakening materials down to a brittle level but this one jumps to making a snow globe from the sound of it at the end but without explaining how you make the snow globe.

haki wouldn't be boosting a lot of these techs of yours like the ones that are making platforms to boost your jumping abilities or weapon creation

Frigid Fractal is fine as a rank 8 alone. Sorry about my nazish ways before where it sounded a lot more complicated to me than it was.

It's other version is suitable at rank 14.

lastly gattling shockwaves do not need a number, that goes against all our ideas of relativity and leave it out to rp. You do a gattling as long as you want and you can continuously make attacks with a gattling until you choose to stop or are stopped by something/someone else.
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Resolved the freezing stuff in PM's

removed mirror, llow 14 ranks just to see how pretty he is.

removed the strength measure stuff

Upped to rank 20

Removed the T3 thing, that was meant to go a while back my bad.

Removed the haki clause from the shockwaves and jumping platforms. Resolved the jump cannon one in PM's.

I can't find a number in the gatling shockwave, you'll have to point it out to me.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Yeah me and Rayne discussed it and I talked to Speak about a second opinion on the freezing. Theres no solid evidence to suggest that he can freeze things like air within the atmosphere or anything that isn't typically able to be frozen. Izuru would have to be directly touching an object or using his produced ice to freeze it it's been shown except for one small instance where its unclear in canon. It seemed from me and Speak's interpretation that the spears of ice were formed from ice crystals that had formed from behind the admiral after he had been speared. So yes this does buff up Izuru a little in the utility department since it hints at a more fluid movement capability with ice.

And yes hie would do a very poor job at actually freezing most elements, it does make sense for a few however like swamp, toro, and maybe candy. It'd be near useless or evenly matched on it's own against the others however.

After thats fixed up you're actually good for approval as far as I can tell.
Edited by Darkhunter, Jan 9 2015, 11:00 AM.
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Alright, I talked with him about some tech fixes, everything else seems fine. I trust the rest of you to have caught anything major.

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Hi, random audit of OPRP's og big 3 (Leander, Izuru, Kamina). On a whim. Sort of.

You used the Tech Points advancement, I noted. Please properly note that somewhere outside of AP: 1.

Your Regular Technique Points pool is then: 142*4.5 = 639.

I'm not going to approach the Haki mastery #issue this poses. Just going to leave this in here before a rank 44 pops up in character reg :<

The notation of your Techniques is so absolutely poor. A large part of it will probably clear itself up with the change in Haki and arma mastery not existing.

However, I have a very high suspicion that you're over your cap. (Edit: The number being quoted by Darkoda is 723)
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I will never edit and you can't make me, watch as I solo all over the forum with my infinite tp, mutha hahahah my final plan is at fruition, bask in my tp fuelled rampage

Edit: tbh without a laptop I can really sort the numbers out here but I'll figure out what I've fucked up once I can, and drop some shit till appropriate
Edited by Singularity, Aug 5 2015, 05:25 PM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Ok so after a second look, this time not with double vision I figured it out. There's some missing branch notation on the last few ice techs, lances and exhales cold wind. Also I think it's like 13 tp over, will take care of that next grading.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Edited by Singularity, Aug 24 2015, 05:19 PM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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