I like both, but I think the top is the better one in the end.
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Two suggestions, though. I'm not quite fond of Nyx's pose-- everyone seems to have relaxed, calm poses but she appears to be the only one engaging in actual combat. I'd like to see something more elegant and refined.
Also, the space equivalency in number one is much different than it is in draft two. Bias included, Ryan and Nyx don't appear to take up much room; in fact, they feel a little shoved in the corner a little. Could consider reducing the amount of space the others take by a small bit.
Believe it or not, Ryan is also is an action based pose (dashing towards the viewer). Also, if you put the two together, they take up almost a full quarter of the image. The space above nyx and ryan has the smallest space, hence why daisuke will be going there. I think for the most point, when you see the final lines, which should be coming soon, you'll understand it a bit more. Besides, we're never going to have exactly equal space, especially if you don't just want a boring square setup.
goddammit they're both looking pretty damn awesome, i'm slightly more swayed towards one just due to a preference on poses, but i honestly wouldn't be unhappy with either, looking gud so far.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
goddammit they're both looking pretty damn awesome, i'm slightly more swayed towards one just due to a preference on poses, but i honestly wouldn't be unhappy with either, looking gud so far.
I think the dual dashing thing going on with nyx and ryan is pretty nifty, gives a sense of them working in tandem without some glaringly obvious hint towards it.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
But anyways, that looks pretty boss. If it was up to me, I would have decreased Colour's space to make a little bit more room for Zei and Daisuke, but still looks awesome none the less.
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Annabelle Amagi • Muse of Void • Entertainer / Designer / Martial Artist / Merchant • Chaos Weave Bounty: 50 • SD Earned: 478 • Beli: 173,200,000 • Location: Revolution Island, Grand Line [color=#0090D8]
Serana Valdís • Knight of Rage • Martial Artist / Carpenter • Valta Rank: Lieutenant Commander (33) • SD Earned: 229 • Beli: 92,200,000 • Location: Ilusia, West Blue [color=#F3D659]
Marshall "Dark Knight" Stroud • Knight of Heart • Weapon Specialist / Thief • Reaper Pirates Bounty: 27,000,000 • SD Earned: 172 • Beli: 28,150,000 • Location: Gesso Island, Grand Line [color=#506987]
Titus • Mage of Space • Carpenter / Botanist • Sugar Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Blues [color=#329555]
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Daedalus • Prince of Life • Inventor / Weapon Specialist / Marksman / Smith • Ray Solo Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 177 • Beli: 13,500,000 • Location: Salt Island, Grand Line [color=#B0171F]
Dr. Lamar Palmer • Bard of Mind • Inventor / Marksman • No Crew Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 61 • Beli: 15,250,000 • Location: Mirrorball Island, East Blue [color=#4FB44F]
Am I the only one to think that Ryan should have a different pose. He's the only one that's the attention to himself because of the frontal pose. He should be sideways to direct it to the centre of the banner and make it more fluid.