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Kalix Khan
Topic Started: Jun 9 2013, 12:28 PM (1,118 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Khalix Khan
Nickname: Yasei no Tora
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirates
Bounty: 500,000
Achievements:None
Profession: ~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves.

Carpenter

A Carpenter is someone who makes a living crafting things such as ships, submarines, buildings and other physical structures with expertise and materials not privy to non-carpenters. Carpenters are the only ones capable of creating ships with techniques. A carpenter is proficient in the use of the tools of their trade as weapons, and have no maximum rank limit for martial techniques involving these tools. Furthermore, carpenters are able to use techniques that enable the rapid construction of basic, temporary structures such as walls, bridges and ladders. Carpenters have access to certain additional traits.

*Note: Carpenters are the only ones capable of ignoring the general rules for ship making and can even purchase materials for ships not found in the chart for ship making. They are also the only ones who can create ships beyond what is typically found, including submarines.

Position: not determined


Physical Appearance
Height: 6'3
Weight: 227
Hair: White
Eyes: Hazel
Clothing/Accessories: Khalid wears a pair of loose jeans, the right leg torn till just strings hang down the ankle, the left side is cut off just below the knee. Blue in color it sports a black belt held tight. He wears no shoes or shirt but has a white coat that hangs off his shoulders, No Justice is written on the back.

General Appearance: Khalix stands at 6'3 and weighs 227 pounds of hard muscle, his body is between lean and thick, his body definition designed for strength and speed. His skin is a deep natural tan which makes his white hair and eyes stand out more, handsome with a cool yet detached kind of look.

His hair is cut short to keep out of the way in a fight and because it looks stylish. His fists are covered in scars that martial artist refer to as "Training wounds" Years of punching wood, brick, stone, bamboo, cinder, bronze, iron, and steel have left scars but hardened his bones. On his back is a tattoo of a large white tiger with claws that look like are trying to tear their way out of his back. Several tattoos of different runic symbols and designs cover most of his body from neck to toes. His arms have full sleeves and his chest is a canvas of symbols, loops, designs, and animals.

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The Character
Personality: Khalix is a laid back yet highly energetic young man, his care free style has made him seem more like a big kid than anything else. His passion is the sea and it calls to him on a deep level, the adventure and danger constantly drives him to be a pirate sailing freely on the open seas. Khalix enjoys life having decided since he only has one he is going to take it as far as he possibly can and then some.

Khalix is loyal to his crew mates and his friends and for that he is willing to push his body to the extreme to keep them safe even going it alone on occasion. His love of adventure is second only to his passion of Martial Arts and his desire to be the best. When facing off against opponents he doesn't care if they are stronger he refuses to stay down until he is knocked out cold. When facing against stronger opponents there is no hesitation in his attacks and treats it like any other fight; wanting to be the best has inspired him to push harder and if he loses well it just means he needs to keep pushing.

Khalix is the same when he is fighting as he is outside. The loud, zoned out, over energized kid. His attacks mix up causing his opponents to adapt quickly or get dropped under a stream of bone breaking punches and kicks, high energized acrobatic attacks and unorthodox combos. Khalix loves the fight but not enough to put his friends in danger. Khalix never stops pushing and when his friends are in trouble he uses every ounce of strength and skill to do what is necessary to save them.

Hometown: Karate island (South blue)

History: Khalix Khan was born on karate island; both parents were martial artists and ran their own school. A son was their gift and as he grew he learned, first by watching and than by doing. His parents began training him at the age of six where he started in the childs section learning stances, katas, forms, and how to punch, kick, and block. His training was with ten other students being trained by his parents and while he was given exra lessons he was not given special treatment.

Khalix went up from the childs classes to the young adults classes with his fellow students and earned his yellow belt than his orange and purple following all in a two years time. His parents taught several styles of martial arts in their dojo and Khalix learned his top three favorite. He competed in tournaments for the dojo apart of a team and earned several awards and won three junior championships.

His second passion came out when a traveler arrived on the island to do a interview on Karate Island. The man was a journalist but he was also a pirate, Khalix became entranced of his ship and spent hours sitting on the docks looking at it. He was invited aboard by some crew members and shown around the ship, he was fascinated with the structure and feeling of the waves under the ship.

On his tour he stopped by some maps and leaned down seeing all the places that the man had visited and explored and a feeling awoke deep inside him, one of adventure and curiosity. On his way home he stopped by a shop that sold maps and books on adventures. His life buckled down to Martial arts during the day and learning about adventures at night. His obsession with the sea did nothing to interfere with his training for being the best fighter was still his core being.

At seventeen years of age Khalix was finally skilled and strong enough to make his own way, he set back his dreams of owning his own dojo one day for a new dream. To be a great pirate and maybe one day the most powerful martial artist in the world. He said good bye to his parents and hopped aboard a ship to the island where pirate dreams started.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Khalix has mastered a martial style called the nine paths. A style that uses the entire body to fight with. Hands, feet, legs, knees, elbows, arms, head. The style focuses on a mix of heavy and swift strikes depending on the situation. Mixed attacks at different speeds designed to be random. The style also includes throws, counters, and locks.
Weaponry: N/A
Items: Carries a brown leather satchel that holds all his doctor equipment.
Beli: 5,400,000
Upkeep: 0
SD Earned: 40
Stat Points: 67
SD Remaining: 0
Stats: 67
  • Used for Stats:67
  • Used for Fortune: 5

    • Strength: 26
    • Speed: 22
    • Stamina: 14 (8+6)
    • Accuracy: 14
    • Fortune: 11
Traits: Advanced Martial Art Mastery [Fists] (2 Traits) – The character masters their style of fighting to the level that very few can best them. All techniques which are based on the central theme of this style are raised two ranks for free, and the maximum rank for techniques involving this theme is three higher than the natural maximum


Fate of the Mighty [2 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your stamina stat.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N?A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:16
Used Regular Technique Points:16
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Techniques
Heavy punch 6 (4+2)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: None
Description: A right hook that is stronger than a standard punch.



Techniques
Strong Kick 4
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: None
Description:A roundhouse kick that delivers more physical punishment than your average kick.



Techniques
Hard throw 4
Type: Offensive
Range: close
Stats: None
Description: Khalix grabs his enemy and uses a strong shoulder throw to either throw his enemy in a direction or to slam the person to the ground.



Free lvl 4 technique
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Techniques
Kaio-ken 4
Type: Supplement
Range: Self
Stats: +2 Strength (Himself only)
Description: Focuses his bodies energy and gives himself a slight strength bump. His right fist comes back so his palm is facing up, his left hand is set in a knife guard position, his left knee is bent forward and his foot is placed at the north position, his right leg is straight but bent just slightly with his foot placed at the east position.




Techniques
Pain Palm 6 (4+2)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: None
Description: A heavy palm strike aimed for the chest or face of an enemy. The palm does more physical damage than a simple strike.




Development History
Gains/Losses: 15sd Murder she wrote http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5169947/3/#new. of booty and bounty hunters 1 SD http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5542688/4/#new. Sailing and stuff 4sd http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5505328/2/#new. Supplies where art thou 3 SD http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5187995/1/#new. Lost and confused.. another day as a pirate 8 SD http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5242567/2/#new. The Fall of Troy and Dante's Inferno 1 SD http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5154887/3/#new. Two kids in the big city 8sd http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5158726/2/#new.
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Required Changes

  • Take out this sentence next to "Bounty" section: Applicable only to Pirates. Delete otherwise.

  • Please omit the following italicized sentence from your secondary profession as it only applies to primary professions: "Anyone travelling the Grand Line without a Navigator will be at the mercy of the moderators in their journeys."

  • Please add more to 'clothing/accessories'

  • I would say omit this sentence "Years of punching wood, brick, stone, bamboo, cinder, bronze, iron, and steel have left scars but hardened his bones." If you realize that this is just 'flavor text' then it should be fine though. It takes at least a rank 14 to even pierce iron.

  • Put a "Blue" or location next to where he was born (East Blue, West Blue, etc) next to the karate island.

  • SD remaining: 0

  • Blocks are rank 8

  • Your free martial arts buff works like this: You are in a stance and as long as you are in that stance you get the buff. Please add that or incorporate it someway into your free rank 4 (also please label it somewhere as (free rank 4)

Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! ::beli:: 310,000,000

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Done and done, Also the punching stuff is just for flare.
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  • Your martial arts buff has to be a stance, you can move around a bit like "bending your knees and raising your arms in a fighting stance". Stuff like that rather than what you have right now.

  • You can't use 6 for your fortune, you can use in increments of 5 which give you an output of 3 to your fortune. You may also only use 25% of your stat points on your fortune. As such, you can only use 5 stat points and it would only give you a boast of 3 stat points.

  • Your Fortune is the average of your four stats (strength, speed, stamina, and accuracy). As such, please fix up your TP's and your stat points.

  • Put more than 'body' as weaponry, say he fights with his hands, legs, etc.

  • minor thing but technique type wouldn't be 'physical' but rather it would be 'offensive, defensive, or supplementary'. In terms of stat boasting = supp, and attacking = offensive.

Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! ::beli:: 310,000,000

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IZUMI - 泉


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  • Used for Fortune is 0

  • No Special Technique Points

  • Please put N/A for everything in the Devil Fruit Section.

  • Is Chi force your martial arts buff? It will last as long as you're in the stance.

  • Bounty: N/A

  • Rest should be okay.
Edited by ShadowBlade, Jun 10 2013, 10:11 AM.

Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! ::beli:: 310,000,000

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IZUMI - 泉


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Done and yes chi force is his buff.
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Put a note in the title of Chi Force that it is a free rank 4.

Fill in Style of Choice:
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Advanced Martial Art Mastery [Style of choice
It should not be all encompassing for the bonus, so choose which attacks get the bonus ranks like Kicks or punches or grabs.

Take "Fists, knees, legs, head, elbows, forearms, basically his whole body is a weapon" out of Weaponry as it applies to non body weapons. If you have no weapons put N/A.

Take "Navigators will have the skills to navigate the Grand Line" off of Navigator as it is part of the professional bonus.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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Done, does this mean I can't navigate the grand line?
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You can navigate around the route that you're on. But you can't switch routes without the primary profession or the chartmaster trait.

Please write the rank of Chi Punch as 6 (4+2) to reflect the free ranks.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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Done. Alright so I need to get the sea chart trait later.
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Good.

Your character has been approved.

From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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Munchvengers - Oprp's Haxest Heroes; House Cup Tournament - Who will Win
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Edits made. Ready for a flag.
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Please update your professions.

Remove Upkeep and add the Advancements section.

Advanced Mastery requires 100 SD minimum, as described within the traits section.

32+40 =/= 67, please edit Stat Points. It should be 62.

For Items, I don't imagine he needs any doctor equipment due to the fact that he isn't a doctor anymore.

Please update all techniques.
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