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Topic Started: Jun 6 2013, 08:32 PM (439 Views)
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Character: Valkyrie
Request: New Techs
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Techniques
Storm Cutter - 14 + 2 = 16 (Branched from Wind cutter)
Type: Attack
Range: Short- mid
Stats:
Description: Valkyrie slashes even faster, the resulting shockwave becoming extremely fast itself.
Gale Cutter - 18 + 2 = 20 (Branched from Storm Cutter)
Type: Attack
Range: Short- mid
Stats:
Description: Valkyrie sends out a flurry of slashes, each releasing one of her high speed shockwaves
Ignition - 16 + 2 = 18
Type: Attack/Support
Range: Swords
Stats:
Description: By slashing her blades across a solid surface, Valkyrie can gather enough friction to make the Red Sand in her blades become incredibly hot, adding a burning quality to her attacks that will light flammable stuff on fire and melt right through iron. Left alone, the blades will eventually cool down in three posts.
Edited by Darkoda, Jun 24 2013, 12:52 PM.
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Just because read sandglass easily collects heat and retains it doesn't mean it's just going to be able to lol burn through iron. What you're looking at right now is melting it through prolonged contact, and even then it would take awhile. Slashing at iron and just straight through melting it wouldn't make any sense.

Going to discuss it in WC though, so let's just wait a bit
Edited by RainingBlades, Jun 6 2013, 11:16 PM.
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Might seem a little overly picky but you can only branch into a gatling from a technique that is specifically speed based instead of power, wind cutter doesn't make this distinction so im gonna have to say no branch
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....The technique description says outright that the slash is formed from the speed the slashes at. What part of that isn't speed based?
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What he means is the technique your branching from needs to have its focus on speed, not on something like a shockwave. Something like "Joe thrusts his sword forward as fast as he can" branching into "Joe thrusts his sword forward several times at top speed, creatin a tattling effect." What you have is "Joe creates a shockwave" into "Joe creates a barrage of shockwaves"
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It's a shockwave fueled by pure speed, I really don't see how it's getting much more speed focused than that.

I don't see the difference between a speedy punch to a barrage of them, and a speedy shockwave to a barrage of them beyond one having more reach. Not to mention that going by that reasoning, you're telling me that one can't branch rankyaku or tobu shigan into gatlings because shockwave.

Even worse is that I'm getting this from the guy with a shockwave that most certainly sounds like sheer power that branches into what he told me is basically a condensed gatling. My own actually reads as being speedy from the getgo so I don't see what the problem is.
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There's a difference between doing speedy stuff to produce a shockwave and doing stuff to produce a speedy shockwave, the whole point of it being speed based is to make it clear it's a low power high rate of fire attack. That isn't present here, so no branch.
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Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

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Well you were right about it sounding overly nitpicky and hypocritical.....

Fine then, edited a bit. And what became of the whole whether or not Red Sand glass is a trap on the likes of WS primary discussion?
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im pretty fine with ignition, what with them being red sand glass and all. Anyways

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Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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