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Leo Stormborn; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Mar 25 2013, 06:13 PM (701 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Leo Stormborn
Nickname: White Tiger
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 0
Achievements: Killed the big white tiger that reigned over the forest in Dawn Island.
Profession: Primary ~Carpenter: A Carpenter is someone who makes a living off building things, from mainly but not limited to, wood. With the times being as they are, most carpenters build ships, but there are also those who instead possess the knowledge of making better buildings and such, as well as smaller items that they craft. Carpenters allow the crew to waive their ship maintenance costs. They will also get a 10% discount on any ships or ship upgrades that they buy.

Secondary ~Weapon Specialist: A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.

Position: Shipwright


Physical Appearance
Height: 1,79 meters
Weight: 85 Kg
Hair: Jet black hair, brushed to the side with one big strand falling between his eyes. His hair is a little longer than Luffy's.
Eyes: Blue average sized eyes
Clothing/Accessories: A matching Short Jacket with long sleeves and pants made from the skin of a white tiger. Under the Jacket he wears a black V-shirt hanging low to show a little of his chest. He also has a black leather belt and a golden belt buckle shaped like a tiger head. On his feet, he wears black leather boots.
General Appearance: Face ~prominent nose, lean chin, crooked eyebrows like Lucci’s and small mouth.

Upper body ~Muscular with a big scar made by tiger claws on the chest. Only half of which is visible under the V-shirt. And his chest is naturally hairless.

Lower body ~His feet are a tad bit bigger than normal, but his imposing thigh and tibia muscles make it seem normal.

Mannerisms ~He has this way of sitting in embarrassing poses without realizing it. And he always moves remarkably slowly unless he's in combat or doing some serious work requiring speed.

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The Character

Personality: He's a calm calculating guy, he doesn't trust anybody he just met, but he never shows it if he's suspicious either, by now he knows that even very good people get grossed out by someone who's too suspicious. He's used to betrayal, it doesn't surprise him much anymore. But he swore that he would not betray people, he prefers enemies he can take head on and friends he can turn his back on without worrying. When he's having fun with people, his natural side comes along and he laughs and plays and stuff, but when there isn't anything fun to do, he's pretty melancholic. His dream is to become the best swordsman in the world, and to see One Piece, it's not important if he's the captain or if he even has a big role to play, he just wants to be part of the winning team.

Hometown: Edge Town - Goa City - Dawn Island - Goa Kingdom - East blue

History: Edge Town ~Leo was born in The Edge Town of Goa City, the capital of Goa Kingdom. His mother died birthing him and his father was a smith. He worked beautiful works of art, which earned him a place inside the walls of Goa City. They had a carpenter neighbor who was always nice to Leo, and thought him basic tricks on how to handle wood. He was very old though, and died when Leo was 8. His father also died in a work shop accident when he was 10. Leo was then chased out of Goa City because he wasn’t productive as a base born child without parents. The twin swords that Leo carries around are his father’s inheritance, they are made of iron. They were the only things that he could save from his father’s possessions, and that was only because they were the worst ones. Those swords were made by his father only for practice purposes before he designed the actual twin swords which looked exactly like them, except that they were made of Steel with a lot more care. He always wanted to find the steel ones.

Goa forest ~When Leo found himself in Gray Terminal, he escaped to the forest to hide the swords until he trains enough to use them. There, he found a mysterious weird looking fruit that attracted his attention. After he hid his swords well, he found that he was so hungry that he ate it. To his surprise, he immediately transformed into a white tiger. Then, he lived in the forest for a while as a tiger, but the only other white tiger existing in that forest didn't like him, probably because he was a threat to his rein over the forest, so he picked on him and chased him out of places in the forest by force. To continue living there in peace, Leo began cutting trees in an area and built for himself a wooden cabin, continued living there and training at mastering his transformations and his swords until he became able to fight the other big white tiger equally and ended up killing him. He then made clothes out of his skin and finally decided to go back to a normal human life. By then, he was thirteen.

Foosha Village ~After he left the forest, he stumbled on Foosha village, where he heard tales of the admirable east blue pirates who conquered east blue and even GL without being inconvenient to any citizens ever. But the tale which caught his attention most wasn't that of Luffy, nor that of Shanks, but that of Zoro: Luffy's loyal first mate. When he heard his story, it spoke to him more than all others. He clutched both his swords then and swore to himself that he will become the world's best swordsman with his father's swords. He stayed in Foosha Village as an apprentice carpenter for a year, in the same shop Minatomo-san worked in 100 years ago. After the year ended, Leo was able to make a small ship with which he traveled in east blue for a while alone.

Shimotsuki Village ~He spent a year in east blue as a wanderer. The next place he settled in for a long period of time was the Grand Dojo in Shimotsuki Village where he learned the basics of the sword from the hands of actual trained swordsmen. After three years passed, he went back to Foosha village to prepare entering Goa City once again. His adventure is going to start the day he turns 18.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Swordsmanship. He’s very focused and disciplined when fighting. He can also be a tad too proud of his abilities, which leads to small slips in discipline, but that often only happens if the opponent is clearly weak, so he gets away with it in the end. When the opponent is challenging however, he's very focused and takes every movement he can see his opponent do into consideration. His environment doesn't interest him much when fighting, he prefers the straight way of going about things, but he doesn't get irritated if he faces an opponent who likes round about strategies. In fact, he actually enjoys crushing every plan they come up with with simple direct reactions.

Weaponry: Twin swords of Iron quality, They look like this:
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Items: Carpenter tool box containing a hammer, nails, a wood chisel, rope and needles

Apology Point
 
Each member in the topic received an Apology Point. These points are compensation for waiting so long for Blades Tengu to grade this storyline (stupid narrators thinking they're so high and mighty...." and can be used to have Blades Tengu prioritize one of your next storylines (unless someone else has already taken it up). All members with Apology Points in the topic, however, have to spend them, so no forcing Blades Tengu to prioritize four different storylines with this same crew >:

Beli: 2,700,000
Upkeep: N/A
SD Earned: 9
Stat Points: 41
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 41
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 10
    • Speed: 10
    • Stamina: 10
    • Accuracy: 11
    • Fortune: 10
Traits:

  • Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of the Paramecia, Zoan or Logia type.
  • In-Training (1 Trait) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Neko Neko no Mi: Model Tiger
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: Allows the user to transform partially or completely into a white tiger.
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Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 20
Used Regular Technique Points: 8
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Full Zoan Transformation (4-free)
Type: Supportive
Range: Melee
Stats: +3 Strength,
+2 Speed,
+3 Stamina,
+2 Accuracy
Description: Leo becomes a full white tiger standing on all four. In this form, he's as strong as a tiger, but he can't profit from the practicality of a humanoid body.

Hybrid Zoan Transformation (4-free)
Type: Supportive
Range: Melee
Stats: +3 Strength,
+2 Speed,
+2 Stamina,
+3 Accuracy
Description: Leo becomes a white tiger standing only on two legs. He keeps his human chin and his hair cut, though his hair gets significantly longer. He also keeps 5 fingers or toes on each limb instead of just 4 like a tiger would have. In this form, he becomes as strong as a tiger, but he can also profit well from the convenience of having a humanoid body. His height is 2,1 meters.

Tiger Hunt (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Leo puts both his swords at his sides as if sheathing them, or they are initially sheathed. Then he draws both of them in a maximum speed cross upper cut while advancing with his entire body. This is the technique he used to kill the big white tiger of the Goa forest. Hence the name. (even though the name is a rip off from Zoro XD!)

Tiger Block (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Leo crosses his swords in front of an attack and makes a sudden instant push with his entire body right before the attack touches his swords. The push gives him extra momentum to block stronger moves than what he would be able to block without it. Offensive techniques with Higher strength and/or higher rank will be able to go through the block.


Development History
Gains/Losses:
- Nostalgia - 9 SD, 2,200,000 beli and Tengu's appology point.
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Edited by Franky, Jan 11 2014, 07:37 AM.
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★ Combat could use a little more description. In cases like a duel, does he keep track of his opponent's movements and devise plans or does he attack like a rampaging rhino? Does he use his environment to his advantage or does he not care where he fights?

★ Your Full Zoan and Hybrid Transformations do not have the same stats distributed. You are free to mix them up and change the order according to what your preferences. This won't hold you back from anything, though.

★ Remove the part about 'unbalancing the opponent' - that's rank 8 territory.

You also have an empty technique row, but that's not too big of a deal.
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Fixed.

I changed them slightly, but i wanna keep them close to each other in the beginning until he develops his style more.

Fixed?
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Note that enemies of higher strength/higher ranking techniques with techniques are able to go through the block.

Other than, that everything is fine.


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I clarified the defensive technique: Tiger block more by adding that techniques that involve more strength or have more rank can beat it.
Edited by Franky, Mar 28 2013, 01:06 PM.
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Special tech points and used special tech points shoul both be 0.

Does he wear any footwear? If so mention it in Clothing.
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Fixed.

Added boots and description of the belt and altered the color of his V-shirt to match them.
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Good.

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From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

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