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Echo Dulcis; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Mar 13 2013, 12:12 PM (615 Views)
Vaz
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Basic Character Information
Name: Echo Dulcis
Nickname: N/A
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 0
Achievements: None
Profession:
Primary: Doctor
Description
Secondary: Merchant
Description
Position: Surgeon


Physical Appearance
Height: 1.58 m
Weight: 44 kg
Hair: Echo's hair is a rather average purple -as far as purple is an average color for hair- in color. it's fairly short, hanging around her ears in a slightly messy fashion, if well-kept. Her hair is parted slightly right across the middle, leaving the bangs to perfectly frame her face. She has a messy, small bun on the back of her head, earning her the nickname "Pineapple Head".
Eyes: Large and round, her left eye is purple in color, similar to her hair. Her right eye is nonexistent.
Clothing/Accessories: Echo has several outfits, but one is her absolute favorite, a school girl's uniform. It consists of what looks like the top of a suit, with blazer, gray neck tie, purple dress shirt, and everything. However, underneath, she wears a black shirt with purple frills and a pair of tall black boots, reaching to her knees. She wears a black eye patch, too. in her left ear she has an earring consisting of four purple crystal bangles. It's something she's had for a long time and cherishes very much.
General Appearance: One thing people will notice about Echo is that her entire body seems to be perfectly preserved. Except for her lack of a right eye, a glaring mistake, there is not one blemish on her skin, no scars or scratches. Her skin is slightly pale, and her face shows the kind of beauty that will carry on into her later years. She's slender, but not emaciated. Her chest and hips aren't incredibly curvy and never will be, but it adds to her seemingly fragile beauty. Though she's short and seems almost child-like, she's definitely a girl who can turn some heads if she wants to, something she is definitely aware of and will make use of if she has to.

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The Character
Personality: Echo is a generally kind girl, not really seeking to cause chaos or to harm people despite being a pirate, more out there to find treasure and see the world. She also doesn't always agree with the Marines' sometimes overly strict ways. Her parents also raised her as pirates and conmen. All these factors came together into her choice to become a pirate rather than a bounty hunter.

Her kindness extends to almost everyone. If they are wounded and she doesn't know them, she will generally try to patch them up, even if it's just basic first aid. Don't be mistaken, though. If you stand in her way, she'll put a bullet through your head before you can say "Gee, I hope I'm not shot in the face by a little girl."

Echo was trained for manipulation and white-collar crime, so she is a great actor, even capable of crying at will, holding to her motto of "A woman's greatest weapons are her tears". She's also kind of short-fused, going so far as to mess up stitches so a wound heals with a nasty scar on purpose. She can also be very jealous, adding to her anger. She is also a glutton, but somehow manages to stay skinny.

Hometown: Aokuchi Island, North Blue
History:
Echo was born on Aokuchi Island before the cataclysmic events that took it. Her parents were pirates, but well-known and rich ones. They had decided to settle on Aokuchi to swindle people in need of medical assistance. Her mother was a merchant-turned-criminal who slowly progressed from the occasional con to downright stealing, and her father had been the doctor in her crew, an expert in his field.

Both taught their daughter to help around in their clinic. She had an accident at five, though, in the clinic, involving a scalpel and a roll of paper on the floor. In the end, her eye had to be removed, but outside of this, no real negative influences have affected her life. Most of the time, they were fair doctors, who treated people correctly and lived off that. However, once in a while, they picked out a customer and pretty much robbed him naked. If he couldn't pay, he often mysteriously disappeared, and they'd say he succumbed from illness.

Once she was 16 years old, she had mastered both her parents' professions, but she specialized in that of her father. She had been raised around conmen, pirates, thieves, the scum of society, but also marines who came to the clinic for help, honest people, and just your run-of-the-mill civilians. She had learned how to manipulate, but also the importance of honesty.

Deciding life with her parents had no more to offer, she decided to strike out for herself. Her parents were happy, and decided to take up roaming the sea again as well, stating it had been too long. They left at the same day, Echo on her own, her parents together with some old friends. She was going to make a name for herself in this world.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Echo prefers to stick to the back of the line, using ranged weapons rather than melee ones. She's calculating, and is capable of quick, rational decisions. She's actually very reluctant to go on the close range, having little to no experience with fighting with bare hands on the front lines. Should she be pushed, however, she will improvise with her knowledge of human anatomy to do her very best not to get killed. She mainly focuses on hitting weak points with 'surgical' dexterity.
Weaponry:
Arms & Armor
Items:
Inventory
Beli: 500,000
Upkeep: 5,000
SD Earned: 2
Stat Points: 34
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 34
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 7
    • Speed: 10
    • Stamina: 8
    • Accuracy: 18 (9+9)
    • Fortune: 8
Traits:
Fate of the Cunning [3 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your accuracy stat.

Tough Bargainer (1 Trait) – Ever the successful businessman, merchants know how to extract money from people and to keep as much as they can from leaving their pocket. Thus, they will always earn 25% more Beli in their Storylines.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 16
Used Regular Technique Points: 12
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
"Squirt" - 4
Type: Offensive (Poison)
Range: Melee
Stats: None
Description:
The user injects a dose of a poison called "Squirt" into the opponent. They will feel a painful burning sensation on the skin of the body part where the poison is injected. Lasts 3 posts and has a 3 post cooldown. Limited to 5 doses a thread unless more are made.

"Strong" - 4
Type: Supportive (Drug)
Range: Item Possession
Stats: +2 Strength
Description:
The user pops a pill -or hands it out- to increase strength. Lasts 3 posts and has a 3 post cooldown. Limited to 5 doses a thread unless more are made.

Surgical Shot - 4
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: None
Description:
Echo stops shooting and takes a few seconds to steady her aim, and then takes a prepared, accurate shot at the opponent.


Development History
Gains/Losses:
Saint Paddy's... Patty's Day Bash - 2 SD
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Edited by Vaz, Mar 22 2013, 04:14 PM.
Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: -

Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo
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RainingBlades
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Very good for a first app, just some technique things

Squirt is going to have the same duration and cooldown as regular technique buffs even though it doesn't debuff (though you could make it).

Speaking of durations and cooldowns, actaully type out the whole "lasts for three posts then cannot be used for three posts" thing instead of just saying "standard d/cd". When you reference the techs in your SLs it'll make it easier for the grader to read/understand

Instead of saying +66%, say + 2 (which is 66% of 4 rounded down)

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Vaz
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Done and done and done.
Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: -

Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo
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Emoisum
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Upkeep of like, 5,000 for the rifle.

You should probably throw +2 Accuracy to the Surgical Shot- taking time to aim and all.

Some more to the General Appearance and Clothes. Just go all flavor and stuff.
LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
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Vaz
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Added, added, added.
Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: -

Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo
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I'm a bit iffy on the +2 accuracy bonus to surgical shot; it seems like something that wouldn't have been allowed last time I was a mod -- about a year ago. However, I'll still flag and let the next mod who comes in here either yay or nay it.

Topic is flagged for approval.
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treize
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If Nya is iffy to Surgical Shot, I'll follow suit. No to the accuracy boost of Surgical Shoot.

Add a few more sentences of combat.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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Vaz
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Done
Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: -

Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo
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treize
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Good.

Your character has been approved.

From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
Wizardbeard and other characters
Scooped Characters: Kove
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