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| Vaz | Mar 13 2013, 09:09 AM Post #1 | ||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Vaz Basic Character Information Name: Ren Reitfoze Nickname: Red Ren Age: 21 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 0 Achievements: None Profession: Primary: Smith Description Secondary: AssassinDescription Position: None Physical Appearance Height: 1.87m Weight: 78 kg Hair: Ren has verdant green hair that hangs around his ears. It's as messy as messy gets, somehow resisting any kind of hair product he puts in it. Not that he bothers a lot, as he has reached a point in life where he's absolutely stopped giving a crap. Eyes: His eyes, slightly slanted and always shining with alertness, are green in color, though the shade seems to change with the light, shifting as he turns his head, even different whenever he blinks. Clothing/Accessories: Ren wears an outfit that we would describe as military, though it is very different from the Marines' uniform. It consists of a black t-shirt, as plain as a shirt can get, with a camouflage print coat over it. The coat has a high collar and hangs down to the knees, in Ren's case. The inside consists of orange-ish red cloth. He wears a simple brown belt to keep the forest-green pants up, and to protect his feet and make walking easier (a lot more than walking barefoot) he wears a pair of heavy military boots. He also possesses a pair of dog tags with his name on it. Sometimes he wears a green beret and/or a pair of black gloves with open back. He also always carries a pencil and a notepad with him to 'speak'. General Appearance: Ren, at first look, is rather lanky. No bulging muscles, no toned body, seemingly little structure in his body, like his wrists have been replaced with cotton thread. However, do not be mistaken. A nasty amount of muscle hides under that skin, and around those thin bones. More than one person has thought him a weakling and ended up on the floor with an angry welt on their head because they thought to piss him off. Image The Character Personality: Ren is, at first look, a rather creepy person. Though he is not deaf, he is entirely mute, due to brain damage. He is entirely incapable of producing a voice, though some sound can be heard under certain situations where air leaves his lungs. The thing is, he doesn't bother to respond to people talking to him most of the time, because he can't. Most of the time, he takes his merry time reaching down, patting around to find his notepad and pencil, then taking a few moments to think of what exactly to say, before he does pen it down and hold it up to the person who is trying to talk to him. Ren's a pretty strange guy. He has an incredibly morbid, dark sense of humor, being a man who thoroughly enjoys his schadenfreude. Pain in others is generally something he can laugh at, and where other men would cringe at ball shots, he would be on the ground in soundless laughter. This also means he enjoys inflicting these wounds, being rather cruel and dark in nature. He also generally shuns human contact, unless for work. However, Ren also has a kind side. Though rare to see it, Ren has an affinity for animals, and the other sex. While men will generally receive the cold shoulder from the green-haired man, he can be quick to befriend women. Being simply human, Ren is also definitely not immune to falling in love, though it has yet to happen to him. Due to the damage he gained to his brain, anything before the attack is very vague to him and he remembers no names. Hometown: Shell Town, East Blue History: Ren is the child of a male pirate, a guy who didn't really have a lot of bounty on his head but enough to get some bounty hunters after him, and a female bounty hunter, who in her own way wasn't much either. Ren was, as a youth, trained to fight. This was a dangerous world, as his father, as ex-pirate, ensured him, but his mother, the bounty hunter, also wanted her child not to be in the way of danger all the time, and instead taught him the art of smithing. His father had been taken captive and did his time in jail, during which he decided to double-cross his old crew (whose fault it was that he got captured in the first place) to get a lower sentence. That came back to bite them in the ass, in the end. the age of 14, Ren's home was attacked by the remnants said pirate crew. During the attack both his parents were killed, and a pirate tapped the child out of his way with a club. However, it had been a suicide attack, the assault of men driven by vengeance and anger. All of them were afterwards taken captive or killed by the marines, who found the bodies of Ren's parents, and the child himself. He awoke from the coma he had landed in about a year later in a hospital, surrounded by doctors. He had sustained heavy brain damage, and his neck had been crushed from behind. Only through a one-in-a-million shot of luck and a lot of medical attention, his neck had been restored, but the soft tissue of the vocal cords had been thoroughly damaged and scarred, they no longer functioned. He had also sustained damage to his brain, leaving him unable to remember his youth. He barely remembered a handful of vague details. He remembered how to fight. He remembered what his parents had been. He knew how to smith fine weapons. After several years of care in the hospital, he set out as a Bounty Hunter, heart hardened, armed, and angry, to find who had killed his parents. He refused the offer to become a marine, since bounty hunters could go more places, but kept good relations with the World Government. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Ren is a vicious fighter, not hesitating to close up and go mano a mano with even the biggest enemies. Being brain damaged, his sense of risk is worse than most, so he has a tendency to be reckless. He is also a cruel fighter to those weaker than him, often attempting to inflict as many wounds as he can without killing them. As cliche as this sounds, Ren is a true psycho in a fight. Weaponry: Weapons Items: N/ABeli: 500,000 Upkeep: None SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Fate of the Strong [3 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your strength stat. Natural Armour (1 Trait) – Through all the time spent in the forge, working on weapons, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained skin that is literally as tough as wood, making them much more resistant to physical damage.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 8 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: None Edit Log: Log
Edited by Vaz, Mar 14 2013, 02:06 PM.
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Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: - Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo | |||||||
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| Nero | Mar 13 2013, 10:44 AM Post #2 | ||||||
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- For threat put "0" instead of "Rookie" - For hometown, please list something. Maybe Ren doesn't remember his hometown, but we still require you to list a hometown/island. - "Only through a one-in-a-million shot of luck and the application of a certain devil fruit, his neck had been restored..." Please elaborate on this. Which devil-fruit, how was it applied and who was using it? - Put 32 in "Stat Points" - Put 0 in "Used for fortune" (However, Fortune stays at 8) - Hammer and Anvil, since the aim is to also damage the person's eardrums, would be at a higher rank, like rank 8. However if you just remove the line about trying to damage the eardrums, it can work as a rank 4. So either remove the tech until you can use rank 8 techs, or rewrite it. I think that's it. |
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| Vaz | Mar 13 2013, 11:22 AM Post #3 | ||||||
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Edits made. | ||||||
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Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: - Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo | |||||||
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| Nero | Mar 13 2013, 11:32 AM Post #4 | ||||||
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- Next to Shell Town, add in "East Blue". Just so we're all clear where it is and it's not another Shell Town out in the Grand Line or something. We just have to be nitpicky like that sometimes. However, that's only a very minor issue so I'll flag you for approval~ Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♥ treize | Mar 14 2013, 09:36 AM Post #5 | ||||||
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Put his Knife in Weaponry instead of Items. The thing about his history is that even if he cannot remember parts, the history is told by you not him. So while his memory is spotty, this history should not be. |
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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island ♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88 Wizardbeard and other characters Scooped Characters: Kove Chat Aliases Munchvengers - Oprp's Haxest Heroes; House Cup Tournament - Who will Win | |||||||
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| Vaz | Mar 14 2013, 02:07 PM Post #6 | ||||||
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Ren Reitfoze • N/A • Smith/Assassin • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: - Echo Dulcis • (Soon to be) Surgeon • Doctor/Merchant • (Soon to be) Dauntless Pirates • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue, South Amerigo | |||||||
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| ♥ treize | Mar 14 2013, 02:09 PM Post #7 | ||||||
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Good. Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island ♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88 Wizardbeard and other characters Scooped Characters: Kove Chat Aliases Munchvengers - Oprp's Haxest Heroes; House Cup Tournament - Who will Win | |||||||
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