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| Nary | Mar 4 2013, 08:27 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Artsy Lurker
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Nary Basic Character Information Name: Jager Foon Nickname: Hitman Age: 26 Gender: Male Race: Long Arm Tribesman Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 30 Achievements: - Took down the A.P.I.S. syndicate - Defeated Gerscrew the Savage - Hunted down Mr. Catty Profession: Chef A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients. With a chef on board, food upkeep costs are waived for the entire crew. They can also create foods which affect those who eat it, strengthening them. Assassin The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge, as well as skills with a small weapon such a dagger. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight. Position: Head Chef/Hitman Physical Appearance Height: 5’10 Weight: 165lbs Hair: Jet Black Eyes: Brown Clothing/Accessories: Jager dons a red sleeveless shirt adorned with white ‘akatsuki’ clouds with thick black outlines. His arms are wrapped with bandages up to his biceps. He wears a pair of dark grey pants with the words ‘PIRATE’ and ‘HUNTER’ printed in each leg and a pair of rustic brown boots. Jager also sports a pair of orange tinted shades. General Appearance: Jager has a typical hooligan-ish look to him; a pair of pointy, 45 degrees eyebrows, a lightning scar running from the top of his right brow down to his cheek, he sports an arrow shaped goatee beneath his zig-zagged mouth and a pair of long lightning-shaped sideburns. Jager wears his long jet black hair in lightning shaped cornrows and ties the end of it into four zig-zagged shaped ponytails. As a member of the longarm tribe, jager has the typical ‘double elbow’ look, his physique is moderately built for his height. Jager Foon The Character Personality: One word and only one word best describes Jager, reckless. His main philosophy in life is that if you don’t risk something you never gain anything. As they say you only get what you deserve. Although Jager seems to have misinterpreted the phrase it with the word risk. He believes that in life, to discover innovative ideas one would always take the riskiest route and never play it safe. Because safe is boring, and safe if overused. Jager is a man of the kitchen; he loves to eat but more importantly, he loves to cook. His favourite dishes are usually, what he terms as ‘ultra spicy’ a notch above regular spiciness. Even when cooking he applies his principle and creates crazy recipes from almost any ingredient possible. One good point about Jager is that he always seems to carry an air of confidence in himself and seldomly second guesses in his actions; once he’s decoded there isn’t anything in the world that could stop him. But this longarm tribesman will listen to what his comrades have to say and will abide a consensus if he is within a group, but mostly he’ll still do what he wants to do never the less. He often contradicts himself in this matter. Through his time as a bounty hunter, Jager has developed an abrasive, almost gangster-like personality as he quickly learned from his rookie days that being nice and polite would not get you anywhere within the bounty hunter circle. Intimidation sometimes is key to gain respect and information in the pubs, street thugs would get out of the way from just seeing Jager bat an eyelash. Being top dog means being first to quality information and news, and to a bounty hunter, those are priceless. Being tough and gritty has its merits, but there are also downsides, some people do not like being growled upon and respond with equal intimidation which may result in a fist-fight and Jager is one never to back down to a challenge, if it is to instill his superiority in the pecking order he'd gladly flex a few muscles to move up a notch from the rest. Hometown: Greensland, South Blue History: Jager grew up in a small, run downed and forgotten temple in Greensland South Blue. The temple was said to have once been a prestigious martial arts school where the legendary Brooks Mee trained and eventually developed the Meets Kung Dough fighting style which propelled the martial artist to his legendary status. However years after the untimely death of Brooks Mee the temple has failed to produce any other note worthy martial artist and thus caused it to face harder times. One by one the students fled to other more established schools which left the temple with the original monks who stayed at the temple and a handful of loyal students, amongst them was Jager who truly idolized Brooks Mee. Jager came from a family of farmers who lived just across the hill side, everyday Jager would come over after tending to his family’s farm, bringing crops as his compensation fee in order to train in the temple. The monks were very kind to Jager and as well as the few remaining students. He trained with all hopes to one day gain the same level of skill is idol, Brooks Mee attained and show the world that the temple was not a has-been school who just happened to be the place where a legendary martial artist trained. As time passed by, Jager became more and more adept in fighting and his training, combined with farm work only sped up his progress. It was around the age of eight when he stumbled upon a great discovery which would change his life forever; while cleaning the room where Brooks Mee lodged, Jager accidentally dropped a heavy box of cleaning materials on the wooden floor panels which broke upon collision. At first Jager freaked out crying his wits out that he has permanently damaged his idol’s room, but as he ran around the room, he tripped over the very same box he dropped to the floor. Lying down on the floor made his realize that there seemed to be a small chest hidden beneath the floor. Curious about the chest and its contents, Jager brought the chest to the temple monks and gathered the other students and together they opened the chest. The contents were something they had not expected. Various scrolls and hand written notes by Brooks Mee himself were found; amongst them were a book which housed the martial artist secrets to building the ‘ideal’ body for combat. It was then they discovered that eating the right food has a large part of becoming stronger. The sudden realization of what they were lacking breathed a wind of new life for the members of the temple. They were soon hitting the kitchen floor devising new ways to prepare food, each had their own interpretation of the written text in Brooks Mee’s notes and each found their own way to reach their end goal. For Jager, he found that using hot spices worked best and kept him alert and on his toes, as such he developed dishes that revolved around using tongue scorching ingredients. The effects of eating better food were clearly apparent as they soon felt stronger, faster and overall, better. After training and cooking for ten years, at the age of eighteen, Jager began to see his limits within the island and began to sought out other exotic ingredients and as well as to test and see for himself how far has he progressed as a fighter. He traveled the Blues risking limbs and all just to acquire what he wants and turning a few heads around in the process. three years into his voyage, Jager learned that a crew of pirates apparently raided Greensland and amongst the stolen items were Brooks Mee’s notes. Furious about the theft, Jager vowed to stop at nothing in order to retrieve the notes which led him to his career as a Bounty Hunter. In the three years as a bounty hunter, Jager has come across a few leads to the whereabouts of the prized notes, leading him to bust a syndicate circle known as the A.P.I.S. or the Awesome Pirates in Suits but unfortunately, the lead turned out to be a false lead. Other exploits involves Gerscrew the Savage who monopolized cook books in one town so that he himself would be able to cook good food and another was hunting down the elusive Mr. Catty who was a renown sales agent for stolen goods, both leads were also bust. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Jager has trained in the art of Meets Kung Dough, a type of martial arts that only teaches you the basics and allows the student his own interpretation of the style. Jager’s style revolves heavily around utilizing his long arms to grab, punch, jab and strike his opponents from mid range with blinding hand speed and hawk-like accuracy designed to ‘chip-away’ his opponent defences to ensure that he can land the killing blow. He technically uses the Hitman stance in conjunction with his techniques to maximize his offensive options. Also a part of his arsenal are various recipes he has devised to help him in various situations. Weaponry: none Items: 1x Set of Cooking Utensils - An iron wok, iron pan, iron parring knife, iron serrated knife, iron chef's knife, iron ladle, iron spatula, wooden chopping board, wooden spoon and fork 1x Set of Basic Spices - salt, black pepper, white pepper, dried chili, curry powder, five spice, ginger, bay leaves, etc. 1x Bottle of Refillable Soy Sauce, Vinegar and Oyster Sauce 1x Small Leather Skin Notebook 2x Pen 1x Whetstone Beli: 58,200,000 Upkeep: 0 SD Earned: 187 Stat Points: 206 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Illogical Recklessness (1 Trait): These characters go out of their way to perform outrageously reckless actions with no regard for their own safety whatsoever to further achieve their goals. These characters’ gain special Technique Points that can only be used for reckless attacks; of the amount half their fortune and these characters cannot feel pain throughout the duration of the attack. Any damage received will be felt after. Nutritionist (1 Trait): Years and years of experience in preparing the finest of meals, using all the right ingredients has led to these chefs being able to create foods which will make those who eat it stronger, faster and better, without having to pay upkeep. Alternatively, they can also create food which is designed to hinder others. They gain special Technique Points that can only be used on this food, of the amount of half their fortune. Iron Chef (1 Trait): These characters are true master in the art of cooking; they are able to literally cook anywhere at amazing speeds. Iron Chefs also have a unique ability to turn gourmet dishes into weapons to aid them in battle. All techniques which are based on preparing food for combat purposes will get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for these techniques is two higher than the natural maximum. Fate of the Strong (5 Traits): When the character next earns a trait point, they gain X+1 trait points instead, where X is equal to the number of traits points spent. 3X is added to strength.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 102 Used Regular Technique Points: 76 Special Technique Points: 50[25][25] Used Special Technique Points: 34
Development History Gains/Losses: Scooped From Alexander Diablos Selling Ship for Scoop Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Nary, Mar 15 2013, 06:06 AM.
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Yuan | Mar 10 2013, 06:36 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I'm a little confused. Your Scoop link goes to Maximillion, not Alexander. Maximillion only has 14 ESD. Did you accidentally link to the wrong profile? Also, have you gotten blue approval for those custom traits? |
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| Nary | Mar 10 2013, 09:58 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fixed the scoop link, and Illogically Reckless is just a re-worded version of the Dare Devil Trait form the old Jager, Limber on the other hand is a new trait. I was under the assumption that mods do this work.
Edited by Nary, Mar 10 2013, 10:01 PM.
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Namine | Mar 11 2013, 11:35 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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★ From the looks of it, it appears as though you're not using a lot of SD. 32 + 150 + (37/1.5) = 206 SD. If you don't intend to use them, feel free to use the "SD Remaining" section. ★ You have a lot of fortune. Mind clearing that up? ★ The majority of the traits seem to work well. Limber is on iffy territory with me, but I should leave that to another moderator's discretion. ★ It appears you've used 76 Regular Technique Points, not 75. 14 + 14 + 8 + 14 + 13 + 13 = 76. ★ You've used 34 Special Technique Points, not 44. 14 + 8 + 4 + 8 = 34. ★ Upkeep is 0. Everything else is fine, I find your techniques to be quite amusing and interesting. Edited by Namine, Mar 11 2013, 01:30 PM.
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| Nary | Mar 13 2013, 04:15 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I always get something wrong with those stat calculations, lol. Anyway, I fixed everything up and dropped the Limber trait after some thinking. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Nero | Mar 13 2013, 11:23 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Well...whenever I eat something spicy, my poor cat tongue makes my eyes water -- in fact reducing my accuracy, but I guess I just suck so whatever ;~;. - You still have your SP listed as 219, make sure it's 206. - You goofed up on Hell's Soup #11, the buff should be +5 Strength since it's a rank 8, not +9. - For the branch of Rock Wheat into the net, the right way to write that out is (7+6+1) not (8+5+1), so please correct that, not that it would affect your TP used at all. - Your gain/losses is a bit weird in this line: "Changed Fortune from 11 to 187SD, :beli:61,500,000" I think there was a formatting error or something. It's at the top of the gains/losses seciton in the 1st paragraph. My biggest concern is that, after adding up the beli from Alexander and then the 28 Million from selling the boat, you should only have 58,200,000 Beli, but instead you have 61,500,000 listed. Can you help me figure out where you're getting an extra 3,300,000 Beli from? Edited by Nero, Mar 13 2013, 04:37 PM.
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| Nary | Mar 14 2013, 05:41 AM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Stupid math, got everything taken care off, hopefully. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠ RainingBlades | Mar 14 2013, 04:54 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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You have 51 fortune, so half of your fortune is 25. Ergo you only have 50 special tp points to spend (though you still have extra tp even with that). Double checked with Icy: At rank 14, you can pierce iron and crush it at around rank 20 and above. You definately cannot crush steel at rank 14. Your tech name is Hell's Soup #6, but it says it's #5 in the description. What? Like nya said, Hell's Soup #11 can only buff +5, not +8. |
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| Nary | Mar 15 2013, 06:08 AM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fixed the numbers, I adjusted Snake Bite to crush rocks, Hell's Soup #5 is the right soup and buff is now +5. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Nero | Mar 15 2013, 06:36 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠ RainingBlades | Mar 15 2013, 08:22 AM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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