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| Zeig | Feb 22 2013, 07:06 AM Post #1 | ||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Zeig Basic Character Information Name: Vicente De Saint III Nickname: Age: 21 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 Achievements: N/A Profession: ~Inventor An inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build explosives and battle engines if they have enough materials. Inventors don’t need to pay upkeep for their gadgets that they use in battle. They will also get a 20% discount on any technological upgrades they make to their own weapons. Bring it up with a moderator when upgrading to see if the discount applies. ~Thief The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either. ~Navigator The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job. ~Marksman The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. Position: N/A Physical Appearance Height: 6'0 Weight: 170 lbs Hair: Chestnut Brown Eyes: Green Clothing/Accessories: His usual attire consist of a black jacket, with a red lining inside, that reaches a little passed his knees. This jacket has a hood that he usually wears, but if the weather is hot he does remove it from time to time. The jacket has numerous buttons and pouches, he also wears a black mantle over this jacket. Sporting white slacks and black, knee high boots. One thing that never changes is his hat. This hat is a three cornered hat with the all sides folded inward. The hat is usually worn low in attempts to conceal his face during escapes. General Appearance: Vicente has a oval shaped head. His skin was silky and smooth making him look far younger then he was. Piercing almond-shaped eyes that are simply mesmerizing to most women, making them fall victim to his intrigue. A gallantly broad nose striped down his face. He almost always has pursed lips; as he is in thought most of the time. A beaming smile radiating from his mouth, despite his nature, makes this smile extremely misleading. He has a lustrous, medium length, chestnut brown colored full head of hair, reaching just above his shoulders, neatly parted down the middle. His body is well built accompanied by his broad shoulders. Always standing and sitting with the perfect posture of a well mannered gentleman. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Gifted with a silver tongue, Vicente is a smooth talker. He comes off as a well mannered and polite, but has an underlining of evil waiting to pounce his victim. Most won't take him for a thief considering his well groomed appearance and well mannered speech, but that second of hesitation is all he needs to rob you blind. While stealing, Vicente rarely uses anonymity or force, preferring to rely on his charisma, physical attractiveness, and clever misdirection to steal the most unobtainable objects, sometimes for his own support, but mostly for the thrill of the act itself. He has been known to sell almost anything to anyone, even his lies. Being very charismatic he can be very persuasive to get what he wants. Using his physical appearance to lure many women into his hands only to take everything they have. However, when he's not trying to rob someone, which is rare mind you, he is pretty laid back. Known to be quite loud at times while drinking with friends. Though his mind is always on stealing, he wouldn't rob people he trust and if he did, it would be to mess with them, returning it to them shorty after. Though he is quite intelligent, he tries to avoid confrontation at all times. He would rather escape then fight a single person. This is not to say he can't fight, he just doesn't find a reason to it if he doesn't benefit from it. There is a major flaw to him though, he would risk himself for something he just has to have, no matter what. Once he sets his eyes on something, he won't stop untill he gets it. Have it be treasure, money, or whatever it didn't matter. If he wanted it, he was taking it. Hometown: Mirrorball Island; East Blue History: Born to a wealthy family with a long lineage of wealthy descendants. Receiving the best education money could buy. He was always well groomed and well mannered since birth. Vicente always had everything he wanted, when he wanted it. Most would refer to him as a spoiled brat. Though at a young age he had an abrupt change of environment. At the age of 9 he was abandoned and forced to live alone in the slums. On a vacation with his family, Vicente was abandoned by his fleeing family to die. During an attempt to steal from his family he was abandoned for their own wealth and life. Leaving him behind, the thieves took all of the boy's possessions barely leaving him with clothes. He wandered the slums for weeks, half death from starvation he passed out. Never being alone or having to work for anything in his life he wasn't expected to survive. The thieves left him to die in the slums with no hope for him. But a young girl saved his life. This girl was around 13 and basically grew up in the slums. Her name was Fiora. She nursed the young boy back to health. Since finding him, she told him that from this day forward, he would be her little brother. She taught him the way to survive in this hell. They would steal everything they needed or could get their hands on. Fiora would use her seduction on the males as Vicente stole from them, as Vicente would put on his charm for the older ladies, making them feel bad for the kid as Fiora robbed them blindly. The pair were top notch at escaping. They evaded countless pursuers using routes most would never take. Climbing roofs, jumping from high places and otherwise unreachable places. Years passed and their crimes also aged with them. Vicente would rob just about anyone without them noticing. He would walk through crowds pick pocketing anyone foolish enough to get within arms reach. Fiora went her own way, leaving Vicente on his own. She pursued a more ambitous earning. She grew up into very attractive women and began to use this to her advantage. Vicente began to steal more and more even if he didn't need it. It was almost like he was trying to improve his skills or just for the sake of stealing. One day, however, he attempted to rob the wrong person. This man was a high caliber thief working for a mob organization. This man acknowledged Vicente's skills and offered him two options; death or work for them. He choosed the most obvious answer. Working for this mob, he had more resources. He began to learn more skills to help in his profession. Soon he became skilled enough to sell people their own stuff back to them after he had stolen it from them. He became extremely charming and was gifted with a silver tongue. At the age of 20 he began dealing with underworld trade. Finding out that his organization was just small fry in this world, he began to plan to rob them for everything they had. Months of planning and deception led up to the day he robbed them for all they had. Right under their nose everything was stolen and he vanished before they could even notice. Vicente took to the sea immediately after, deciding he'd become a pirate and begin stealing from every pirate, marine, or person that crosses his path. Abilities and Possessions Combat: More of a tactician than a fighter, Vicente rather escape than fight carelessly. His main goal is to always steal and run before anyone notices. That being said he is hard to catch, mainly relying on his freerunning capabilities to out run any pursuer. He is extremely agile and nimble. Though there are some times where he will fight for certain reasons. When this happens he uses his dagger using his agility and speed to move into close range striking and retreating at the same time, never staying still. In some occasions he will use his pistol if he needs to, but mainly as a scare tactic. His preferred weapon for range is a small throwing knife. Weaponry: - Iron Dagger - Iron Flintlock Pistol - x6 Iron Throwing Knives Items: - Lock Pick set - Pouch used for storing misc. items Beli: 400,000 Upkeep: 100,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist. Skill in Upgrades (1 Trait) – These fellows are amazing at what they do, such that they can do it for a much lower cost. All technological upgrades that they make to weapons get a 30% discount, and they are nice enough that this discount applies to their crew members as well. Pickpocket (1 Trait) – As a thief, the character is skilled at obtaining money by less-than-acceptable means. Thus, they will always earn 25% more Beli in their Storylines. Fate of the Swift [1 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of 3 to your speed stat.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 5 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: -100,000 Purchase of Throwing Knives Edit Log: Edited by Zeig, Mar 10 2013, 06:14 PM.
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| Vicente De Saint III • Navigator • Inventor/Thief/Navigator/Marksman • Renegade Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 400,000 • Location: East Blue. | |||||||
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| C0nMoney | Feb 25 2013, 12:19 PM Post #2 | ||||||
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First of all your smash and grab, it can either be split into two separate techniques or isn't acceptable. Your weapons, you can have them all but you'll have to pay. You can get any two of those items for free, but if you take 10 throwing knives i'll have to charge you about 60k. 6 counts as a set the extra four count as additional. Either way I'm going to have to charge you 100k for any one of those three weapons, and 60k for the additional four knives if you take them. Edit and deduct your money accordingly, and record it in your gains and losses. Upkeep is 10,000, 13,000 if you keep the four extra throwing knives. A bit much is happening in your history for my tastes, but it is actually okay. So get all this fixed and you'll be acceptable. |
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| Zeig | Feb 25 2013, 01:31 PM Post #3 | ||||||
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Brought the throwing knives down to 6 and changed smash and grab to sucker punch. Sorry about the history, it actually is more fleshed out than this, but I didn't want to bore staff with it. | ||||||
| Vicente De Saint III • Navigator • Inventor/Thief/Navigator/Marksman • Renegade Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 400,000 • Location: East Blue. | |||||||
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| ♦ Axel | Feb 27 2013, 01:55 AM Post #4 | ||||||
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"Being very charismatic he can manipulate most to get what he wants" -Not gonna happen without a trait and even then. Just say he can be persuasive or something like that. Your sleight of hand trick isn't going to fool basically anyone of an above average level at rank 1. Just keep that in mind. |
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| Zeig | Feb 27 2013, 06:59 AM Post #5 | ||||||
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Yea I didn't mean it like that, it was there for flavor but I changed it. I figured sleight of hand wouldn't affect most people, but I plan to upgrade it eventually. | ||||||
| Vicente De Saint III • Navigator • Inventor/Thief/Navigator/Marksman • Renegade Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 400,000 • Location: East Blue. | |||||||
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| Yuan | Mar 10 2013, 03:41 PM Post #6 | ||||||
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Your best nightmare.
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| Namine | Mar 10 2013, 03:46 PM Post #7 | ||||||
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Upkeep should be 100,000 Beli. (50 for pistol without marksman primary, 50 for throwing knives). Get that fixed and everything should be fine - it won't hold back the flag. |
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| Zeig | Mar 10 2013, 06:15 PM Post #8 | ||||||
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| Vicente De Saint III • Navigator • Inventor/Thief/Navigator/Marksman • Renegade Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 400,000 • Location: East Blue. | |||||||
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| C0nMoney | Mar 12 2013, 09:38 PM Post #9 | ||||||
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