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| SavageEdge | Feb 21 2013, 07:27 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: SavageEdge Basic Character Information Name: Remy Tokay Nickname: Lizard Kickboxer Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 Achievements:0 Profession: ~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves. ~Thief The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either. Position: Free-lance pirate Physical Appearance Height: 6’6 Weight: 200 lbs Hair: Blonde Eyes: Red Clothing/Accessories: Remy wears black armguards over both forearms that come up to just below his shoulders. These armguards end in fingerless black gloves. Usually he wears fitted black pants that allow for easy movement. His feet and ankles are wrapped in black boxing tape. He is normally shirtless but on occasion will a t-shirt when the situation dictates. On winter islands he will wear a simple fur cloak to fight off the cold. General Appearance: Remy has wild blonde hair that goes past his shoulders. Normally he lets it go wild unless a fight dictates that he ties it behind him. Remy is naturally pale skinned and shows a stark contrast with his black attire. Training in martial has made physically fit and well-toned. Remy moves and stands with the confidence of being well trained and it shows in his movements. His training has made him confident and usually has a sneer or smirk on his mouth. However, his eyes are always watching furrowed as if he is ready to attack at any moment. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Remy first comes across as arrogant and dismissive, owing this to his martial arts skills. He is usually angry and quick to fight. This stems from losing repeatedly in the past and wanting to prove himself. This has also made Remy kind of optimistic, always happily looking forward to his next fight whether he wins or not. He does have pride and honor as a martial artist and will not do anything dishonorable in a fight. However, his sense of honor is personal one and he has been known bend it. An example would be that he would not kill a defenseless opponent but he would rob them and let someone else kill them. He carefully observes everything and is always on guard. If he knows that the odds are not in favor he will quickly retreat, not out of cowardice but out of tactical necessity. As a child he was often lonely and did not have many friends. As such he values what friends he does have. His history has made him slow to trust other people. Living on a single island most of his life, he enjoys going new places he likes to take in the sites and go to popular tourist attractions. If on a long journey he like travel guides about the places he is traveling to. Unlike many pirates, Remy is not motivated by a dream but, his deep hatred of the marines, as he thinks they stole his first love away. He became a pirate just to spite them, selling his skills to whatever evil scheme he can find. His hatred for marines has led him down the life of crime, picking up skills as a thief and a criminal for hire. Not to say that Remy does strictly evil acts, but he is willing to do just about anything for the right price. His willingness to bend the rules has made him very resourceful. Hometown: Karate Island – South Blue History: Remy Tokay was born on Karate Island in the South Blue and was from a long line of martial artists. The accepted style of karate taught on the island just did not feel right to Remy and he became looked down on upon by his dojo since he was not able to grasp the concept and lost every sparring match. After continuously becoming left behind from the rest of his class mates he befriended a lonely hermit who lived on the outskirts of the island. This hermit became found of Remy and soon began to teach him a different form of martial arts. When Remy sparred the next time at his dojo he won. However, as he used his new form of martial arts he was banished his dojo. His family ashamed of his dishonor, disowned him. Remy was alone and friendless, the only one who accepted him is the hermit. To survive Remy had to make ends meet through petty thievery. When not training he would start fights and bully any of the local kids. One day a girl named Aequita stood up to Remy and despite all of Remy’s training he lost. Lying defeated on the ground, Aequita reached down and offered him a hand up. Remy and Aequita soon became fast friends. Each day they sparred and righted wrongs around the island like junior detectives. Years past as they trained and sparred, Remy never won but he did not care as long as he had his friends. This however was not meant to last. The day came and his master, the old hermit, had passed away, and while he was burying his master, his friend Aequita decided to join the marines. With his master gone and confused by the sudden departure from his friend, he went out searching for her. The local marines did not have any information other then Aequita was from a military family. Remy searched for years looking for her, traveling from island to island, until he found her in the West Blue in the 80th Branch Base. Remy confronted Aequita who was already an officer due to her skill and family influence. Upset, hurt and disappointed he waited for her to leave the base. Aequita was out receiving a mysterious package from her family. When he confronted her on the street, she advised that this was her family duty to serve and she requested that he leave. In a rage he challenged Aequita and was again defeated by his friend again. However, no hand reached down to help him up. Angered he stole the package from her family, yelling that he would be back escaped out to sea. Once alone he opened the package to find a devil fruit. Remy last saw Aequita while he was adrift in the unfamiliar Blue with a devil fruit in his hand. Vowing vengeance the marines that took his dear friend and to win Aequita back. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Gecko Kickboxing. Gecko Kickboxing is often a fighting art of attrition, where opponents exchange blows with one another. Almost all techniques in Gecko Kickboxing uses the entire body movement, rotating the hip with each kick, punch, elbow and block. Weaponry: None Items: None Beli: 500,000 Upkeep: SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
Hardened Fighter (1 Trait) – Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained skin that is as hard as wood, making them much more resistant to physical damage.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by SavageEdge, Feb 25 2013, 08:09 AM.
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| C0nMoney | Feb 25 2013, 07:27 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||
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Lord of Ruin
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tp is 16, your zoan techniques are free and thus don't apply to the numbers. Muay thai doesn't exist, sure you can fight muay thai style. But thailand doesn't exist in op world, so make up your own name for it. It can't have the history, and culture associated with muay thai. Can't be running through marine bases, and beating up marines in your history. Basically anything that would've gained you a bounty pre-start is a no no. 2-4 more similar sized paragraphs for personality |
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| SavageEdge | Feb 25 2013, 09:22 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||
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Edited, added more to personality and changed fighting style, as well as changed history.
Edited by SavageEdge, Feb 25 2013, 09:22 PM.
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| ♦ Axel | Feb 27 2013, 02:01 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||
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Aggressively Useless
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Italicize your MA bonus Add the specific devil fruit trait in the trait section and replace X with 3. Can't be having no rank 8 at your level. Keep it to rank 4. Add 'Free DF Ability' next to the rank number for your zoan techs. Do the same for your MA Stance but with the appropriate words. |
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