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Topic Started: Feb 17 2013, 07:16 AM (1,218 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Taviel
Nickname: N/A
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation:Pirate
Bounty: 0.
Achievements:
Profession:
~Smith
A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy.Smiths will get a 20% discount on any weapon upgrades or new weapons that they buy for themselves.


~Weapon Specialist
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.


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Physical Appearance
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 182
Hair: Short unkept brown hair
Eyes: Hazel eyes green being the dominate color
Clothing/Accessories: Usually wears a simple shirt with short sleeves, and simple black pants. On the back of his belt there is a set of loops made to hold his weapon and another loop for his hammer on the right. Wears easy to replace tabi on his feet as he ruins most footwear when using his devil fruit power.

General Appearance: A covered in a thick brown feathery head of hair. Sporting thick sideburns that cover his soft, smooth complexion. Accompanying his side burns is a thin goatee lining his slightly rounded chin. His body muscular and lean.

He holds himself in a very relaxed manner slouching a little giving off no real sense of threat. This how ever changes if he is angered or in a fight at which point he seems like a man ready to take on any and all challenges.

His body is has a few scars from his youth mostly inflicted by his mother the most noticeable is a scar coming from his right shoulder down towards his stomach and a small X shaped one on the right side of his jaw because of this he often regards his left side as his "good" side.

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The Character
Personality: Deep down he wants to push himself farther and reach his full potential, but he often treats such a goal as a pipe dream. His father's words of dissuasion and emphasis on the impossibility and impracticality of those aspirations were brought to the forefront of Taviel's mind when he was thrust from his home, and he has allowed them to linger. As such, Taviel has a hard time getting motivated when it comes to training and taking self-improvement seriously.

Taviel's sense of humor could be viewed as quite childlike; he is easily amused, but his attempts at humor are often dry and misplaced. Thanks to this, he tries to keep it to a minimum to avoid making a fool of himself.
When it comes to combat, Taviel finds the activity cathartic and enjoyable. So long as there's a proper opponent, that is.

Taviel usually treats his opponents with respect fighting them too the best of his abilities, he is not however against using "underhanded" tactics when fighting a skilled opponent.

Hometown: Kushin Island - West Blue

History:When Taviel was a young child, his father wanted him to be a blacksmith, as was the family tradition. Taviel's mother, however, was a retired yet well-seasoned bounty hunter, and her husband repeatedly warned her to keep their son away from any semblance of combat training. However, she stressed the importance of self-defense, and would always impart to her son knowledge of how to use a weapon and protect himself. As he grew older, he would look forward to her lessons and take more of an active interest in becoming skilled at fighting

Around this time, one of Taviel's neighbors returned from a hunting trip with a strange fruit in tow. His mother having recounted many a tale of her travels to her son, Taviel recognized the overlooked treasure as a devil fruit. Suspecting that eating it would grant him superhuman abilities, Taviel bought the fruit from the oblivious villager for a mere paltry sum. Taviel ventured into the nearby forest and ate the fruit in privacy. It was the worst thing he had ever tasted, and he almost vomited just from how horrid it was, but he somehow managed to finish it.

After gaining the combination boon and curse from eating the devil fruit, Taviel was ecstatic about his new ability. For his father, however, his transformation was the final straw - in a fit of rage, he kicked Taviel out of the house. His mother regretted her son's rashness, but wasn't nearly as upset with him as her husband. Unhappy with her husband's narrow-mindedness, she made sure Taviel was well-prepared with traveling money and the names of some old friends before he set out on his foray into the world. Taviel still retains some bitterness over his father's words and actions, and as such has begun to silently doubt the value of becoming a powerful warrior.



Abilities and Possessions

Combat: Taviel's fighting style focuses mostly on abusing the versatilty of the sansetsukon in close/mid range combat by building momentum and using it to enhance his blows, and using the chains to whip over a foes gaurd or spinning sections to build even more momentum. However his style chances considerably in hybrid and full transformation favoring the chains being retracted and using the staff as one entity. This includes decreasing his range which he tries to counter act by using the butt of the staff to increase mobility and speed. e.g. using it to pole vault to jump higher than he normally could, or using it to push himself forward slightly faster to close a gap.

Weaponry:Sansetsukon (Tri section staff): Each section is 26 inches in length and have a 1.5 inch diameter connected by 7 inch iron chains. 3.8 inches above each of the links there is a mechanism to retract the chain allowing an expierenced wielder to switch between a long single staff and a normal Sansetsukon. The two outer ends also have weights inserted into the staff to allow for more power at the cost of it being akward to use to an unexpierenced user.

Smith's hammer: A normal 3lb Hammer.
Items:Sack to carry stuff
Beli: 500,000
Upkeep:
SD Earned: 2.
Stat Points: 34
SD Remaining: 0.
Stats:34
  • Used for Stats:34
  • Used for Fortune:0.

    • Strength:11
    • Speed:10
    • Stamina:6
    • Accuracy:7
    • Fortune: 8

Traits:

Specific Devil Fruit(3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of the Paramecia, Zoan or Logia type.

Forging Master (1 Trait) – All the experience the character has gained in making weapons allows them to produce them more cheaply. These smiths get a 30% discount for any weapons they make, and they are nice enough that this discount applies to their crew members as well.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Saru Saru(Monkey Monkey) no Mi, Model: Muriqui
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit allows the user to turn into either a hybrid or full form Muriqui


Techniques


Regular Technique Points: 16
Used Regular Technique Points: 8/16
Special Technique Points: 0.
Used Special Technique Points: N/A

Techniques


Muriqui Hybird Transformation (4 free)
Type:~Supportive
Range:Personal
Stats:+5 Strength, +3 Speed, +2 Stamina
Description: When he transforms, Taviel's limbs grow a light brown fur, while his feet morph to resemble hands. His facial structure changes as well, giving him a monkey-like appearance, as well as growing fur that covers most of his face. Taviel sprouts a tail, which is elongated, powerful, and able to act as an extra limb.

Muriqui Full Transformation (4 free)
Type:~Supportive
Range:Personal
Stats:+5 Strength, +5 Speed
Description: In his fully transformed state, Taviel shrinks to the size of a normal monkey and becomes completely engulfed in fur.

Saru Sansetsukon Strike (4)
Type:~Offensive
Range:Short-Mid
Stats:N/A
Description:
Taviel swings a section of his staff in a small circle to gain momentum then lashes out with increased force and speed. Holding either the mid and lower section for short range or just the lower section for mid range
Saru Sansetsukon Smash (4)
Type:~Offensive
Range:Short-Mid
Stats:N/A
Description: Drawing in the chains of his staff to make it a whole Taviel brings it over his head and smashes down putting his whole body into the attack to increase its power.



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Edited by Knior, Mar 21 2013, 05:02 AM.
Taviel • Smith • Smith/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: East Blue

Novin • Captain • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: North Blue

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Your forms are a bit strange, in his monkey form he would actually be the monkey's size. so he'd actually be smaller than his usual size. His hybrid form would also probably gain a tail as well as slightly longer arms.

I need atleast two more paragraphs in personality, and 2 or 3 more in general appearance.

For general appearance we need more than just what he is wearing, does he smile, does he look happy, does he hunch, are his fists clinched, is he lanky? buff? all those sort of details.

Everything else here looks pretty legit.
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Alright added a bit to those sections.
Taviel • Smith • Smith/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: East Blue

Novin • Captain • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: North Blue

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Where did that 3 extra strength come from?

Also this is just a nitpick but in brackets next to the DF name, please add the English translation for those who don't know what Saru mean.
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The strength was from when I messed up on traits a little and forgot to fix it. Edited.
Taviel • Smith • Smith/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 2 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: East Blue

Novin • Captain • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Crewless • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: North Blue

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