Character:Adam Slade Request: New Techs Please Changes: Could I have these new techs please.
Techs
Shrapnel Glissando Augmentation Branched off of Shrapnel Glissando (28) Type: Offensive/Defensive Range: In Adam's area of influence Stats: N/A
Description: Adam causes all the pieces of metal in his area of influence to fly around like a tornado, by causing the pieces of metal to constantly change the area in which they are being attracted to on his body. Adam will always be the center of the tornado however. The max distance the tornado can be in diamter is (Fortune/8) meters. The pieces of metal will also randomly send shockwaves that fly (Fortune/20) meters and have a max length of (Fortune/25) meters.
Also I'd like to make this tech:
Musical Support
I Cry for You (Dazzling Performer TP) (27) Type: Offensive/Supportive Range:Those who can hear it and Adam intends to use it on Stats: -17 Speed
Description:Adam sings and plays one of his most signature songs, using his raw emotion in his voice to lower the speed of his enemies.
Become this tech:
Musical Support
I Cry for You (Dazzling Performer TP) (28) Type: Offensive/Supportive Range:Those who can hear it and Adam intends to use it on Stats: -21 Speed
Description:Adam sings and plays one of his most signature songs, using his raw emotion in his voice to lower the speed of his enemies. This occurs due to the mix of strong, emotional lyrics and the wailing noise minor noise of the guitar.
These techs are well beyond what jisha is capable of, automatons just flat out isn't happening the tornado doesn't seem feasible either but even on the off chance it was doable it'd be at far higher ranks than these, 44.
Also for future reference any in tech formulae will no longer use fortune
It's minor but the song could do with a little more flavour just talking about what aspect of the song it is that causes the speed debuff ie: so sullen and depressing the sheer sadness of the atmosphere seems to weigh down those that hear it.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
I already have the tornado tech, I'm just adding the shockwaves. The tornado works on the concept of the Slingshot Effect, and that's why Adam will always be in the center of the tornado. I made the other edits.
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Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
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