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Sharp Tongue Ryoken; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Feb 14 2013, 11:03 AM (312 Views)
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Account Name: Demenyx


Basic Character Information
Name: Ryoken ("Hound")
Nickname: Ryo
Age: 20
Gender: M
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: ::beli:: 0
Achievements: N/A
Professions:
Main: ~Navigator
The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job. Navigators will have the skills to navigate the Grand Line. Anyone travelling the Grand Line without a Navigator will be at the mercy of the moderators in their journeys.

Secondary: ~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.


Position: Captain

Physical Appearance
Height: 6 ft (187 cm)
Weight: 190 lb (89.18 kg)
Hair: Dark brown & shaggy, shoulder length.
Eyes: Dark Brown
Clothing/Accessories: Ryoken's clothing changes so often, every SL it's likely to be different. However, his style doesn't vary. When with his crew on the ship, he tends to just wear some old tattered blue jeans with a humorous graphic T. Ironically, the graphic T seems to always have something to do with their last adventure. When ever they leave the ship and embark onto an island, Ryoken simply throws off his graphic T and put on a white tank top to avoid attention. He wouldn't want any marines reading his shirt now would he?
General Appearance: Ryoken has little facial hair. The insinificant amount he currently has is a thin thin line of hair from his edge line to follow his jaw line. His chin isn't very broad neither are his shoulders. This is do to him not being very athletic and muscular. He is a healthy slim young man. His legs are fairy tone yet no where near bulky like a body builder. His arms are barely develope and in combat he rarely uses them. From living out in the wilderness from such a young age his skin has grown rough and tough. He has arm and leg hair and a happy trail from his belly button and below...any lower is classified. His nails are short and eye brows are average.
The Character
Personality:
Ryoken earned the nick of "Sharp Tongue" due to his cheeky remarks. He is the type of person to naturally get the last laugh. And if the other is persistent to have the last say, he is willing to give it to them. Even though it may not seem like it at first glance, Ryoken is quite mature. Ryoken is capable of sacrificing his luxuries for the necessities of survival and prosperation. He is willing to give an arm and a leg for his life. He doesn't care much for his pride, for he has none. He wont let others walk over him, however only pick fights he know he can win. Although the fights he believes he can win may not always be accurate. But very rarely will he overestimate himself. The reason why Ryoken is so clingy to his life is because of the death of his only known kin, his little sister. She died five years ago at the young age of fourteen. He wants to live for her sake, fulfilling her dream for a better life of fame, wealth, and freedom instead of working for the rest of their lives. To fulfill her dream, he pursued the life of piracy.

Due to the death of his sister Ryoken has grown very emotional. Although sensitive on the inside he rarely shows it. If anything he shows his masculinity at all times. Given the opportunity to compete he will jump at it. Competing is his main source of entertainment. That and animals. In fact, the only life force that usually get the liberty to see his softer side are his animal aquintences. Due to him consuming the Pera Pera no Mi he often speaks to animals, like seagulls when traveling aboard the vessel, about his problems that way his comrades could not comprehend their conversation. The idiotic animals often entertain him and brings him to rejoice.

Hometown: North Blue, Canis Lupis Arctos
History: Ryoken was born and raised on the natural arctic island of Canis Lupis Arctos. An isle of snow covered mountains in a shape of a fang from the aerial view. Most humans inhabit the mountains while the lush arctic woodlands are used for hunting. (The mountains sprouting mainly at the base of the island and the woodland at it's point.) Marine life isn't as vivid as other islands in the blues due to the lack of unwanted company like pirates. Canis Lupis Arctos is fairly segregated from others because of the dense arctic ice surrounding it. Most wouldn't dare go through the hassle of fighting the ice to reach a pretty damn lame island as itself.

Ryoken and his sister, Nekoka, never knew their parents. In fact, they didn't even know who took care of them until Ryo was ten, and Neko, nine. But at that age they did remember one thing, being called the pirates brats. Yes, apparently their parents were pirates but they wouldn't know, and Nekoka would unfortunately never get to know. Let's face it, they were kids living by begging for rations. No one dared adopted them because of their parents. The lack of food, water, and shelter, eventually got to them and one paid the ultimate price. When Ryo's sister perished he attempted to kill himself by laying beside his deceased sister motionless until death. But eventually some random villager's heart opened up and told the marines. They came and salvaged the young Ryoken. He worked as a chore boy for the marines until 20.

Life as a chore boy wasn't easy, nor was it hard. If anything, boring. He wasn't a mute, in fact, he spoke all the time to his peers. But he couldn't talk-talk with the other chore boys, they couldn't understand his past. But the animals, yes the animals, they understood. The wild was there domain. The only problem was that the animals couldn't speak back to him. That was before he ate the Pera Pera no Mi. While at the single marine base on the entired island, Ryo studied their maps. He planned to sail the seas as a pirate for his sister. To do that he figured he needed to learn how to navigate across the seas. One day while studing he came across a paper concerning a hidden Devil Fruit that gave the consumer the "curse ability" to conversate amoung any tongue. Ryoken jumped at the opportunity to steal it. Once he did he left to never return, it would only be a matter of time before the marines figured out it was him who stole the fruit from the base...

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Ryoken isn't much of a combatant in the sense of picking the fights for the hell of it. Ryoken often enters competitions and tournaments for fun instead of the blood lust or the rush of victory. Ryo style is more lax and nonchalant. He usually evade the opponent while pushing them around here and there using his speed and stamina to his benefit. When ever an openning opens up, then Ryoken will strike with all his might. Whilne engaged in combat he usually strike with his legs while keeping his hands in his pocket.
Weaponry: N/A
Items:
*Saint Drunk's Bourbon Hunting Bottle:
A magical bottle of bourbon with a very fancy shape that makes it look expensive. Tastes just like regular bourbon and aside from the label having some guy that looks a lot like Egoraptor on it, there is no real defining weird thing about it. However once per sl, any character drinking from this will get drunk off their ass no matter the quantity they drank. No exceptions, even Zoro and Nami would get drunk off this stuff. The drunken spree lasts at least for 4 posts. The bottle magically manages to refill itself between sl's.
Money ::beli:: 7.5 Mill
Upkeep: 0
SD Earned: 9
Stat Points: 41
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 41
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 7
    • Speed: 15
    • Stamina: 12
    • Accuracy: 7
    • Fortune: 10
Traits:

Specific Devil Fruit (3 Traits)
The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of the Paramecia, Zoan or Logia type.

Professional: Treasure Hunter (1 Trait)
With their exceptional sense of direction, these navigators are very skilled in looking for treasures. Thus, in their SLs, they will always get an extra little item. It could be something quirky, or it could be something rare.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Pera Pera no Mi (Chat-Chat Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: The Pera Pera no Mi is a Paramecia whose name together, perapera means “to be fluent in a language”. As implied by its name, it grants the user a wide range of methods to communicate with other sentient beings, whether verbally, visually, physically or more. There is no particular language that the user conveys to those that don’t speak his native tongue---simply that, whomever they are speaking to is capable of understanding the user and vice versa, with no outside party being able to understand unless they also speak that same “language”. (Such as, the user speaks to one lion, thusly any other lion around is also able to understand, but a human or duck wouldn’t.) If there’s a situation where the target of the user’s ability is deaf or generally incapable of hearing, he /she can manifest the words in midair through body language that is similarly only capable of being read by those that are aware of that “language”. With mastery of the fruit, the user is even capable of communicating directly into the subject’s mind through telepathy, among other such miscellaneous abilities that could prove to be quite useful, even in combat.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 20
Used Regular Technique Points: 16
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Sprint (4)
Type: Supportive
Range: Self
Stats: +2 Speed
Description: Ryoken arches his back foward, crouches slightly, and stands on the balls of his feet. He then pushes of the balls of his feet for increase sprint speed.
Cool Down: 3 Post

Ryo Evasion (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: 0
Description: Ryoken will atttempt to evade an attack by leaping away from the target's strike. This is successful only when his acc+spe/2 is greater than opponent's speed.

Ryoken Block (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Stats: 0
Description: Ryoken attempts to block an opponents strike by intercepting it with his forearms.

Ryoken Kick (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: 0
Description: Ryoken attempts to thrust the ball of one of his feet to the chin of a target square on with all his might.



DF Techniques

Pera Pera no Mi (4)
Type: Supportive
Range: Hearing
Stats: 0
Description: Ryoken may speak any tongue at this rank.

Development History
Gains/Losses:

Gained 4 SD & ::beli:: 4,000,000 @ Happy Birthday OPRP!

Gained 3 SD & ::beli:: 3,000,000 @ October 2012 Event

Gained 2 SD & Saint Drunk's Hunting Bottle @ Saint Pattys... Patty Day Bash

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Edited by Indie Deme, Mar 18 2013, 02:32 PM.
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Throw an N/A next to achievements.

Your clothing is fine, but throw some more into general appearance. People like to visualize. D=

0 next to upkeep.

Next to Pera Pera no Mi, you should add [Chat-Chat Fruit] to make me happy.

Technique time: Later on, when you start to get SD and such and make DF techniques that Nami and I totally won't help you with because you stole our favorite fruit, you'll want to have a separate table so they don't get clustered together with your normal techniques. I can show you how to make another table or do it for you because I'm good guy Emo.

Sprint is okay, I guess. It's just a single burst of energy and obviously isn't the level of Soru. But it needs a cool down of three post, being a buff and all. You can't go hopping around all willy nilly and not get tired. You can add a duration of three posts, too, but it just seems like a burst of energy- which would last until you stopped... or for three posts.

Evasion needs to have something like... Your Accuracy and Speed /2 vs. Opponent Speed. I'm not too good with techniques, you might want a second opinion, but that sounds about right.

Temple Kick would require the Critical Hit trait.

Critical Hit (1 Trait) – Through training in pressure points and learning how to hit vital points in the body, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.
LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
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Hmmm, seem like Ryoken is already an ace at swiping valuables. Haha...

Welp, I edited everything and even added something; the HBD OPRP rewards, I was actually here for that. /o/
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You completely removed the free DF technique. DX
LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
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>.> I thought you wanted me to add it later. <.<

But has been added. \o\
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LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
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Keep in mind: Ryoken Block will only be an attempt. If the opponent is noticeably stronger, they'll break through it. If you want, you can make it a guaranteed block later if you branch it into a rank 8.

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