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| Phantom | Feb 14 2013, 02:45 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Phantom Basic Character Information Name: Marcus Degan Nickname: Bronze Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: N/A Bounty: 0 Achievements: Profession: Primary - Entertainer(Musician and singer): An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Entertainers can use their performance skills, be they song, dance or anything else, to influence others and use them as buffs, debuffs, etc. Secondary - Martial Artist : A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Position: N/A Not part of a crew as of yet. Physical Appearance Height: 182 centimeters Weight: 88 kilograms. Hair: Wavy dark brown hair that is just under shoulder length. Eyes: Green with bronze hallows. Clothing/Accessories: There is nothing typical about what he wears, in fact it tends to change from day to day and whim to whim. Yet one thing remains the same, hes always dressed in a riot of colors or in something totally outlandish. This could be a dress suit lined with glow sticks and neon colors to totally laid back surfer shorts and no shirt. All in all he will wear anything so long as he is comfortable. General Appearance: Standing a little under six feet tale, Marcus cuts an intimidating yet whimsical figure with his lively green eyes with bronze hallows around the iris, and wavy dark brown hair and slightly tanned skin. This being said, only one word can accurately describe the way he holds himself, passionate. Every movement he makes is full of energy and a zest for life. His face is wide and stark, with expressive eye brows that always seem to be dancing. His gait also reflects his mood, if happy he almost leaps as he walks because there’s so much spring in his step, if hes angry every step he takes seems some how more solid and purposeful. The only thing about him that remains constant is the stubborn set of his jaw which juts out defiantly no matter the situation. So strong are his emotions that they seem to radiate from him in an almost visible aura. This causes some to dislike him, because in comparison they don’t really live. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: To say Bronze wears his heart on his sleeve is like saying that the sun is as bright as a candle, Hes as charismatic and gregarious an individual as anyone can find with a highly addictive personality. Thankfully he’s what some would call a “responsible addict” and only indulges in his vice when hes sure it won’t have any negative effects on near future endeavors. The sole exception to this rule is his thirst for adrenalin and high intensity situations. If given a choice between walking across the street when the walk light says walk, or weaving in-between cars as they speed by in order to reach his destination faster…he will choose to weave in-between the speeding cars. Some call him reckless, he calls himself adventurous, and as always he says ”Why walk when you can run, jump or fly?”. Bronze is an incredibly outspoken person, who hides little to nothing of what hes thinking at any given moment, as you can imagine this can lead him into some volatile situations, but oddly his out spoken personality rarely leads him into knockdown drag out fights. There could be any number of reasons for this, maybe its his personal charm (which he claims he has), or it could be his intense stare ( which he claims throws people through loops). But more then likely its his ability to laugh off any situation and make it seem unimportant, but the truth may never be known. As far as personal relationships go’s, he’s more of a love them and leave them kinda guy. Because of the nature of his work he doesn't tend to stick around for vary long and is loathe to make any lasting relationships because of this. This is not to say it has not happened, in fact its happened three times, because three of those one night stands ended up baring some vary surprising fruit… In the form of three children, from three different woman, in three radically different nations. Hometown: The Traveling circus Ship "Pandemonium", South Blue. History: Marcus “Bronze” Degan was born into a family of entertainers famous for their traveling menagerie, magic shows, and world renowned pyrotechnics displays. His father one Elinjar “Iron” Degan was the “Ring master” of the entire affair along with being one of the main attractions, He was known through out the world as “Iron the magnificent” a magician the likes of which hadn’t been seen in 60 years. His mother Raciel “Gold” Deganworked as his stage assistant, but more importantly used her devil fruit powers to light up the night sky in ways that hadn’t been thought of. Thanks to his parents traveling show Bronze was able to experience many different cultures and languages at an early age and this enabled him to learn multiple languages in his first 7 years and hes just continued to learn more since that time. Thanks to his family’s diverse background Bronze never lacked for things to do or things to study, which thankfully kept him out of to much trouble in his beginning years. When he wasn’t learning stage illusions and slight of hand from his father, his mother was teaching him the to defend him self and how to create unique fireworks. Not only that but the other entertainers in their marry band of misfits taught him there various trades, from tight rope walking and acrobatics to purse cutting and swindling. Thanks to this wide array of talents(some of which he took to, some of which he did not) he soon took to the stage and preformed alongside his parents and friends. When he was 15 his parents decided that it was time for him to learn more about his heritage, so not long after his birthday he said fair well to his parents and friends and was sent to live with people he barley even knew…his mothers parents, and who he supposed where his grand parents. After the arduous 3 week journey he finally made it back to the land of his ancestors, a land he hadn’t set foot in sense the week after his birth. Waiting for him where the people who would polish this boy into the man he would become. His grand parents where hard people from a hard land, but they grew to love the mischievous boy that came to live with them. For the next five years he worked on the social skills he had been lacking and grew to love the rugged territory of his home land. He journeyed to and explored every inch of land he could find, everyday trying to out do himself, everyday looking for new and exciting things. Sadly his explorers spirit lead him down the path of addiction, and that’s the one path hes never gotten tired of. It also happens to be the path that lead him to seek a life at the high seas. The coming years would be hard on the young man, with the continued restrictions placed on him by his more traditional grandparents, but it was this process that help forge him into a man that could do anything he set his mind to no matter the circumstance and no matter who told him otherwise. This of course has caused trouble for him on any number of occasions, because as he puts it "Fuck the Marines and their pointless rules." And thats the basic motto that he lives his life by, not really caring what the world government have to say about any of the actions he might or might not take. Luckily for him hes never really been on the world governments watch list... So facing off with them has never come up even in all his years of traveling though thats likely to change if he ever manages to join a pirate crew. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Marcus fights using a martial art stressing smooth, quick and decisive strikes and movements in hopes of out thinking, out hitting and out maneuvering an opponent. Always light on his feet he can easily move around the field of battle deftly avoiding attacks from multiple sides while striking efficiently and precisely from unexpected angles . To do this he uses a combination of martial and acrobatic training. Of course the biggest flaw in his technique is that if hes in an area with limited space to move he would be at a significant disadvantage. Thought his like all disadvantages can be off set by quick thinking and quicker reactions. Weaponry: Two armored combat gloves used to strengthen his blows as well as allowing him to block weapons with his hands and arms. Simple leather gloves covered in iron scales. Picture Items:
Beli: 500,000 Upkeep: 0 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Fate of the Cunning [3 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your accuracy stat. Crowd Control (1 Trait) – Due to the nature of their skills, their performances will affect basically anyone who can see and hear them. Buff and debuff techniques used by these entertainers will have the same maximum as a single target technique, no matter how large a crowd they affect. [/list]
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
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| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| C0nMoney | Feb 17 2013, 12:24 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||
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You spent one too many stat points. You're going to have to detail your supposed drugs, and fireworks so they can be priced. Cause we don't want you pulling out handfuls of cocaine and blowing it in peoples faces. Without thief, you'll have little to no skill with said lockpicks. Edited by C0nMoney, Feb 17 2013, 12:25 PM.
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| Phantom | Feb 17 2013, 06:50 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||
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Edited. Also, many people know how to use lock picks not just thieves. Many people choose to learn it as a dexterity exercise, which is the case with him. |
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| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| AngelMayLaugh | Feb 18 2013, 05:28 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||
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Thieves and assassins can inherently lockpick here. If you want it on a non-thief to have basic(and I do mean basic) skills with picking basic locks, make a technique for it to show that he has the 'skill'. Copy and paste the italicized primary bonus for entertainer. it should be in the professions topic. Rather minor, but I'd appreciate it if you specified what type of entertainer he is next to the word entertainer in the professions place. Sure, his clothes can change from day to day if you want. At least give a vague description of what he likes to wear at least. What exactly does "low key" mean? Like sparklers or those annoying poppers? |
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✉ Head Courier ✉ Weapon Specialist/Courier ✉ WORMS Division Beli: 50,750,000![]() Location: Skypiea, Grand Line [Sky Islands] Ϯ Enlightened Servant Ϯ Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist Ϯ Hot Rockets Ϯ Beli: 90,000,000 Ϯ![]() Location: Raijin Island, New World [Row One] ✄ Fashion Star ✄ Inventor/Designer/Merchant ✄ Fiore ✄ Beli: 61,105,000 Location: Couture Island, Grand Line [Sea Train Zone] | |||||||||||
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| Phantom | Feb 18 2013, 07:15 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||
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Okay edited. Ill keep that he learned it in his history, but i wont do anything with it tell i can add in the technique. |
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| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| AngelMayLaugh | Feb 19 2013, 09:00 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||
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Not gonna charge you for the fireworks. Don't think they do enough to warrant a price. Just letting you know that Serpentine Evasion is not going to be anything like Kami-E. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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✉ Head Courier ✉ Weapon Specialist/Courier ✉ WORMS Division Beli: 50,750,000![]() Location: Skypiea, Grand Line [Sky Islands] Ϯ Enlightened Servant Ϯ Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist Ϯ Hot Rockets Ϯ Beli: 90,000,000 Ϯ![]() Location: Raijin Island, New World [Row One] ✄ Fashion Star ✄ Inventor/Designer/Merchant ✄ Fiore ✄ Beli: 61,105,000 Location: Couture Island, Grand Line [Sea Train Zone] | |||||||||||
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| ♠ RainingBlades | Feb 20 2013, 08:24 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||
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Affiliation: 0 Bounty: 0 Upkeep: 0 Stat Points: 0 Techniques section would look a lot better if it was like this: Yar How exactly does evoking passion give people a strength buff? Please add some more detail, even if it's just something like "passion, causing their adrenaline to rise and make them feel stronger." No to Serpentine Evasion as it is. You can change it to something like "making it easier to dodge attacks" or whatnot, but you can't just say he just evades most attacks. The actual evasion will be based on speed and accuracy, not a rank 4 tech. I'm guessing that strike is a punch? Edited by RainingBlades, Feb 20 2013, 08:24 PM.
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| Phantom | Feb 22 2013, 03:05 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||
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The strike is a punch yes XDD And eddited |
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| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| ♦ Axel | Feb 27 2013, 01:48 AM Post #9 | ||||||||||
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What happened to the sections about TP Available and TP Spent? | ||||||||||
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Sami Mohr James Bledsoe The Edge RIP 5ever | |||||||||||
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| Phantom | Feb 27 2013, 01:21 PM Post #10 | ||||||||||
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No idea where that went, but i added it back in^^ Sorry bout that. | ||||||||||
| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| ♦ Axel | Feb 27 2013, 09:45 PM Post #11 | ||||||||||
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Topic is flagged for approval. | ||||||||||
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Sami Mohr James Bledsoe The Edge RIP 5ever | |||||||||||
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| Phantom | Mar 5 2013, 02:37 PM Post #12 | ||||||||||
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Bumping after more then a week. | ||||||||||
| Character Name • Crew Position N/A • Entertainer • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew-N/A[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: South Blue | |||||||||||
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| C0nMoney | Mar 7 2013, 07:46 AM Post #13 | ||||||||||
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