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| Ukiha Bakeru | Feb 2 2013, 10:28 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Ukiha Basic Character Information Name: Kenko Yamaguchi Nickname: Age: Twenty Four Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 Achievements: Achievements Profession: ~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves. ~Chef A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients. Position: Chef Physical Appearance Height: 6"0' Weight: 200lbs Hair: Buzz cut red hair. Eyes: Almond Shaped Hazel eyes. Clothing/Accessories: He wore an attire consisted of a pair of loose baggy black shorts and a dark blue button up long sleeve shirt that hugged his muscled upper body, On his feet there would be a set of plain white sandals and underneath those a pair of bandages wrapped up from his ankles to his knees. He also has bandages wrapped around his fists up to his elbows. General Appearance: Kenko's face is scarred from a lot of his fights, He has one scar that goes from right above his eye down to the end of his nose. Another one, in the form of an X goes across his left cheek and he has a third scar, this one going almost all the way across his face in a daigonal pattern. He is normally seen with a grim looking face, though he can smile it hurts because of the scar that's going across his face. His body type is muscular and thin, it doesn't really show though he can move surprisingly fast for someone of his size. He has two tattoos on his right arm, they're of a Dark Blue star and right next to it, is a Dark Red star. His skin is tan for the most part, that which isn't tan is a pale white. Kenko The Character Personality: Kenko loves to help out around the dojo and training/sparring with the students even though he is no longer a part of the school. His favorite part of helping out though is watching over the small children. He's very friendly around them and does his best to smile so as not to scare them. He even pseudo-adopted two of the younger kids as his younger siblings, and will spoil them when outside of the dojo. He doesn't really like a lot of older people or anyone his age unless they're working at the dojo or with children, though he treats them with respect and offers to help them when needed. His goal as a pirate is to learn how to cook every type of food in the world. He refuses to join any crew that's evil, and is a very nice person to anyone who doesn't get on his bad side. He's very neutral about Marines, not caring either way unless they get in his way/harm anyone he cares about. He doesn't mind Bounty Hunters, having trained people who either became or want to become them and will actually help them, by pointing out the person they're chasing had he seen them. Hometown: Born: Gray Island, North Blue Raised :Karate Island, South Blue. History: Kenko was actually born in the North Blue, on Gray Island to be exact. But a couple of months after he was born, his parents decided to move to Karate Island, in the South Blue because they wanted their son to become a great Martial Artist and knowing no one in their town could teach him moved away. Kenko was about a year old when they got there and settled in, he was a very curious child and loved to explore always getting trouble for it as well. When Kenko was the age of five his parents decided it was time to enroll him in the dojo, Kenko of course was very excited because he had been awaiting this day since he could walk. During Kenko's years at the Dojo he trained until he could barley move, and passed out from exhaustion several times. He would train whenever he had free time, which was most of the time unless he was hanging out with his best friend, or studying to eventually create his own Martial artist style. By the time he was thirteen, Kenko had started the basics of creating his own style and was slowly improving it, being very secretive about it until he had mastered most of it at the age of eighteen. He was of course, very excited to show his family, best friend, Sensei and the school. He asked his Sensei to gather everyone in the main match area and started to demonstrate what he had been working on, by the time he was finished everyone was clapping and or smiling. He took a quick bow and stepped off to the side to let his Sensei speak. Kenko had graduated the next year, at the age of nineteen being one of the youngest graduates ever and was asked to stay on and help teach the younger kids, and spar with the older boys, He agreed. About half way through his second year helping out and sparring, He had heard about a group of rowdy bandits messing around with people in the bar. Kenko decided he would take care of it, and took off toward the bar where he confronted the Bandit leader and challenged him to a fight if he would not stop messing with the townsfolk. The bandit, thinking that Kenko was pretty weak accepted the challenge and stalked off outside, with Kenko following. Kenko quickly slipped into his stance while the Bandit was pulling out a pair of swords. Having trained to fight people with and without weapons, Kenko immediately started to attack the bandit, hoping to disarm him quickly but he failed. The bandit quickly started slashing at Kenko who ducked, dodged and turned as fast as he could until the sword caught his check in an X slash, causing the scar he has now. By the time the fight was over, Kenko had gained his other two scars but had beaten down the bandit leader and knocked him out. After that, Kenko vowed never to be struck by a weapon again and trained even harder, and trained up his style until he mastered all of it, not just the basics and semi-advanced. Eventually Kenko decided he wanted to be a chef, and started training for that during his free time. He became good enough that he was declared a chef and left on his own afterwards where he went back to helping out at the Dojo, choosing to spent most of his time around the kids and helping them. But life became stale for Kenko and he wanted to go out and explore the world, learn even more about cooking and get exotic ingredients to cook with and just see the sights, but He couldn't for he had his Pseudo-Brother and Sister to look after. By the Time Kenko was Twenty-Four, his Adopted siblings had grown up to the ages of ten and nine respectively and decided he wanted to set sail with the next pirate crew that came through that needed a cook and was a good crew. A couple of weeks before he turned Twenty-Four, Kenko found and rescued a red fox. He decided to name her Annette after he saw she wouldn't go back to living on her own. Abilities and Possessions Combat: He uses his Zai-Wu Lizard and nothing else, He fights aggressively, using punches, kicks and holds. He focuses on the upper body when using his punches and most holds, as well his some of his kicks. The rest, focus on the lower body and taking out the legs. He does try and move rapidly to quickly take down his opponent/s. Weaponry: N/A Items: A Couple of spare bandage wraps for his legs and arms. Beli: 500,000 Upkeep:N/A SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
Martial Art Mastery [Zai-Wu Lizard] (1 Trait) – The character masters a style of unarmed combat. All techniques which are based on the central theme of this style will get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for these techniques is two higher than the natural maximum. Anti-Weapon Specialist (1 Trait) – Through training and experience in fighting armed opponents when unarmed, the character gains special Technique Points, of the amount of half their fortune, for techniques which are aimed to disarm, disable or block the use of a weapon. Beast Handler (1 Trait) - Characters with this trait have a natural affinity for getting along with animals. Wild animals tend to behave either neutrally or friendly towards the character, unless they are very strongly aggressive. These animals, with proper approach and care, may be made to be merely distrustful and may sometimes refrain from attacking. The user also gains one NPC pet, who may possess human-like intelligence, behaves as a crew NPC and is controlled by the player of the main character. Annette Fate of the Swift [1 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your speed stat.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 8 Special Technique Points: 4 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Ukiha Bakeru, Feb 6 2013, 01:07 PM.
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Kehura Bakeru Andrew Wyatt • Petty Officer • Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island, West Blue. Theme Song | |||||||||
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| ♠ RainingBlades | Feb 3 2013, 11:32 AM Post #2 | ||||||||
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Bounty: 0 Put professional bonus in Italics Can we get more on Personality? All you reall have is his relationships with older and younger people. What things make him grim? Does he think he has any strengths or weaknesses in his character (the abstract concept, not the application/person themselves)? Personality is generall at least two or three paragraphs. Strength: 8 - Remove the stuff about the buff The description of your fighting style needs to go under combat, not the trait. So delete the stuff about it being an aggressive fighting style and whatnot in your trait but keep it in the combat description. Include a link to your NPC under/in the trait description Used TP is definately not 32; we'll get to what it really is when you reformat your techs So speaking of techs, say that Burst of Strength is free (so rank number should read (4 - Free) ). Also include that the tech has a three post cool down For Iron Meteor, Kenko isn't going to be breaking jaws at rank 4, especially when that's more of a strength/stamina issue than tech rank. It's fine besides that. Airborne Knuckle is a Rank 8, which you can't afford. So either remove the part that says it'll knock the opponent back or remove it entirely. Same thing for Snake's Clutch as with Iron Meteor, the knocking them unconscious thing is more of a strength/stamina issue. It's fine as a tech without that though. Edit: You dont have your NPC mentioned at all in your history; fix this Edited by RainingBlades, Feb 3 2013, 11:50 AM.
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| Ukiha Bakeru | Feb 3 2013, 01:43 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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Okay. And I was planning on having them meet in his first SL. | ||||||||
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Kehura Bakeru Andrew Wyatt • Petty Officer • Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island, West Blue. Theme Song | |||||||||
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| Namine | Feb 4 2013, 12:26 AM Post #4 | ||||||||
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You've yet to fix the changes RB has requested. Don't post until you've fixed them or until you have a question about them. ★ Bounty is 0. ★ Not the biggest deal in the world, but would you mind listing down what skin color/tone/etc he has? Otherwise I'd imagine him with rainbow skin. ★ Like RB said, I'd like to see some more expansion on personality. At the very beginning, you say he's grim but then proceed to describe how he's caring, kind, and generally a nice person. Also, what makes him grim? Judging from his history, he seemed to live quite the life if he got to pursue his passion of martial arts. ★ For a character who loves helping children/elderly/the dojo a lot, what made him decide to become a pirate? ★ For a character that has 'created' their own style of martial arts, I'm unable to see what is so unique about it. Feel free to describe this in either combat or under the 'Martial Art Mastery' trait in a small paragraph underneath the trait description. If you're having difficulties of how to describe it, here are a few questions to help: Is there any modern martial art style that resembles it? Does the fighting style resemble any particular animal (if there is any)? Are there any key elements to the style (eg. always requires user to hop on feet)? What styles of punches/kicks/etc does the martial art focus on? ★ Used technique points is 8, not 32. ★ If you're planning to meet your NPC through a storyline, remove it from your current history. It's called history for a reason. |
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| Ukiha Bakeru | Feb 4 2013, 01:25 AM Post #5 | ||||||||
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Sorry, thought it was 0. Fixed. Changed personality around, and I did mention why he became one. I'll work on describing it. I mentioned it to him in a PM when asking about something else, It's gonna be Kenko flashing back to the meeting rather then them actually meeting. And fixed. |
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Kehura Bakeru Andrew Wyatt • Petty Officer • Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island, West Blue. Theme Song | |||||||||
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| ♦ Axel | Feb 4 2013, 05:27 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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Add +2 Strength instead of N/A in the Stat area of Burst of Strength. | ||||||||
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| Ukiha Bakeru | Feb 6 2013, 11:37 AM Post #7 | ||||||||
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Fixed | ||||||||
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Kehura Bakeru Andrew Wyatt • Petty Officer • Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island, West Blue. Theme Song | |||||||||
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| ♠ RainingBlades | Feb 7 2013, 10:16 AM Post #8 | ||||||||
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Better Topic is flagged for approval. |
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Literally Annie The Gang On Hiatus Never Forget thelonelynarrators | |||||||||
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| AngelMayLaugh | Feb 18 2013, 04:24 PM Post #9 | ||||||||
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