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Some techs!; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 18 2012, 09:09 PM (352 Views)
StiX
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Character: Sai Smith

Request: Some new techs for me

Changes:

New techs

Luna sol 8
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:
Description:
Sai puts both arms behind him, closes one fist and holds the other open. He then sprints in close to the opponent and throws forward both arms in rapid succesion, first the fist then palm strike.
Severe storm 8
Type: Offensive
Range: close
Stats:
Description:
Sai rushes in close with his knives drawn and unleashes a rapid assault of slashes upon the opponents body


And an upgrade to my sig. technique

Meteors impact 8
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:
Description:
Sai's signature technique, he sprints at full speed from a long distance and dives into the opponent knee or elbow first, putting all of his weight, speed and power into a single point on the opponents body. Impact can knock opponent back.
Edited by StiX, Dec 20 2012, 04:20 PM.
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Luna Sol can not make opponents stumble back at that rank. You need 14 for that gatling to knock back as well.

Sever storm is pretty specific still and should be a higher rank more like 10-12. Those slashes being numbered and such, you can do multiple slashes but in the sense of a random gatling not so much in a specific number of slashes. Could work as an 8 I guess.

Meteors impact should be guard breaking and knocking back. Knocking people off their feet is more of a Rank 14 thing.
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Edited, so if I took off a few slashes and gave some specific strikes would the rank go down on severe storm?
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If you just said "rapidly slashes randomly" or something it'd be much easier to approve.

for rank 8 normal guy you only get either guard break or knockback, not both.
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Severe Storm is a gatling and needs to be rank 8.
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