Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Posted Image

Welcome to One Piece RP. We hope you enjoy your visit.

Set sail with your own, unique character in the world of One Piece! Make some friends, join a crew, and sail to adventure!

Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
New Techniques; [Flagged][Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 12 2012, 07:15 PM (206 Views)
IcemanDrake
Member Avatar
Slice 'N Dice
[ *  * ]
Character: Travis Himura
Request: Adding 2 new techniques

Changes:

Techniques
Viper Reverse Flash (8)
Type: Defensive
Range: Short Range
Stats: -
Description: This technique is used as a counterattack against a thrust or charge. Travis sidesteps a forward-moving opponent and moves past them. In doing so, he unsheathes one of his swords and spins in a full circle, adding momentum and centrifugal force to the strength of the sword swing, which is then aimed at either the opponent's back or the back of the neck using the blunt end of the blade.


Azure Talon (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: 5 m
Stats: -
Description: Travis holds one of his blade at his side, gripping the hilt tightly. He then performs a horizontal swing that launches an air compressed projectile towards the target

Edited by IcemanDrake, Dec 13 2012, 08:02 PM.
Posted Image

Posted ImageTravis Himura • Quartermaster • Swordsman • Shining Black PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 368 • Beli: 99,300,000 • Location: Echelon Island, Route Five, Grand Line
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Singularity
Member Avatar
Dairy 4 T4
[ *  *  *  * ]
These seem pretty fine, I know it's a little picky but rather than long range could you perhaps put 10 m just so it's Little clearer. Assuming that's done

Topic is flagged for approval.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
Things i look at when i'm feeling blue

King of the Pirates


An Unreachable Dream


Finally a Father, they make you so proud
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
IcemanDrake
Member Avatar
Slice 'N Dice
[ *  * ]
Sure, no problem. Edited.
Posted Image

Posted ImageTravis Himura • Quartermaster • Swordsman • Shining Black PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 368 • Beli: 99,300,000 • Location: Echelon Island, Route Five, Grand Line
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Darkhunter
Member Avatar
Anti-Pika Specialist
[ *  *  *  * ]
10 m is pretty long for a rank 14, they're meant to be pretty short range. i'd say cut that in half.
Posted Image
happiest day ever

Neon is a prophet

the characters

Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
IcemanDrake
Member Avatar
Slice 'N Dice
[ *  * ]
Alrighty. Edited.
Posted Image

Posted ImageTravis Himura • Quartermaster • Swordsman • Shining Black PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 368 • Beli: 99,300,000 • Location: Echelon Island, Route Five, Grand Line
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
AngelMayLaugh
Member Avatar
my life
[ *  *  *  * ]
Topic is flagged for approval.
Head Courier Weapon Specialist/Courier WORMS Division Beli: ::beli:: 50,750,000
Posted Image
Location: Skypiea, Grand Line [Sky Islands]
Ϯ Enlightened Servant Ϯ Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist Ϯ Hot Rockets Ϯ Beli: ::beli:: 90,000,000 ϮPosted Image
Location: Raijin Island, New World [Row One]
Fashion Star Inventor/Designer/Merchant Fiore Beli: ::beli:: 61,105,000Posted Image
Location: Couture Island, Grand Line [Sea Train Zone]
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Emoisum
Member Avatar
What.
[ *  *  *  * ]
Your topic had been reviewed!
LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
Posted Image
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · Graded/Reviewed · Next Topic »
Add Reply