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Topic Started: Dec 7 2012, 05:24 PM (1,183 Views)
Darkhunter
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Basic Character Information
Name: Tobai Oda
Nickname: "That son of a *beep*" Censored for children
Age:32
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marines
Rank (Commendations):Lieutenant (9).
Achievements: Actually managed to get a job
Once beat up a sheep thief
Profession:~Thief
The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either. Thieves will gain an extra 10% in Beli rewards in all Storylines they complete (for themselves).

~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.

~Weapon Specialist
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons

~Smith
A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy.
Position: Village security


Physical Appearance
Height: 5'11
Weight: 160
Hair:Long red hair tied at the back into a ponytail that ends at the mid back. The front of his hair however is spiked and completely without order looking as if he has eternal bed head.
Eyes: green
Clothing/Accessories: He always wears nice professional dress clothes, black and white since he took the idea of girls go for nice dressed guys to heart. sometimes however he goes more casual though thats usually when he's completely alone. He also sometimes wear sunglasses even at night cause thats just how cool he is.
General Appearance: Of average height and size with some muscle to him though not a great deal he appears rather well average only his hair really standing out at first glance. On each ear are 2 silver claws that go through his ears like earrings. On both arms are tribal armband tattoos that go around his biceps. He's also quite tan and has a strong aquiline chin, besides that there isn't really any notable features about him.

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The Character
Personality:Tobai is extremely lazy he rather not do much at all, in fact he's a terrible cop only keeping his job because he was a criminal himself in his past and merely asks his friends not to cause too much trouble. He's very charming, something of a ladies man. Thats part of the reason why he ever even wanted to be a cop in the first place, giving up his life of crime. He had heard once that women love a guy with power and a uniform. Seeing that the only spots that matched the description of that in their local shit hole of a island was being part of the village security he took the job though never was once promoted due to his terrible work ethics. He is very defensive of ladies however, a true gentleman when it comes down to it even though he has a motive for always defending women no matter the situation. He's also despite his faults quite a good friend, he'll complain about it the entire time but he'll never leave a friend in trouble.

Hometown: Organ Island, East Blue
History: Tobai was born a runt to be blunt. Short and poor wasn't a good combination as a child so most times people would have taken advantage of him or even seen him as an easy target. But nope; not Tobai. He was clever and learned that being able to talk yourself out of a situation was just as useful as being big or strong. He had 4 friends growing up though as with what happens many times they stopped talking as much and grew apart around the time after puberty.

Once puberty came Tobai shot up to height growing finally to a decent size and developing muscle. Happy with this turn of events Tobai decided he wanted to get strong and become a weapon master so that he could run the city as a crime boss. That however never happened as after a month of training with the tonfas though he'd initially wanted katana training he gave up as it was way too much work for him.

As a teenager and young adult Tobai got caught up with the bad side of town pretty easily, he became a petty thief and a card shark. He was infamous for being a bad boy with a smooth tongue and constantly trying to pick up women though to the bafflement of all the men failing almost all the time. Hearing once from a woman that a man in a uniform with power was the most attractive thing ever Tobai instantly decided he'd do exactly that to increase his luck with the ladies.

First step was getting a suit, you had to look good of course. Second came the actual part of getting a job. This would be the first he had ever had so that he assumed would be an annoying challege in which he'd have to talk them into trusting him. Surprisingly however he was wrong his first hope had been with the village security force and he was in luck as they had no requirements and were short of people, in other words they were extremely desperate for people to the point that they'd take anyone. He proved however that he was a terrible keeper of the peace however his entire time since then, having only once ever stopped a crime by accidentally bumping into a man stealing a sheep who freaked out and ran away leaving the sheep behind. Other than that he's always just simply asked people to not do crimes because that would make him have to do work.

Then came that dreaded day. The marines had come to town calling for a draft of 5 young able bodied men from the village. Apparently he was considered young enough because he was the first one among the village elected to be sent into the marines. Cursing under his breath he donned the marine uniform and went out into the world of the marines. He was constantly being yelled at by his superiors about his lack of dedication to his tasks as he was fond of instead flirting with girls or taking naps rather than actually be on the watch for pirates and other stuff. Shuffled around between different divisions as somewhat of a problem child his promotions were very slow coming as well as his development as a marine.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Tobai uses fancy feet work dancing around the opponent while striking them hard with tonfas using them in perfect timing to both attack and defend quickly when necessary. When transformed however his style changes somewhat relying heavily on raw power to beat down the opponent.
Weaponry: Two iron tonfas each having a pole about 2 and a half feet in length.
Items:A deck of playing cards
Beli:17,980,000
Upkeep:
SD Earned: 92
Stat Points: 124
SD Remaining:
Stats: 124
  • Used for Stats: 124
  • Used for Fortune:

    • Strength:37(31+6)
    • Speed: 31
    • Stamina:31
    • Accuracy:31
    • Fortune:31
Traits:
Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of the Paramecia, Zoan or Logia type.
Mighty Strength (1 Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%.
Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist.
Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name:Inu Inu no Mi [Dog Dog Fruit] - Model:Spotted Hyena
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: Allows the user to transform completely or partially into a spotted hyena


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:62
Used Regular Technique Points:21
Special Technique Points:
Used Special Technique Points:

Techniques
Hyena Hybrid Transformation (13)(4+9)(free df technique)
Type:Transformation
Range:Self
Stats: + 5 strength, +5 speed, +4 stamina, +5 accuracy
Description: Tobai will transform into a hybrid between man and hyena his body growing in size to 10 feet in height his upper body growing much thicker in mass while his legs bend inward to help support the weight. His mouth elongates a few inches filling with thick bone crushing teeth. His fingers and toes are tipped with sharp claws. While in this form he's known to laugh loudly in a cackling noise. His body becomes covered in short brown hair with black spots. While in this form he also becomes much more aggressive than normal.
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Hyena Transformation (4)(free df technique)
Type:Transformation
Range: Self
Stats: + 3 strength, +2 speed, +3 stamina, +2 accuracy
Description: Tobai will transform completely into a spotted hyena, with its short large massed body covered in brown fur and black spots. It has incredibly bone crushing jaw power with powerful teeth meant for eating anything. Tobai will laugh loudly periodically in this form in a cackling noise. While in this form he also becomes much more aggressive than normal.
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Crunch (8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats:
Description: Tobai will launch toward his target while transformed biting down with force enough to crush wood and bone.
Turning the Clock (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats:
Description: Tobai will spin around bringing his tonfa with his as he holds out his hand using a backhanded smash to strike an opponent with his tonfa.



Development History
Gains/Losses:
Edit Log:Scoop from Samuel Bellamy
17 SD gained, 4 commendations gained, 3,000,000 Beli gained777 Captured!
Gained 14 SD and 3,500,000 Beli - Lucky Number 777 Prologue
gained 5 sd -3 year anniversary
Gained 12 SD, 2,760,000 beli, and 1 commendation - "Lucky" 777 Part 2
Gained 6SD, 2,250,00 beli, and ghost shoesPrayer of the Refugee
Gained 6 SD, and 1,595,000 beli, and a sticky bun Dance with the Osulans
Gained 4 SD, and 760,000 beli - "Lucky" 777 Finale
Gained 7 SD, 4commendations, and 1,010,000 beli - Resistance is Futile
gained 3 sd from contest Contest from October/November
gained 2 sd from this Event Remember?
10 sd and 4,950,000 beli earned Brick Blues Restoration
5 sd and 2,000,000 beli earned Sirius Dies SL
Scooped from Sirius
1sd December contest

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Emoisum
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Alright, well.

This isn't a real review because I don't feel like it right now; I'll see about doing one tomorrow.

However, to save you time: Both Icy and I agree that the 'Spotted Hyena' is unnecessary. As you know- and it's brought up several times before- if models are far too similar and like in most cases, aesthetically, we don't need several of them running around.

You've got 50+ SD and you're going into a scoop. You're free to take the normal Hyena or Ancient Hyena, otherwise, man. The same goes for stuff like, I don't know, Snow Leopard? Only example to come to mind.

Aesthetically wise, you can have the character have spots: I have't actually read the profile thoroughly or if they're any significance- maybe you're just trying to be different.

plz chge it liek a bro bro
LEXINGTON ADAMS JR. • CAPTAIN • TACTICIAN • SHOCK TROOPERSCommendations: 76 • SD Earned: 526 • ID: 37894-209 • Location: Grand Line
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Alright figured i'd put the exact one since there actually is a rather large difference, half of hyena species are more tanky the other more agile and smaller. The tanky ones are bone crushers specially made with the 4th strongest jaw power in the world of any animal, the others are fast and meant to outrun prey. So seemed like big enough difference to warrant different models. Also inu inu is technically incorrect since they're not dogs but I couldn't think of what to classify them under if you have any ideas. And nah just this is good Emo.
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★ You have a lonely [/url] tag at the bottom.

Other than that, everything else seems okay. The zoan issue is still a little bit iffy, but I'll leave that to a higher power moderator's discretion as to whether or not to approve the character.



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Nya pointed out my fortune was off by 1 so I changed that

plz don't take away my flag though ;( but I know you must.
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Yuan
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I really want to give you the approval... But there is still a discrepancy that I cannot overlook.

You have 79 ESD marked down, but your gains/losses only adds up to 69... I went back to your scooped character and saw he has 52 ESD listed, but adding up his gains/losses, they only amount to 42...

You have 10 SD that don't seem to be accounted for in your gains/losses. Please account for them!

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Frostbite Pirates Division 1 • Bounty: 76,000,000 Beli • SD Earned: 365 •
Beli: 66,000,000 • Ship: Ice BreakerLocation: Red Line Rapids
Strength: 63 • Speed: 65 • Stamina: 62 • Accuracy: 62 • Fortune: 93 • Action Economy: 5

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17+14+5+12+4+7+3+2+10+5=79
17+14=31
31+5=36
36+12=48
48+4=52
52+7=59
59+3=62
62+2=64
64+10=74
74+5=79
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Yuan
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Huh, seems my math was off.

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Pirate • Assassin • First Mate
Frostbite Pirates Division 1 • Bounty: 76,000,000 Beli • SD Earned: 365 •
Beli: 66,000,000 • Ship: Ice BreakerLocation: Red Line Rapids
Strength: 63 • Speed: 65 • Stamina: 62 • Accuracy: 62 • Fortune: 93 • Action Economy: 5

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Your character has been approved.

From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here.

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Kunugi

Pirate • Assassin • First Mate
Frostbite Pirates Division 1 • Bounty: 76,000,000 Beli • SD Earned: 365 •
Beli: 66,000,000 • Ship: Ice BreakerLocation: Red Line Rapids
Strength: 63 • Speed: 65 • Stamina: 62 • Accuracy: 62 • Fortune: 93 • Action Economy: 5

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