Precision Strike (1 Trait) – Through intense training with their weapon of choice these weapon masters are able to hit with pin point accuracy in vital area's, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.
Swordsmanship Techniques
Dance of the Diamondback (4) Type: Offensive Range: 10m Stats:N/A
Description:Izuru darts past an opponent performing a single slice as he does so.
Dance of the Viper (8) Type: Offensive Range: 10m Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru darts past an opponent cutting them several times in seemingly a single instant as he does so.
Dance of the Lunging Cobra (8) Type: Offensive Range: 10 Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru stabs his sword towards an opponent in a volley of thrusts.
Dance of the Leaping Mamba (24) Type: Offensive Range: 25m Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru swings his sword with such force and technique that he is able to produce a shockwave up to (rank)m in length that will fly towards his opponent.
Dance of the Encircling Boa Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8) Type: Offensive Range: 30m Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon missing an opponent will circle round and come back at them much in the same way a boomerang would.
Dance of the Writhing Python Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8) Type: Offensive Range: 30m Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon hitting a surface will rebound altering it's trajectory able to rebound up to rank/4 times before dissipating, when rebounding of something such as a weapon or armour it cannot penetrate the person attached to it will be knocked back.
Dance of the Brittle Grass-snake Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8) Type: Offensive Range: 30m Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon hitting an obstacle it cannot cut through the shockwave will in essence shatter into fragments that will then continue traveling forward making blocking it tricky.
Dance of the Wheeling Krait Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8) Type: Offensive Range: 30m Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru performs a shockwave producing slash but in this case spins as he does it so that the sharp edged shockwave is stretched into a full circle that remains in place as long as he keeps spinning, he is also able to use this move whilst horizontal in the air at which point it acts as a wheel the basis for it’s name. To break the technique’s momentum strength equal or greater to izuru’s is required. Once momentum is halted and the technique is finished the shockwave will travel outward for (Rank)m slicing through whatever it comes in contact with.
Dance of the Ceaseless Taipan Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 36(24+12) Type: Offensive Range: 30m Stats: N/A
Description: In this he strikes with such speed and precision that a shockwave is released from his blade, but the cut is made with such velocity that the shockwave does not hold within it the power of one strike but (speed/10), when hit by this shockwave the force will be transferred into the target sending them flying through the air as they are hit in quick succession by each of the individual strikes.
Secret Technique: Last Dance of the King Cobra Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 44(24+20) Type: Offensive Range: Close Stats: -44 Stamina
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but in this instance the shockwave is not released to fly at the enemy from range, it is instead released at the point of impact allowing it to bypass skin, armor or other defenses to cause heavy internal lacerations.
Description: Izuru oscillates his sword causing high frequency vibrations to travel down the blade causing the weapon to give off a low humming. The vibrations exponentially increase the weapons cutting power and give it’s strikes armor piercing capabilities.
Description: Izuru parries an opponent causing the vibrations of his weapon to travel across to the offending limb. The vibrations are of a specific frequency that will cause the muscle tissue to relax leading to a limb turning to jelly and a heavy drop in strength. This debuff will last for 6 posts and has a cool down of just as long.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Minor issues mostly, for the r8 techs, I know you got 100 speed but that isn't calculated into the technique itself. In execution it will be as you describe it but for a technique it is ranked too low. The multiple limb thing the single instant details are too much to be a rank 8.
Dance of Encircling Boa could use another 4 ranks. It is a pretty large slash still. And Dance of Writhing Python should be (rank/4) in terms of rebounds and another 4 ranks. Same for Brittle grassnake, another 4 ranks. and same for Ceaseless Taipan. These are all powerful techniques as they are really.
The rest is fine.
AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
The Antagonists
Ryan D. Glasgow ♠ Shonen Badboy / Prince of Void Martial Artist / Inventor / Artist / Con-Artist ♠ G.H.O.S.T. Division Shadow 4 Rank: Rear Admiral ♠ Commendations: 255 SD Earned: 665/715 ♠ Beli: 8,525,000 ♠ Location: Grand Line - Other Islands Strength: 90 / Speed: 120 / Stamina: 128 / Accuracy: 120 / Fortune: 107 Kurogami Kiryuu ♣ Cool Loser / Knight of Hope Chef / Thief / Weapon Specialist / Smith ♣ Chaos Weave (Pirates) Fame: Total Nobody ♣ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 491 ♣ Beli: 96,900,000 ♣ Location: Grand Line - Paradise, Route 2 Strength: 86 / Speed: 84 / Stamina: 84 / Accuracy: 84 / Fortune: 89 Venka Sparks ╬ Yankii Princess / Witch of Heart Assassin / Martial Artist / Courier / Smith ╬ Letter W.O.R.M.S. Rank: Lieutenant Commander ╬ Commendations: 30 SD Earned: 334 ╬ Beli: 15,200,000 ╬ Location: Grand Line - Sky Islands Strength: 85 / Speed: 71 / Stamina: 71 / Accuracy: 71 / Fortune: 74 September Ní Duibhsíth ▼ Kuudere Killer / Thief of Heart Inventor / Smith / Assassin / Marksman ▼ Insert Name Fame: Total Nobody ▼ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 32 ▼ Beli: 6,900,000 ▼ Location: Blues, who even cares about this kiddie pool... Strength: 12 / Speed: 20 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 20 / Fortune: 19
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Show the actual ranks of the branches, not just the math for how you get the ranks. K?
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Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Didn't really think about it before but dance of the viper feels more like at rank 8 it should be a single cut maybe rank 12 or 14 for mutli cutting. Other than that you look good.
Talked with Rayne about it, that fluff got me confused due to his own speed.
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
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