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Topic Started: Nov 29 2012, 10:38 AM (290 Views)
Singularity
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Precision Strike (1 Trait) – Through intense training with their weapon of choice these weapon masters are able to hit with pin point accuracy in vital area's, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.

Swordsmanship Techniques

Dance of the Diamondback (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: 10m
Stats:N/A
Description:Izuru darts past an opponent performing a single slice as he does so.
Dance of the Viper (8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 10m
Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru darts past an opponent cutting them several times in seemingly a single instant as he does so.

Dance of the Lunging Cobra (8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 10
Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru stabs his sword towards an opponent in a volley of thrusts.
Dance of the Leaping Mamba (24)
Type: Offensive
Range: 25m
Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru swings his sword with such force and technique that he is able to produce a shockwave up to (rank)m in length that will fly towards his opponent.
Dance of the Encircling Boa Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30m
Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon missing an opponent will circle round and come back at them much in the same way a boomerang would.
Dance of the Writhing Python Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30m
Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon hitting a surface will rebound altering it's trajectory able to rebound up to rank/4 times before dissipating, when rebounding of something such as a weapon or armour it cannot penetrate the person attached to it will be knocked back.
Dance of the Brittle Grass-snake Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30m
Stats: N/A
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but this one is done in such a way that upon hitting an obstacle it cannot cut through the shockwave will in essence shatter into fragments that will then continue traveling forward making blocking it tricky.
Dance of the Wheeling Krait Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 32(24+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30m
Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru performs a shockwave producing slash but in this case spins as he does it so that the sharp edged shockwave is stretched into a full circle that remains in place as long as he keeps spinning, he is also able to use this move whilst horizontal in the air at which point it acts as a wheel the basis for it’s name. To break the technique’s momentum strength equal or greater to izuru’s is required. Once momentum is halted and the technique is finished the shockwave will travel outward for (Rank)m slicing through whatever it comes in contact with.

Dance of the Ceaseless Taipan Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 36(24+12)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30m
Stats: N/A
Description: In this he strikes with such speed and precision that a shockwave is released from his blade, but the cut is made with such velocity that the shockwave does not hold within it the power of one strike but (speed/10), when hit by this shockwave the force will be transferred into the target sending them flying through the air as they are hit in quick succession by each of the individual strikes.
Secret Technique: Last Dance of the King Cobra Branched from Dance of the Leaping Mamba 44(24+20)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: -44 Stamina
Description: Much like it's preceding technique Izuru will perform a slash that produces a shockwave but in this instance the shockwave is not released to fly at the enemy from range, it is instead released at the point of impact allowing it to bypass skin, armor or other defenses to cause heavy internal lacerations.
Rattlesnake’s Melody (36)
Type: Supplementry
Range: self
Stats: N/A
Description: Izuru oscillates his sword causing high frequency vibrations to travel down the blade causing the weapon to give off a low humming. The vibrations exponentially increase the weapons cutting power and give it’s strikes armor piercing capabilities.
Rattlesnake’s Sonata Branched from Rattlesnakes melody 44(36+8)
Type: Defensive
Range: 10m
Stats: -44 strength
Description: Izuru parries an opponent causing the vibrations of his weapon to travel across to the offending limb. The vibrations are of a specific frequency that will cause the muscle tissue to relax leading to a limb turning to jelly and a heavy drop in strength. This debuff will last for 6 posts and has a cool down of just as long.

Edited by Singularity, Dec 4 2012, 11:19 AM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Minor issues mostly, for the r8 techs, I know you got 100 speed but that isn't calculated into the technique itself. In execution it will be as you describe it but for a technique it is ranked too low. The multiple limb thing the single instant details are too much to be a rank 8.

Dance of Encircling Boa could use another 4 ranks. It is a pretty large slash still. And Dance of Writhing Python should be (rank/4) in terms of rebounds and another 4 ranks. Same for Brittle grassnake, another 4 ranks. and same for Ceaseless Taipan. These are all powerful techniques as they are really.

The rest is fine.
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Dance of the Viper is still to fluffy for me but eh, not gonna stop you from getting approved based on that.

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Show the actual ranks of the branches, not just the math for how you get the ranks. K?
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Didn't really think about it before but dance of the viper feels more like at rank 8 it should be a single cut maybe rank 12 or 14 for mutli cutting. Other than that you look good.

Talked with Rayne about it, that fluff got me confused due to his own speed.
Edited by Darkhunter, Dec 5 2012, 12:15 AM.
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