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Smokey's at it again; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Nov 28 2012, 04:00 PM (551 Views)
Darkhunter
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Character: Leandumb Haterings
Request:Moar techs plz? and upgrading base df
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moku moku no mi(50)(4+46)
Type: Free DF ability
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Description:This fruit enables the eater to become a smoke man. They are capable of transforming themselves into smoke, producing smoke, and manipulating it however they see fit. The smoke itself can not withstand constant high powered winds, though moderate winds under that of storms can be resisted easily.

rank 8 A cool yet useless ability he has figured out is that he can change the colors of his smoke as well as fly and levitate

rank 14. Leander has attained great mastery over his fruit. He can completely control the density of his smoke to the utmost levels. He can make his smoke dense it is quite literally a physical force, when it is this dense it becomes extremely difficult to blow away even compared to normal standards. At the opposite end of the spectrum he can make his smoke vapor thin almost to a gas-like level to where it can slip through even the smallest of cracks in a surface however the smoke is much more susceptible to being blown away like this.

Rank 28. Leander's control over his devil fruit has allowed him to naturally control his smoke to shift his body in any way shape or form as well. Additionally his smoke can be breathed in now to cause choking.

Rank 44. Leander has mastered the ability of his fruit and can control smoke freely to a master degree, where he is able to be in a constant phase of smoke to the point he can avoid attacks directed at him without knowledge of them. His smoke now is capable of resisting most winds allowing him to remain in his smoke state for a short time being without being completely blown away.
Dragon's Wing Guard Defense(50)
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
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Description: Leander transforms from one or both of his into arms large dragon wings 1/4th the size of this tech rank in yards height and 1/2 the rank in yards length. The smoke is so densely packed that it offers his most superior defense blocking all techs used that are less than or equal to 3/4ths the rank of this tech. Since it is his arm tranformed into smoke however attacks greater than this will damage his physical body, and this technique is also weak to powerful constant windstorms.
Haki Superior Detection(20)(14+6)(branched from haki potential)
Type: supplementary(observation)
Range: long
Stats:
Description:Leander focusing on a area equal to the rank of this tech in yards is able to get a approximate feel of the potential everyone within it has (guessing at their fortune level +/-5 margin of error) as well as tell if they possess haki though he can't distinguish type.
White Arrows (20)(14+6)(branched from White Hunter)
Type: Offensive
Range: mid-long
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Description: Leander does the same as the original technique however this time he hardens the tips of his smoke tentacles to a fine point with armaments haki so that they are capable to piercing through defenses his smoke could normally breach through blunt damage.
Bubonic(4)
Type: Supplementary
Range:
Stats: -2 stamina
Description:Leander creates up to 3 of these every sl. This is a strong virus that is airborn and made to travel within Leander's smoke. When coming into contact with a person they will become infected with the virus which causes itching rashes on victims.
Bubonic Malitosis(8)
Type: Supplementary
Range:
Stats: -5 stamina
Description:Leander creates up to 4 of these every sl. This is a strong virus that is airborn and made to travel within Leander's smoke. When coming into contact with a person they will become infected with the virus which causes blistering sores to appear on the victims, nausea, vomiting.

Edited by Darkhunter, Dec 13 2012, 06:42 PM.
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My only question is Revenge Curtain, how is your smoke elastic suddenly? You can change the density but elasticity has nothing to do with that. It's either solid enough to block things or it isn't. What you could do, is trap anything and anyone attacking the wall in your smoke according to that set standard.
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oh thats a haki barrier actually xD probably should have mentioned that. I figured it would be kinda obvious. I don't think a smoke wall would really have any type of effect to it other than being stuck in it maybe if the density was powerful enough.
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I uh... Guess? Still feel more as if they should just go splat like a fly on a windshield tbh, instead of doing Mirror Force... Let's put a cooldown on that technique though or you can just spam it. 6 posts. Other than that:

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Haki has never shown reflective properties, sounds more like custom haki than something armor haki can do.
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well its is rank 44 you'd think itd be a tad bit more supernatural and better than just standard rank 14 and 28 barriers and haki already deflects stuff so sending the force back at the target isn't that drastic imo. And a cooldown doesn't really make much sense or are we cool downing all barriers and haki techs as well?

And now to take a long nap, cause that took the last of tonight's energy.
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It can do what haki does better, in that it can block stronger attacks. But it can't just magically get properties that haki doesn't have, in the same way fire can't turn solid at rank 44.
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http://www.mangapanda.com/103-56928-12/one-piece/chapter-597.html
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http://www.mangapanda.com/103-56928-13/one-piece/chapter-597.html

already showed it to rayne but it seemed like he made a barrier which caused damage to the elephant since he was using the invisible armor example.

but yeah if everyone hates it I can just remove it for something thats a lot better defensively I just thought it was a cool idea and original.
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Honestly it can kind of work, just needs a better wording. It'd better if you damaged enemies that hit with your armour than their attack reflecting back at them.

I'd reflag this, but you didn't change a thing ._.
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Okay changed the description a little but question? Would this like send bullets and supernaturally stuff back cause that was the general idea behind it. Like bullet hits it, bullet sent flying back at shooter.
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I'd say it rather work like an impact dial, sending the force back for melee but bullets and such get launched back strongly diminished. Something between matrix bullet-stopping and full on mirror force. Anywho,

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k got rid of it cause it lost its cool appeal in my head. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Fickleness only makes my modface stronger.

Reflagged, yet again.
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Same problem I had with cotton arbitraly having the ability to change cOlor at will make no sense, if you want the ability to shift through the colours smoke naturally has ie white to black cool story, I honk you can even get sOme wierd ones in the from burning chemicals but giving every color is a bit much, though appreciated citing every possibl color of smoke migh be a bit much so applicable ranges Oc color will do

I might be wrong on this so your welcom to disagree w
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Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Same problem I had with cotton arbitraly having the ability to change cOlor at will make no sense, if you want the ability to shift through the colours smoke naturally has ie white to black cool story, I honk you can even get sOme wierd ones in the from burning chemicals but giving every color is a bit much, though appreciated citing every possibl color of smoke migh be a bit much so applicable ranges Oc color will do

I might be wrong on this so your welcom to disagree wIth me
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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