Character:Leandumb Haterings Request:Moar techs plz? and upgrading base df Changes:
moku
moku moku no mi(50)(4+46) Type: Free DF ability Range: Stats:
Description:This fruit enables the eater to become a smoke man. They are capable of transforming themselves into smoke, producing smoke, and manipulating it however they see fit. The smoke itself can not withstand constant high powered winds, though moderate winds under that of storms can be resisted easily.
rank 8 A cool yet useless ability he has figured out is that he can change the colors of his smoke as well as fly and levitate
rank 14. Leander has attained great mastery over his fruit. He can completely control the density of his smoke to the utmost levels. He can make his smoke dense it is quite literally a physical force, when it is this dense it becomes extremely difficult to blow away even compared to normal standards. At the opposite end of the spectrum he can make his smoke vapor thin almost to a gas-like level to where it can slip through even the smallest of cracks in a surface however the smoke is much more susceptible to being blown away like this.
Rank 28. Leander's control over his devil fruit has allowed him to naturally control his smoke to shift his body in any way shape or form as well. Additionally his smoke can be breathed in now to cause choking.
Rank 44. Leander has mastered the ability of his fruit and can control smoke freely to a master degree, where he is able to be in a constant phase of smoke to the point he can avoid attacks directed at him without knowledge of them. His smoke now is capable of resisting most winds allowing him to remain in his smoke state for a short time being without being completely blown away.
Description: Leander transforms from one or both of his into arms large dragon wings 1/4th the size of this tech rank in yards height and 1/2 the rank in yards length. The smoke is so densely packed that it offers his most superior defense blocking all techs used that are less than or equal to 3/4ths the rank of this tech. Since it is his arm tranformed into smoke however attacks greater than this will damage his physical body, and this technique is also weak to powerful constant windstorms.
Haki Superior Detection(20)(14+6)(branched from haki potential) Type: supplementary(observation) Range: long Stats:
Description:Leander focusing on a area equal to the rank of this tech in yards is able to get a approximate feel of the potential everyone within it has (guessing at their fortune level +/-5 margin of error) as well as tell if they possess haki though he can't distinguish type.
White Arrows (20)(14+6)(branched from White Hunter) Type: Offensive Range: mid-long Stats:
Description: Leander does the same as the original technique however this time he hardens the tips of his smoke tentacles to a fine point with armaments haki so that they are capable to piercing through defenses his smoke could normally breach through blunt damage.
Description:Leander creates up to 3 of these every sl. This is a strong virus that is airborn and made to travel within Leander's smoke. When coming into contact with a person they will become infected with the virus which causes itching rashes on victims.
Description:Leander creates up to 4 of these every sl. This is a strong virus that is airborn and made to travel within Leander's smoke. When coming into contact with a person they will become infected with the virus which causes blistering sores to appear on the victims, nausea, vomiting.
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
My only question is Revenge Curtain, how is your smoke elastic suddenly? You can change the density but elasticity has nothing to do with that. It's either solid enough to block things or it isn't. What you could do, is trap anything and anyone attacking the wall in your smoke according to that set standard.
AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
The Antagonists
Ryan D. Glasgow ♠ Shonen Badboy / Prince of Void Martial Artist / Inventor / Artist / Con-Artist ♠ G.H.O.S.T. Division Shadow 4 Rank: Rear Admiral ♠ Commendations: 255 SD Earned: 665/715 ♠ Beli: 8,525,000 ♠ Location: Grand Line - Other Islands Strength: 90 / Speed: 120 / Stamina: 128 / Accuracy: 120 / Fortune: 107 Kurogami Kiryuu ♣ Cool Loser / Knight of Hope Chef / Thief / Weapon Specialist / Smith ♣ Chaos Weave (Pirates) Fame: Total Nobody ♣ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 491 ♣ Beli: 96,900,000 ♣ Location: Grand Line - Paradise, Route 2 Strength: 86 / Speed: 84 / Stamina: 84 / Accuracy: 84 / Fortune: 89 Venka Sparks ╬ Yankii Princess / Witch of Heart Assassin / Martial Artist / Courier / Smith ╬ Letter W.O.R.M.S. Rank: Lieutenant Commander ╬ Commendations: 30 SD Earned: 334 ╬ Beli: 15,200,000 ╬ Location: Grand Line - Sky Islands Strength: 85 / Speed: 71 / Stamina: 71 / Accuracy: 71 / Fortune: 74 September Ní Duibhsíth ▼ Kuudere Killer / Thief of Heart Inventor / Smith / Assassin / Marksman ▼ Insert Name Fame: Total Nobody ▼ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 32 ▼ Beli: 6,900,000 ▼ Location: Blues, who even cares about this kiddie pool... Strength: 12 / Speed: 20 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 20 / Fortune: 19
oh thats a haki barrier actually xD probably should have mentioned that. I figured it would be kinda obvious. I don't think a smoke wall would really have any type of effect to it other than being stuck in it maybe if the density was powerful enough.
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Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
I uh... Guess? Still feel more as if they should just go splat like a fly on a windshield tbh, instead of doing Mirror Force... Let's put a cooldown on that technique though or you can just spam it. 6 posts. Other than that:
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AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
The Antagonists
Ryan D. Glasgow ♠ Shonen Badboy / Prince of Void Martial Artist / Inventor / Artist / Con-Artist ♠ G.H.O.S.T. Division Shadow 4 Rank: Rear Admiral ♠ Commendations: 255 SD Earned: 665/715 ♠ Beli: 8,525,000 ♠ Location: Grand Line - Other Islands Strength: 90 / Speed: 120 / Stamina: 128 / Accuracy: 120 / Fortune: 107 Kurogami Kiryuu ♣ Cool Loser / Knight of Hope Chef / Thief / Weapon Specialist / Smith ♣ Chaos Weave (Pirates) Fame: Total Nobody ♣ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 491 ♣ Beli: 96,900,000 ♣ Location: Grand Line - Paradise, Route 2 Strength: 86 / Speed: 84 / Stamina: 84 / Accuracy: 84 / Fortune: 89 Venka Sparks ╬ Yankii Princess / Witch of Heart Assassin / Martial Artist / Courier / Smith ╬ Letter W.O.R.M.S. Rank: Lieutenant Commander ╬ Commendations: 30 SD Earned: 334 ╬ Beli: 15,200,000 ╬ Location: Grand Line - Sky Islands Strength: 85 / Speed: 71 / Stamina: 71 / Accuracy: 71 / Fortune: 74 September Ní Duibhsíth ▼ Kuudere Killer / Thief of Heart Inventor / Smith / Assassin / Marksman ▼ Insert Name Fame: Total Nobody ▼ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 32 ▼ Beli: 6,900,000 ▼ Location: Blues, who even cares about this kiddie pool... Strength: 12 / Speed: 20 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 20 / Fortune: 19
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
well its is rank 44 you'd think itd be a tad bit more supernatural and better than just standard rank 14 and 28 barriers and haki already deflects stuff so sending the force back at the target isn't that drastic imo. And a cooldown doesn't really make much sense or are we cool downing all barriers and haki techs as well?
And now to take a long nap, cause that took the last of tonight's energy.
happiest day ever
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
It can do what haki does better, in that it can block stronger attacks. But it can't just magically get properties that haki doesn't have, in the same way fire can't turn solid at rank 44.
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
already showed it to rayne but it seemed like he made a barrier which caused damage to the elephant since he was using the invisible armor example.
but yeah if everyone hates it I can just remove it for something thats a lot better defensively I just thought it was a cool idea and original.
happiest day ever
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
Honestly it can kind of work, just needs a better wording. It'd better if you damaged enemies that hit with your armour than their attack reflecting back at them.
I'd reflag this, but you didn't change a thing ._.
AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
The Antagonists
Ryan D. Glasgow ♠ Shonen Badboy / Prince of Void Martial Artist / Inventor / Artist / Con-Artist ♠ G.H.O.S.T. Division Shadow 4 Rank: Rear Admiral ♠ Commendations: 255 SD Earned: 665/715 ♠ Beli: 8,525,000 ♠ Location: Grand Line - Other Islands Strength: 90 / Speed: 120 / Stamina: 128 / Accuracy: 120 / Fortune: 107 Kurogami Kiryuu ♣ Cool Loser / Knight of Hope Chef / Thief / Weapon Specialist / Smith ♣ Chaos Weave (Pirates) Fame: Total Nobody ♣ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 491 ♣ Beli: 96,900,000 ♣ Location: Grand Line - Paradise, Route 2 Strength: 86 / Speed: 84 / Stamina: 84 / Accuracy: 84 / Fortune: 89 Venka Sparks ╬ Yankii Princess / Witch of Heart Assassin / Martial Artist / Courier / Smith ╬ Letter W.O.R.M.S. Rank: Lieutenant Commander ╬ Commendations: 30 SD Earned: 334 ╬ Beli: 15,200,000 ╬ Location: Grand Line - Sky Islands Strength: 85 / Speed: 71 / Stamina: 71 / Accuracy: 71 / Fortune: 74 September Ní Duibhsíth ▼ Kuudere Killer / Thief of Heart Inventor / Smith / Assassin / Marksman ▼ Insert Name Fame: Total Nobody ▼ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 32 ▼ Beli: 6,900,000 ▼ Location: Blues, who even cares about this kiddie pool... Strength: 12 / Speed: 20 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 20 / Fortune: 19
Okay changed the description a little but question? Would this like send bullets and supernaturally stuff back cause that was the general idea behind it. Like bullet hits it, bullet sent flying back at shooter.
happiest day ever
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
I'd say it rather work like an impact dial, sending the force back for melee but bullets and such get launched back strongly diminished. Something between matrix bullet-stopping and full on mirror force. Anywho,
Reflagged.
AngelMayLaugh (6/9/14 8:25:03 PM): ICY BRINGING THE FIRE
The Antagonists
Ryan D. Glasgow ♠ Shonen Badboy / Prince of Void Martial Artist / Inventor / Artist / Con-Artist ♠ G.H.O.S.T. Division Shadow 4 Rank: Rear Admiral ♠ Commendations: 255 SD Earned: 665/715 ♠ Beli: 8,525,000 ♠ Location: Grand Line - Other Islands Strength: 90 / Speed: 120 / Stamina: 128 / Accuracy: 120 / Fortune: 107 Kurogami Kiryuu ♣ Cool Loser / Knight of Hope Chef / Thief / Weapon Specialist / Smith ♣ Chaos Weave (Pirates) Fame: Total Nobody ♣ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 491 ♣ Beli: 96,900,000 ♣ Location: Grand Line - Paradise, Route 2 Strength: 86 / Speed: 84 / Stamina: 84 / Accuracy: 84 / Fortune: 89 Venka Sparks ╬ Yankii Princess / Witch of Heart Assassin / Martial Artist / Courier / Smith ╬ Letter W.O.R.M.S. Rank: Lieutenant Commander ╬ Commendations: 30 SD Earned: 334 ╬ Beli: 15,200,000 ╬ Location: Grand Line - Sky Islands Strength: 85 / Speed: 71 / Stamina: 71 / Accuracy: 71 / Fortune: 74 September Ní Duibhsíth ▼ Kuudere Killer / Thief of Heart Inventor / Smith / Assassin / Marksman ▼ Insert Name Fame: Total Nobody ▼ Bounty: 0 SD Earned: 32 ▼ Beli: 6,900,000 ▼ Location: Blues, who even cares about this kiddie pool... Strength: 12 / Speed: 20 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 20 / Fortune: 19
k got rid of it cause it lost its cool appeal in my head. Sorry for the inconvenience.
happiest day ever
Hainen: That would be too easy Mon Dec 15, 4:07:30pm Hainen: Dark usually has very well-thought out and rational opinions Hainen: I shall defer to his superiour judgment
Neon is a prophet
the characters
Colin G. Fist • Martial Artist • Frostbite Pirates • Bounty: 370,000,00 • SD Earned: 1009 • Beli: 215,400,000 • Location: Grand Line Ivan• Assassin • Marksman • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 228 • Beli: 88,000,000 • Location: Grand Line
Same problem I had with cotton arbitraly having the ability to change cOlor at will make no sense, if you want the ability to shift through the colours smoke naturally has ie white to black cool story, I honk you can even get sOme wierd ones in the from burning chemicals but giving every color is a bit much, though appreciated citing every possibl color of smoke migh be a bit much so applicable ranges Oc color will do
I might be wrong on this so your welcom to disagree w
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
Same problem I had with cotton arbitraly having the ability to change cOlor at will make no sense, if you want the ability to shift through the colours smoke naturally has ie white to black cool story, I honk you can even get sOme wierd ones in the from burning chemicals but giving every color is a bit much, though appreciated citing every possibl color of smoke migh be a bit much so applicable ranges Oc color will do
I might be wrong on this so your welcom to disagree wIth me
Devil Fruit Type: Cush Cush no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit turns the user into a cushion man, given them a body filled with stuffing rather than flesh and blood, though all organs are still in place. When injured stuffing themselves back up and stitching the wound closed can accelerate healing. The user is also able to make any surface they touch soften to the consistency of a pillow giving it a soft cushiony appearance.
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