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Art of the Snow Queen; [Flagged][Flagged]
Topic Started: Nov 11 2012, 04:47 PM (197 Views)
Namine
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Character: Nyx Motley
Request: Review the following new techniques for approval.
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Art of the Snow Queen
Mistral Squall (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: A very basic technique utilizing either of the modified fans, Nyx is able to send out a slice the element respectively to the fan. Famfrit is able to send out a slice of water while Mateus sends out a slice of chilly wind; regardless of which fan is used, they are both equal in power, are utilized for their speed and are shaped in the form of a crescent moon. The difference between the two is obviously their elements.
Vehement Mistral Squall (18)
Branched from Mistral Squall
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: An improved version of Mistral Squall, Nyx is able to send out a flurry of slices belonging to their respective elements. The slices retain their original shape and have enough force to push the target back, potentially causing them to fall.
Tempest Squall (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: Nyx utilizes the twin fans, Famfrit and Mateus to create a miniature sized tornado. This is done by waving both fans towards each other in rapid succession - Famfrit provides a lukewarm wind while Mateus releases powerful gusts of cold wind. The colliding winds revolve around in a circular motion, creating the a chilly tornado.

At this rank, the tornado is approximately the size of a human (6 ft.) and lasts for approximately one post before dying down.
Whirling Tempest Squall (18)
Branched from Tempest Squall
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: A more advanced version of the Tempest Squall technique, the tornado has increased in size, speed and strength due to the fact that Famfrit releases more winds than usual and Mateus sprays water in small increments, allowing the tornado to not only slice targets with wind but small water particles as well.

At this rank, the tornado is approximately the size of two humans (12 ft.) and lasts approximately one post before dying down.
Zephyr's Tempest Squall (28)
Branched from Whirling Tempest Squall
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: A much more powerful of the Whirling Tempest Squall technique, the tornado has exponentially increased in size, speed and strength. Famfrit releases a vast amount of wind while Mateus sprays an enormous amount of water, allowing the tornado to have much stronger gale and water slices.

At this rank, the tornado is approximately the size of a three story building and lasts approximately two posts before dying down.
Rainstorm Squall (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Stats: -
Description: Pre-Requisite: Water, rain.

With either rain created by a rain cloud or water droplets released by Famfrit, Nyx can use Mateus to manipulate the direction in which they travel in; this is mostly done to send the miniature water droplets as needles, damaging the target it hits.
Snowstorm Squall (20)
Branched from Rainstorm Squall
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: Pre-Requisite: Water, snow.

With either snow created by a cloud or water droplets released by Famfrit, Nyx can use Mateus to manipulate the water to become snow as greater winds have been used. By doing so, slightly wet and cold snow comes flying towards the enemy like a downpour. Being trapped in the snow for an extended period of time can put one at danger as they are chilled and have jagged movement!
Hailstorm Squall (28)
Branched from Snowstorm Squall
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: Pre-Requisite: Water, hail.

With either hail created by a cloud or water droplets released by Famfrit, Nyx can use Mateus to manipulate the water to become hail as greater winds have been used. By doing so, hard and violent hail comes flying towards the enemy.
Veil Squall (14)
Type: Support
Range: Long
Stats: -
Description: Nyx utilizes the twin fans in order to create a foggy mist surrounding the area around her. She first utilizes Famfrit to spray water vapour into the air and then uses Mateus to chill the water droplets while spreading them over a distance. As a result of this, a veil of chilly mist is created.

Those who stay in the mist may find it slightly difficult to navigate area as their vision becomes fogged a little. It lasts for a duration of 4 posts before dissipating and can be blown away with wind or with a heat source powerful enough to break it apart.


Old Techs, don't look!

Total TP Used: 88
Edited by Namine, Dec 2 2012, 10:50 AM.
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I helped you make these techs in the first place, would be silly to get back on it now.

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im no expert in weather but from what i gathered from the anime you need hot and cold to make clouds, not just luke warm, and from the little i remember of geography. Personally i'd say you need a heat dial involved for those techs but if i'm wrong then go ahead.
Edited by Singularity, Nov 29 2012, 05:33 PM.
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Talked to Yak about it - it's possible to create clouds with the current dials I have but require a higher rank in order to do so.

Anyways, I removed the cloud creation technique and the ones that manipulate it. The "-storm" techniques remain the same because the effects can be created with the fan.

Also, I added three new techs:
  • Vehement Mistral Squall - Branched from Mistral Squall.
  • Hailstorm Squall - Branched from Snowstorm Squall.
  • Veil Squall - Last technique on the list.
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if you want a non gatling technique to branch into a gatling technique it needs to be made clear the predecessor technique focuses on speed and not power.

yeh i guess higher ranks without heat dial makes sense. Ok feel free to return the cloud techs.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Made the small edit of mentioning that it was used for their speed.
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Your topic had been reviewed!
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