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0.1k SL; Part 1 of a 10 piece story
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Topic Started: Oct 9 2012, 08:37 PM (153 Views)
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Clarity
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Oct 9 2012, 08:37 PM
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Link to SL:Supposed to be 1k SL Characters/Primary Profession: Dick Tracer - Marksman Edward Vratsanos -Thief Korowana Schikwan - Entertainer Ret'nuh Emos'ewa -Inventor
Request:Grade it Notes: Korowana has Tough Bargainer (1 Trait): Ever the successful businessman, merchants know how to extract money from people and to keep as much as they can from leaving their pocket. Thus, they will always earn 25% more Beli in their Storylines.
- This Sl is 102 posts long.
- This SL lacks any real plot but is still Only leading into the next part of the story so meh
- This SL is riddled with consistent inconsistencies in both posting length and rate note there are even some month long gaps.
- The story is convoluted as it is following 3 story lines at ones and then branches into other story lines until it eventually becomes two.
- Majority of my posts are narration.
- You have my prayers person who reads/grades this Sl.
- A.R was most consistent poster.
Edited by Clarity, Oct 9 2012, 09:05 PM.
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Characters

Sabo D.Fist • Crew Position • Profession Name • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 53 • Beli: 20,400,000 • Location: Gesso Island
Strength:22 ~ Speed:21 ~ Stamina:22 ~ Accuracy:20 ~ Fortune:24 Key Playing Points - Always compares actions to Daisuke or Kamina G.Fist
- Values the opinion of others over consequences (excluding death or great pain)

Charity Saiken• Receptionist/Test Subject/Housekeeper • She got 3 Jobs • None • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 46 • Beli: 11,900,000 • Location: Loguetown
Strength:5 ~ Speed:5 ~ Stamina:5 ~ Accuracy:5 ~ Fortune:5 Key Playing Points - One track minded to the point of delusion.
- Extremely blunt, to the point of lacking a filter
- Argumentative
- Loyal toward family
- Will occasionally subvert aforementioned traits when dealing with friends or family

Tetsuo N Youth• Misfit Pirates• Theif/MA • None • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 23 • Beli: 1,000,000 • Location: Out at Sea [East Blue] Key Playing Points - Measures the worth of others by their perceived social status
- Pretends to be fearless when in front of those he wants to impress
- Is restless when under the influence
- Either fights or runs from problems when under the influence, these decisions are made without a thought of consequence outside of whether he will be killed by it.

Tset D. Clay • Crew Position • M/A • No Crew • Bounty: 27,000,00 • SD Earned: 148 • Beli: 69,500,000 • Location: Little Garden
Strength:45 ~ Speed:45 ~ Stamina:45 ~ Accuracy:45 ~ Fortune:50 Key Playing Points - Competitive and encourages competition to an almost fanatical extent.
- Believes he will succeed at anything until he attempts it.
- Is willing to cheat in ways that do not directly effect the competitors.
- Is a good sport, but takes a defeatist approach when evidence has been presented that he cannot succeed at something.
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KileyBarker
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Oct 29 2012, 04:50 PM
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Got this
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"And says 'at last' just as the time bell rings Goodnight, now it's time to go home And he makes it fast with one more thing We are the Sultans We are the Sultans of Swing"
Characters 🐐 🐏 "I arrive, brother, for these wretched funeral rites so that I might present you with the last tribute of death and speak in vain to silent ashes" -- Catullus 101 Xia Ji Li • Thief • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 Location: N/A • Text Color: #FF00FFWilliam S. Rossamer • Smith • The Plucky Squabs • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 114 • Beli: 11,800,000 Location: South Amerigo, South Blue • Text Color: FirebrickWyatt J. Pickett • His Trusty Steed • Lawman • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 Location: N/A • Text Color: FirebrickSugar • Chef • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 24 • Beli: 6,500,000 Location: Out At Sea, North Blue • Text Color: #FF00FFLexine Al'Rhodes • WS/Thief • Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 230 • Beli: 82,600,000 Location: N/A, Grand Line • Text Color: #66CDAATheodore Ronald Reagansvelt • Cyborg Politician • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 28,100,000 Location: Grand Line (Drum Island) • Text Color: Burlywood
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KileyBarker
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Jan 5 2013, 09:53 AM
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Sorry this took so long.
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"And says 'at last' just as the time bell rings Goodnight, now it's time to go home And he makes it fast with one more thing We are the Sultans We are the Sultans of Swing"
Characters 🐐 🐏 "I arrive, brother, for these wretched funeral rites so that I might present you with the last tribute of death and speak in vain to silent ashes" -- Catullus 101 Xia Ji Li • Thief • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 Location: N/A • Text Color: #FF00FFWilliam S. Rossamer • Smith • The Plucky Squabs • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 114 • Beli: 11,800,000 Location: South Amerigo, South Blue • Text Color: FirebrickWyatt J. Pickett • His Trusty Steed • Lawman • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 Location: N/A • Text Color: FirebrickSugar • Chef • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 24 • Beli: 6,500,000 Location: Out At Sea, North Blue • Text Color: #FF00FFLexine Al'Rhodes • WS/Thief • Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 230 • Beli: 82,600,000 Location: N/A, Grand Line • Text Color: #66CDAATheodore Ronald Reagansvelt • Cyborg Politician • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 28,100,000 Location: Grand Line (Drum Island) • Text Color: Burlywood
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