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0.1k SL; Part 1 of a 10 piece story
Topic Started: Oct 9 2012, 08:37 PM (153 Views)
Clarity
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Parrot
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Link to SL:Supposed to be 1k SL
Characters/Primary Profession:
Dick Tracer - Marksman
Edward Vratsanos -Thief
Korowana Schikwan - Entertainer
Ret'nuh Emos'ewa -Inventor

Request:Grade it
Notes: Korowana has Tough Bargainer (1 Trait): Ever the successful businessman, merchants know how to extract money from people and to keep as much as they can from leaving their pocket. Thus, they will always earn 25% more Beli in their Storylines.


  • This Sl is 102 posts long.
  • This SL lacks any real plot but is still Only leading into the next part of the story so meh
  • This SL is riddled with consistent inconsistencies in both posting length and rate note there are even some month long gaps.
  • The story is convoluted as it is following 3 story lines at ones and then branches into other story lines until it eventually becomes two.
  • Majority of my posts are narration.
  • You have my prayers person who reads/grades this Sl.
  • A.R was most consistent poster.
Edited by Clarity, Oct 9 2012, 09:05 PM.
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KileyBarker
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Got this
"And says 'at last' just as the time bell rings
Goodnight, now it's time to go home
And he makes it fast with one more thing
We are the Sultans
We are the Sultans of Swing"

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KileyBarker
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Sorry this took so long.

Your topic has been Graded!
"And says 'at last' just as the time bell rings
Goodnight, now it's time to go home
And he makes it fast with one more thing
We are the Sultans
We are the Sultans of Swing"

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