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Rank 8 tech for John
Topic Started: Sep 9 2012, 05:39 PM (246 Views)
Tarne
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Character: John Dekanto

Request: Adding a tech

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Title: Big Bang Storm

Range: Melee - Long range

Stats: None

Description: John uses the blunt side of his sword and hammers it in to a metal or stone surface. From the point of impact, a controlled explosion blasts forward (half of fortune) feet in a (third of fortune) foot wide cone shape.

Not entirely sure what constitutes a rank 8, so I'm just taking a shot.
Edited by Tarne, Sep 9 2012, 05:42 PM.
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You really need to read This. It gives you specific instructions on how to fill out a request in this section. Your character name should be a link to the profile. You also need to go Here and copy the code for the techniques table and include it in your post so that the format of your technique is correct.

But before you run off to do that, let me save you some time. I am going to have to say no to this.

At technique rank 14 you can start to create shock waves or air blades, however you want to look at it... Basically sword techs with a bit of range like Zoro's "36-Pound Hou". In order for the "controlled explosion" part along with the range of the technique to all come together, I am going to say that you are going to need the ability to launch an air blade to bring it all together and make it flow.

Also, I am of the strong opinion that you need to find some way to increase the amount of gunpowder present for this technique. A light dusting of gunpowder dust clinging to the blade of your sword isn't going to produce much of an explosion at all. You're lucky that you even got the 3 and 4 ft. techs approved. In reality, that tiny amount of gunpowder isn't going to do much more than violently throw sparks. If you want an actual explosion with some force behind it, find some way to edit the tech to introduce more powder.
Edited by Yuan, Sep 12 2012, 12:52 AM.

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Are you even planning on getting a rank 8 anymore? If so I can outline something but it's like people forgot they had topics here.
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Eh I somewhat have to disagree with Yuan, it's shonen logic really and the fact that gunpowder is present by shonen logic says it'd explode. I wouldn't say it'd be like a traveling shockwave force though. it'd basically imo just be a guard breaking version of the original, have a knockback effect, or something else.
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