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Ink and some science!; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Oct 2 2011, 04:12 AM (625 Views)
NightmarexSugiru
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Character: Amilia Suigetsu
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Mastery over the art of Squid Loli
Ink Pistol (Branched from Ink shot - 14)
Type: Offensive
Range: 30 feet
Stats: -9 accuracy
Description: Amilia uses her ink sack in her mouth to muster up just enough ink to blind the opponent. She shoots her ink into the target's eyes with the strength of a pistol's bullet. The target's accuracy deteriorates for (Amilia's Fortune/Target's Accuracy) posts. The effect will always have at least a one post duration. After that, the victim regains his eye sight. This technique's limit duration is 4 posts, and at the 5th post, the victim can effectively see again.
Tentacle Whip (8)
Type: Offensive
Range: 10 feet
Stats: N/A
Description: The tentacles are used to scoop at the opponent's legs, causing them to fall on their back or front, depending on Amilia's position. It can also be used to wrap around and disable a limb. If the opponent is in motion, he/she would stop abruptly if caught by the tentacle. The opponent stopping or even budging depends on Amilia and the enemy's strength. The less strength the target has compared to Amilia, the longer the post duration.
Example
Target's Strength:Duration is in Posts; cap is 4 posts
Low: If the target's strength is lower than 1.5 of Amilia's strength, then the technique will go on for (31 - x)/2 (31 is Amilia's current strength, X is the target's strength.)
Neutral: If neutral, the technique will go on for (stamina - target's stamina, divided by 2)
High: If the target's strength is higher than 1.5 of Amilia's strength, then the technique will go on for (31 - x)/4
Higher: Any higher than 2x her strength will have little trouble with this technique, if not instantly break free.

Can only be used by tentacles that aren't being used at the moment.
Tentacle Air Whip (16)
Type: Offensive
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: Amilia twists her torso 90 degrees from where she originally stood, getting ready to spin her tentacles. She then spins at a fast pace, making her tentacles all lash out at the air. Amilia uses her tentacles to create a whip-lashing effect that is directed towards the opponent. This creates a thin wave that have destructive capabilities, along with the shockwave itself being a piercing attack.


38 used

59 regular used overall
Edited by NightmarexSugiru, Oct 24 2011, 07:42 AM.


Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
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I don't really see why ink pistol merits a rank 14 position if all it does is blind people. It could be lower ranked really. If it actually struck like a pullet as well i'd say it has a more valid reason.

Tentacle whip is cool

Tentacle air whip i'd say should be a little higher ranked for the piercing effect.
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Hm, I'll add the ink bullet striking like a bullet, and how much more would tentacle whip be?


Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
L: Grand Line Sky Islands, Legends of The Hidden Temple

Str 112 Spd 10 Stm 30 Acc 10 Ftn 63

Tournament on Karate Island

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Singularity
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ignoring the fact that the two techniques are horribly dissimilar you can't branch non-shockwaves into shockwaves.

16 for piercing effect

what kind of duration is this formula producing? there are no units, it could be minutes, hours, days, posts.
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Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

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I don't see why I can't branch, but whatevs.

Minutes Posts bro, jeez. T__T

Why is it rank 16 for piercing? 14 is the mark:

14 - This is the rank of technique when abstract or superhuman feats begin to become possible. Techniques of this rank may accomplish things difficult for normal individuals to do, such as use melee attacks at range or perform moderate feats of superhuman nature.
Edited by NightmarexSugiru, Oct 14 2011, 07:10 PM.


Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
L: Grand Line Sky Islands, Legends of The Hidden Temple

Str 112 Spd 10 Stm 30 Acc 10 Ftn 63

Tournament on Karate Island

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Crucial part here "begin to become possible" 14 is when the bare basics can be performed, so you could make a simple shockwave but for it to carry an added effect such as piercing higher ranks are needed.

This formula doesn't really work, if they have double her strength then it won't last one post it would be broken immediately. The post durations for the relative strength differences are way off. Someone with 25 strength compared to amelia's 31 should not be getting a duration as high as 19 posts.

I would suggest just saying if the targets strength is 1.5 x amelia's or more they can break free.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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duration as high as 19? The ::rawr:: are you getting at here? THE EQUATION SAYS: 31 - 25/2...that equals to 3 posts bro.

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Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
L: Grand Line Sky Islands, Legends of The Hidden Temple

Str 112 Spd 10 Stm 30 Acc 10 Ftn 63

Tournament on Karate Island

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okay i see what happened here, what you had in mind was (31-25)/2, the brackets make it clear that you're doing the subtraction section before the division, there is an order to how mathematical functions play out, and if your going to be writing formula you should learn it.

In that case the formula isn't so bad, but it could do with a maximum duration such as 4 posts. The formula is good to an extent but there needs to be a cap.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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4 posts sound reasonable.


Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
L: Grand Line Sky Islands, Legends of The Hidden Temple

Str 112 Spd 10 Stm 30 Acc 10 Ftn 63

Tournament on Karate Island

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put the 4 post cap on the ink shot aswell and we're good here

Edited by Singularity, Oct 22 2011, 07:47 AM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Nice~ done


Amilia Suigetsu Lieutenant Commander /Captain/Chef/Pharmaceutist
Profession: Inventor/Scientist ~Former Ika Force~ Commendations: 15 SD Earned: 152 Beli: 41,750,000 ::beli::
L: Grand Line Sky Islands, Legends of The Hidden Temple

Str 112 Spd 10 Stm 30 Acc 10 Ftn 63

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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