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Mariko's Ignition; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Sep 26 2011, 08:13 PM (321 Views)
Dyson
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Character: Mariko Hel Eljudnir
Request: New Technique
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Ignition
(Ignition) (20)
Type: Devil Fruit Support
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: A support technique using the Bomu Bomu no Mi. To activate it, Mariko presses a hand to her chest and explode herself, creating a single explosion around her person. Once the large explosion has occured, Igntion has begun. Mariko is surrounded by a hot red aura due to the fact that she is constantly erupting into small explosions all over her body, and her hair goes from black to fiery red for the technique's duration. The aura boosts the power of all of her Devil Fruit techniques, and also cancels out the requirement that she make contact with a target in order to explode. All techniques at least half the rank of this one become 'Spark' varieties, increase in power and have a burning red aura to their explosion. Though the efficiency of all of her attacks also increases, Ignition requires incredible stamina to keep up. It can only last Stamina/10 turns. When Mariko ends the technique, her hair turns the colour of ash for at least 2 hours, reduced by her Stamina x2 in minutes (Minimum is the number of posts it was active, or any in character rest break).



+Fortune?! (Retained for note)
Edited by Dyson, Sep 30 2011, 01:45 PM.
Mariko Hel Eljudnir • No Position • Carpenter/Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 58,000,000 • SD Earned: 200 • Beli: 41,000,000 • Location: Island of Rage, Grand Line
• Strength: 80 • Speed: 45 • Stamina: 70 • Accuracy: 35 • Fortune: 53 •

Lark Reyes • Commander • Inventor / Marksman/Martial Artist/Smith • The Ardent WingsCommendations: 41 • SD Earned: 287 • Beli: 45,572,500 • Location: Kyuka, Route 2
• Strength: 53 • Speed: 125 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 125 • Fortune: 67 •

Veice Vicious • No Position • Navigator / Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Threat: 103.5 • SD Earned: 215 • Beli: 20,850,000 • Location: Loguetown, East Blue
• Strength: 84 • Speed: 84 • Stamina: 55 • Accuracy: 50 • Fortune: 57 •

Ritsuka 'Rizumu' Meiban • No Position • Entertainer/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 60,00,000 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 48,900,000 • Location: Naia Island, Route 4
• Strength: 45 • Speed: 60 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 65 • Fortune: 56 •


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Sorry
1. I've heard before that you can't boost fortune...ever... at all. If you got someone like Speak or Hainen to say yes and provide evidence of their vouch i'd flag this.
2. I'd say this entire ability would be more along the lines of a rank 28
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We have, to this point, maintained a very strong stance against techniques that allow the buffing or debuffing of fortune. Here are some reasons:

1. Fortune is already a very powerful stat when it's linked to an offensive ability, as it is in the case of most of those who use it the most.
2. The stat is, nominally, worth four times more than any other stat, given how it progresses when not buffed normally.
3. Originally and to this day, Fortune is meant to function as more of a meta-stat; boosting or lowering it with a technique is a bit too direct.
4. Buffing fortune is not the same as lowering an opponent's stamina in that it makes everything you do to everyone stronger, rather than increasing the relative harm suffered by one or more individual debuff victims.
5. We've stopped a lot of people from making similar techs in the past. It'd be unfair to everyone who's tried to do this if it were just allowed now.

In summary, fortune is a powerful stat that's used for many important calculations. Having the stat that sets technique power boosted by other techniques is a little too yo-yo dawg for my taste. Yaksha didn't want you being blindly denied with no explanation, so I took the time to come here and explain exactly why I'm opposed to fortune buffing, so I hope this post helps make it clear why I say:

I'm sorry, but this cannot and will not be allowed at this rank or any.
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I submit on the Fortune issue.

I know all the problems, but as Mariko's technique power cannot be boosted through anything other than pure SD or fortune whoring, I put this forward for consideration. I accept that +Fortune is impossible and unacceptable.

Thank you for getting to this so quickly, and at all.


That aside, I'm resubmitting the technique without the stat alter. It now merely redefines her state and how her techniques act. If making that the full cost of the technique is still too much, I will raise it to the next rank benchmark. Without the bonus of a stat alter, it's limited to one major effect.
Mariko Hel Eljudnir • No Position • Carpenter/Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 58,000,000 • SD Earned: 200 • Beli: 41,000,000 • Location: Island of Rage, Grand Line
• Strength: 80 • Speed: 45 • Stamina: 70 • Accuracy: 35 • Fortune: 53 •

Lark Reyes • Commander • Inventor / Marksman/Martial Artist/Smith • The Ardent WingsCommendations: 41 • SD Earned: 287 • Beli: 45,572,500 • Location: Kyuka, Route 2
• Strength: 53 • Speed: 125 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 125 • Fortune: 67 •

Veice Vicious • No Position • Navigator / Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Threat: 103.5 • SD Earned: 215 • Beli: 20,850,000 • Location: Loguetown, East Blue
• Strength: 84 • Speed: 84 • Stamina: 55 • Accuracy: 50 • Fortune: 57 •

Ritsuka 'Rizumu' Meiban • No Position • Entertainer/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 60,00,000 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 48,900,000 • Location: Naia Island, Route 4
• Strength: 45 • Speed: 60 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 65 • Fortune: 56 •


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Can we get a duration on the cooldown beyond 'a short time'?
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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It now requires 2 hours - Stamina * 2 minutes of cooldown. Once it requires 0 minutes, it cannot be used for the same amount of time as it was used (4 post cooldown after 4 posts of use) or it can be used again after an in character break (Sleeping, resting, notable passage of time in a single post).
Edited by Dyson, Sep 30 2011, 01:46 PM.
Mariko Hel Eljudnir • No Position • Carpenter/Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 58,000,000 • SD Earned: 200 • Beli: 41,000,000 • Location: Island of Rage, Grand Line
• Strength: 80 • Speed: 45 • Stamina: 70 • Accuracy: 35 • Fortune: 53 •

Lark Reyes • Commander • Inventor / Marksman/Martial Artist/Smith • The Ardent WingsCommendations: 41 • SD Earned: 287 • Beli: 45,572,500 • Location: Kyuka, Route 2
• Strength: 53 • Speed: 125 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 125 • Fortune: 67 •

Veice Vicious • No Position • Navigator / Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Threat: 103.5 • SD Earned: 215 • Beli: 20,850,000 • Location: Loguetown, East Blue
• Strength: 84 • Speed: 84 • Stamina: 55 • Accuracy: 50 • Fortune: 57 •

Ritsuka 'Rizumu' Meiban • No Position • Entertainer/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 60,00,000 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 48,900,000 • Location: Naia Island, Route 4
• Strength: 45 • Speed: 60 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 65 • Fortune: 56 •


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