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Veice's Knitting; [Flagged][Flagged]
Topic Started: Sep 24 2011, 08:25 PM (384 Views)
Dyson
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Character: Veice Vicious
Request: New/Updated Techniques
Changes:

Updating Mako Missile from:
Original Mako Missile (Rank 4)
 
Veice's signature technique. A technique that uses the natural jumping ability of the Mako Fishman to attack. Capable of being used from land or sea, even jumping out of the sea, Veice uses her two swords, which are carried back along her arms. In a quick straight movement, she slashes through her target and ends behind them. During her leap forward, targets directly alongside her path can also receive single slashes.


Signature Technique, now Rank 15, to:
Mako Missile
Rank 14+ Version
Veice's signature technique. A technique that uses the natural jumping ability of the Mako Fishman to attack. Capable of being used from land or sea, even jumping out of the sea, Veice uses her two swords, which are carried back along her arms. In a powerful direct blow, she slashes through her target with her blades and cutting shockwaves that increase the size of the weapons, and ends behind them. During her leap forward, targets directly alongside her path are slashed by cutting shockwaves caused by her dashing.


Adding New Technique:
Ocean Knitting (14)
Type: Supportive
Range: Melee
Stats:
Description:
An incredible power born from a Fishman's natural connection to their home element and the training in one of the race's combat styles. Much like Fishman Karate's ability to manipulate and move water with their bare hands, users of Fishman Kendo can use their blades to twist and bend water to their wishes. Ocean Knitting allows the user to grasp and move water using specialized movements that let them treat the element like a fabric. Not developed to the point of being used as attacks or defenses, they are able to move, pull, and roughly throw water using their blades. The technique's limit is the manipulation of a quarter cubic meter of water or the direction of a full cubic meter of water.
Edited by Dyson, Sep 28 2011, 09:56 AM.
Mariko Hel Eljudnir • No Position • Carpenter/Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 58,000,000 • SD Earned: 200 • Beli: 41,000,000 • Location: Island of Rage, Grand Line
• Strength: 80 • Speed: 45 • Stamina: 70 • Accuracy: 35 • Fortune: 53 •

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• Strength: 53 • Speed: 125 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 125 • Fortune: 67 •

Veice Vicious • No Position • Navigator / Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Threat: 103.5 • SD Earned: 215 • Beli: 20,850,000 • Location: Loguetown, East Blue
• Strength: 84 • Speed: 84 • Stamina: 55 • Accuracy: 50 • Fortune: 57 •

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• Strength: 45 • Speed: 60 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 65 • Fortune: 56 •


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it needs some sort of quantifier for the amount of water that can be manipulated with the tech, maybe something like "can only manipulate as much water as fits on the blades surface" just so your not suddenly making huge waves or something with this.
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Good point, I completely forgot to add those limits.

I set to to 1/4 cubic meter of direct manipulation (A wall, for example), or directing a cubic meter of water (changing the flow).
Mariko Hel Eljudnir • No Position • Carpenter/Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 58,000,000 • SD Earned: 200 • Beli: 41,000,000 • Location: Island of Rage, Grand Line
• Strength: 80 • Speed: 45 • Stamina: 70 • Accuracy: 35 • Fortune: 53 •

Lark Reyes • Commander • Inventor / Marksman/Martial Artist/Smith • The Ardent WingsCommendations: 41 • SD Earned: 287 • Beli: 45,572,500 • Location: Kyuka, Route 2
• Strength: 53 • Speed: 125 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 125 • Fortune: 67 •

Veice Vicious • No Position • Navigator / Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Threat: 103.5 • SD Earned: 215 • Beli: 20,850,000 • Location: Loguetown, East Blue
• Strength: 84 • Speed: 84 • Stamina: 55 • Accuracy: 50 • Fortune: 57 •

Ritsuka 'Rizumu' Meiban • No Position • Entertainer/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 60,00,000 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 48,900,000 • Location: Naia Island, Route 4
• Strength: 45 • Speed: 60 • Stamina: 54 • Accuracy: 65 • Fortune: 56 •


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seems fine to me

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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