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Luna Gets Some New Techs; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Sep 10 2011, 07:45 AM (356 Views)
Aoi Akemi
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Character: Aoi 'Demon Doctor' Akemi
Request: New Techs
Changes:

Techniques
Dark Mode (14)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: +9 Strength
Description: Luna taps into her inner reservoirs of rage, causing her personality to altogether warp into a darker version of her usual personality. While active she thinks less about rationality and more about killing, allowing her to go all out. Lasts for 5 posts then can't be used for 7 afterwards.
Soluna Slicer (3+1=4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna swings her sword with more force than she normally does, causing deeper gashes than her normal swings.
Soluna Cut (7+1=8)
[Branched from Soluna Slicer]
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna slices the enemy with her full strength and dashes past them. By doing this, she can get past an enemy while dealing heavy damage to them.
Unlimited Slash (13+1=14)
[Branched from Soluna Cut]
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid Range
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna swings Soluna as fast as she can, so fast that it leaves afterimages. After a short delay, she slashes her enemy at full strength, causing a short barrage of further slashing randomly around the enemy by the after image blades, not even delayed. They don't linger and cannot block anything, but they have the cutting power of a standard iron sword.

Edited by Aoi Akemi, Sep 24 2011, 07:51 AM.
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Unlimited slash can't really be done with a fortune vs fortune formula, it needs a speed vs accuracy formula
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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I fixed.
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Topic is flagged for approval.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Unlimited slash feels like a combo hit to me rather than something like a gattling, combo hits aren't allowed. Also round down, cause rounding up is lame.

And super saiyan mode feels like a excuse for split personalities but at rank 14 as a legitimate buff i'll allow it to pass.
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I'll meetcha halfway with that rounding thing and now people don't have to round at all. Also I explained why that is definitely a gattling.
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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"Due to this being a repetition of the same attack multiple times at different points on the opponent, this is a gattling and can be blocked with proper defensive."

This here does not make it a gattling, calling a duck a chicken does not make the duck any less a duck. A gattling is a series of rapid attacks that happen immediately in a split second randomly. What you're doing would require you to slice, turn, slice, turn, slice, turn. Making it more along the lines of a combo as you'd have to stop and turn each time making the entire technique reliant that each attack would be successful or else the entire thing ends.

the difference between a combo and a gattling is this
gattling=kick, kick, kick, kick
combo= kick, stop, kick, stop, kick, stop, kick, stop

gattlings have no set up, combos require this. Unless you can think of someway this attack would have no set up meaning you'd never be able to stop for a moment then i'm going to have to say it's a combo.
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Is that concept better?
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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