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Even More Mote Mote Techniques; >.> Yeah they keep coming[Flagged]
Topic Started: Sep 3 2011, 02:23 PM (723 Views)
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Character:Rinry O'Denshi
Request:The approval of these techniques
Changes:The techniques

Utility Techniques
Block (4)
Type:Utility
Range:Short-Long
Stats:
Description:Rinry throws an acorn into the ground, puts her foot on it and grows a tree in the shape of a rectange below her feet. This can be grown for a multitude of purposes and can be used both offensively and defensively


Staircase (5 Branched from Block)
Type:Utility
Range:Short-Long
Stats:
Description:Rinry throws an acorn into the ground puts her foot on it and grows a tree in the shape of a rectange below her feet. She then grows several blocks from the blocks forming a makeshift staircase to wherever she chooses.


Escelator to Nowhere (8 Branch from Staircase)
Type:Utility
Range:Short-Long
Stats:
Description:Rinry throws an acorn into the ground puts her foot on it and grows a tree in the shape of a rectange below her feet. She then grows several blocks from the blocks forming a makeshift staircase to wherever she chooses. She then grows the staircase in a circle making a spinning platform that takes her anywhere she chooses at an accelerated pace.


Cactuar Form (5 Branch from Tingly Feeling)
Type:Utility
Range:Short-Long
Stats:
Description:Rinry grows a mescal cactus around her body making her look like a giant cactus. Though touching her would probably cause mild discomfort this form is mostly for intimidation.






Offensive Techniques
Tingly Feeling (4)
Type:Offensive
Range:Self
Stats:
Description:Rinry grows a Mescal cactus to tear into the opponents skin.






Defensive Techniques
Blocking Block (5 Branch from Block)
Type:Defense
Range:Short-Long
Stats:
Description:Rinry throws an acorn into the ground puts her foot on it and grows a tree in the shape of a rectange below her feet. The block is then grown long wall.


Pins and Needles (5 Branch from Tingley Feeling)
Type:Defense
Range:Self
Stats:
Description:Rinry grows a mescal cactus from the ground (under her foot) into a giant wall of needles. To help prevent/cause minor pain to incoming melee attacks/attackers





Edited by Clarity, Sep 28 2011, 06:54 PM.
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okay so in your fruit description it says that currently you only have the ability to grow things as long as you maintain contact with them, but a lot of your techniques talk about throwing things and then them growing which is past your capabilities presently.

Please amend the descriptions and then it can be reveiwed
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Edited. I made it clear her foot is on them when the techniques are being performed
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Use the proper character review template, please.

All of these escalators and moving staircases seem to be more than just basic powers of the fruit. I'd say anything like escalator to nowhere, needs to be rank 8.

"Because the density is condensed into a smaller space breaking it is mucher harder than breaking normal wood."

Wood is considered a tier 1 material in our world. Which means it's on the same level as iron. As a rank 4, you can't get any stronger than a tier 1 material.

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The power of the fruit is to grow things via contact and to be able to alter the shape of them. Seeing as the only thing she's doing is growing them and changing the shape and applying gravity to make practical use of it seems a pretty basic use.

I'll alter the harder than normal wood thing thanks for pointing that out.

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Thats some pretty advanced control though over the power of your fruit which is the issue.
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k i now realize just how high lvl (much to my chagrin) this techs are.
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K so if I change staircase to rank 8 would I be able to adjust the other stair related techs appropriately?
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i'd be clam with elevator Escelator Malfuntion being more of around rank 12 as it's a good deal more powerful than the regular rank 8 it's branched from.

Escelator Catasrophe i'm going to say is rank 14 due to the whole earth shaking part as well as the power behind it.

1000 needles also seems rank 14
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:/ but the only difference is the size of the bonds. D: nvm fine it's cool I'll get rid of them :/ can't do rank 12 atm
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Before i approve this i just want to clear something up, growing a really thin wall seems pretty counter productive and putting the word condensed in the context of a growing organism doesn't really make much sense. If your trying to make a thinner but still as durable shield, that involves increasing cellulose levels in the plant which could probably be done but would be rank 8. Sorry to be picky like this, if you want to keep it the way it is that's fine but it just seems like your making it weaker for no real reason.
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