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Topic Started: Aug 27 2011, 07:35 PM (154 Views)
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Create Sonic Bullets (8)
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Range:short
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Description:(branched from 'create sound ammo') Using one stick of solid fuel Zaina can create this upgraded version of her sound ammo, it's power has significantly increased. It still lets out a extremely loud bang on impact, however this is no longer harmless as the intense sound waves can shatter glass and other brittle substances, living things will receive light injuries to sensitive spots such as ears and eyes, the ears take the most damage as they will likely not hear much other than a ringing sound for a short while after being hit by this ammo (two posts). Only the immediate area around the point of impact is affected by the harmful effects of this bullet. The solid fuel stick contains enough material to create a set of three (3) sonic bullets

Create Mini Torpedo (8)
Type:supportive
Range:short
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Description:using two sticks of solid fuel Zaina creates a pair of small torpedoes. These torpedoes can be launched with the same system she uses for the missiles, they each hold the explosive power of a stick of dynamite, the explosion is mainly directed toward the tip of the torpedo to maximize hull damage

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Edited by Mega, Sep 14 2011, 09:03 AM.
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Whoops posted that too soon.


No to the custom trait. This trait already exists:
Cybertronic Genius (1 Trait) – These inventors have studied their cybernetics especially well, and pay 20% less to upgrade their own Cyborg parts or those belonging to a crewmate.



Also, Create sonic bullets seems like an unnecessary new tech to me, you could just upgrade your create sound ammo tech to rank 8 and have it be this. But if you want it to be a new tech, i suppose thats ok. Mini torpedo is fine too.

But, I'm curious, what goes into a "solid fuel stick?"
Edited by Duath, Aug 28 2011, 05:29 PM.
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this trait does not have anything to do with upgrades of cyborg stuff, it simply removes the upkeep you have to pay, similarly to how chef or marksman main profession removes their respective upkeeps. Making this since no such thing exists for cyborg upkeeps. And the trait you mentioned does not affect upkeep in the slightest - P.S I changed the name of it if you think it is to similar, also specified that it is only fuel and repair upkeep that is waived

Making the sonic bullet a branch since the core tech is the same but it differs in how it is made (using the new base material)


And the solid fuel stick is kind of what dynamite was to nitroglycerine. Basically it is her cyborg fuel turned solid (and safe) since the ordinary fuel tends to get highly unstable if exposed to air (might explode, might not do a thing)
Edited by Mega, Aug 28 2011, 09:01 PM.
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Cybertronic genius reduces the cost of cyborgs by reducing the cost of the upkeep. Its just too similar. I'd be more likely to say yes if it was a reduction of the cost rather than no cost, but its still not likely to pass.

I didn't have a problem with sonic bullet, I was just thinking you could save tp by just upgrading your old tech. But if you want this, I'm fine with it. And I was curious more as to what your fuel was, since "fuel" is pretty vague =)
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could it pass by putting two traits in it? (since that is what I have at my disposal) so it becomes a 50% reduction at one trait and 100 at two. considering what I have planned the upkeep will drain pretty much everything I earn otherwise.


And correct me if I am wrong but doesn't branching work by subtracting the tp cost of the tech being branched from?

And I never thought up a name for the fuel XD
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Something more reasonable would be 20-30% off and unfortunately no you cannot put 2 traits in it for more of a discount. It's for the same reason that we don't allow discounts to stack or things like pickpocket to stack.

So 1 trait, 30%, and i'd be clam with it.

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While I think the reduction from Cybertronic genius is wholly unintentional as It was implemented before the cyborg revamp and focuses more on the price reduction than the subsequent upkeep. For a measly 30% to be a viable option to spent a trait on both would have to be taken. And I am not willing to do that. Upkeep late gl will still climb to the 15* million area if beli is actually spent on cyborg stuff, even with both of those traits it will still be in the 7 million area. And if they do not stack it shoots up to 10 million.
I will have to think up another solution for cyborg to be a viable option late gl

The level suggested is far to low considering that carpenters can waive ship upkeeps of the same or even higher level and the trait doesn't give any additional discounts whatsoever

Trait scrapped

All that needs approval now is the techniques



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You should take the part out about the hull of most ships since different ships have hulls made of different materials, just leave it with the power of dynamite part.

How many posts do they hear ringing for afterwards?
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two posts for the ringing, added it as well.

slightly reworded the torpedo tech, removed the 'most hulls' part and simply made it dynamite power directed forward
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Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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