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Topic Started: Jul 6 2011, 09:34 PM (822 Views)
Byakuya
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Edited by Byakuya, Jul 21 2011, 07:19 PM.
The Official G. Fist Topic
Sacrilegious - The Official OPRP Manga.

"I don't know!~ Crimson makes me think of red, which makes me think of that our previous captain, Daisuke. I'm a little uncomfortable with that considering as I cringe often when I remember what a disgusting person he was."
Daisuke G. Fist, 446 SD, Bounty: 105,000,000
"2/10 Would not bang."
Hana Matsui, 170 SP, Pirate, Bounty: 15,000,000
[Rin's Report on Takuya]
"Takuya doesn't seem very much like a marine. Anger issues, lieing about his age, drinking problems, and a potential rapist, yet somehow he gets shit done."
Takuya, 139 SD(Marine Commander, 25 Commendations)
I'm lost. Why does Hiryuu have a thing for Amilia? I don't even...."
Hiryuu, 66SD(Pirate)
RainingBlades is a sex demon
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Delete.
Edited by Byakuya, Jul 21 2011, 07:18 PM.
The Official G. Fist Topic
Sacrilegious - The Official OPRP Manga.

"I don't know!~ Crimson makes me think of red, which makes me think of that our previous captain, Daisuke. I'm a little uncomfortable with that considering as I cringe often when I remember what a disgusting person he was."
Daisuke G. Fist, 446 SD, Bounty: 105,000,000
"2/10 Would not bang."
Hana Matsui, 170 SP, Pirate, Bounty: 15,000,000
[Rin's Report on Takuya]
"Takuya doesn't seem very much like a marine. Anger issues, lieing about his age, drinking problems, and a potential rapist, yet somehow he gets shit done."
Takuya, 139 SD(Marine Commander, 25 Commendations)
I'm lost. Why does Hiryuu have a thing for Amilia? I don't even...."
Hiryuu, 66SD(Pirate)
RainingBlades is a sex demon
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Byakuya
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If you ask me, I'm ready.
The Official G. Fist Topic
Sacrilegious - The Official OPRP Manga.

"I don't know!~ Crimson makes me think of red, which makes me think of that our previous captain, Daisuke. I'm a little uncomfortable with that considering as I cringe often when I remember what a disgusting person he was."
Daisuke G. Fist, 446 SD, Bounty: 105,000,000
"2/10 Would not bang."
Hana Matsui, 170 SP, Pirate, Bounty: 15,000,000
[Rin's Report on Takuya]
"Takuya doesn't seem very much like a marine. Anger issues, lieing about his age, drinking problems, and a potential rapist, yet somehow he gets shit done."
Takuya, 139 SD(Marine Commander, 25 Commendations)
I'm lost. Why does Hiryuu have a thing for Amilia? I don't even...."
Hiryuu, 66SD(Pirate)
RainingBlades is a sex demon
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I know it seems picky but can you indicate which techniques are using Special TP and how much, this makes it easier to check you've used the right numbers.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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I labeled the tables.
"Weapon Wisdom Sword Techniques" and "Devil Fruit Adept Techniques".
The Official G. Fist Topic
Sacrilegious - The Official OPRP Manga.

"I don't know!~ Crimson makes me think of red, which makes me think of that our previous captain, Daisuke. I'm a little uncomfortable with that considering as I cringe often when I remember what a disgusting person he was."
Daisuke G. Fist, 446 SD, Bounty: 105,000,000
"2/10 Would not bang."
Hana Matsui, 170 SP, Pirate, Bounty: 15,000,000
[Rin's Report on Takuya]
"Takuya doesn't seem very much like a marine. Anger issues, lieing about his age, drinking problems, and a potential rapist, yet somehow he gets shit done."
Takuya, 139 SD(Marine Commander, 25 Commendations)
I'm lost. Why does Hiryuu have a thing for Amilia? I don't even...."
Hiryuu, 66SD(Pirate)
RainingBlades is a sex demon
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Is cosmic fang feet or yards? Preferably make it feet.

Cosmic Universal: You don't have a technique called cosmic fate, unless you mean Cosmic Shine? I don't mind the shape changing effect as long as the shape is decided before actually firing the technique and that it stays within the size limitations set by the technique.

Cloud Walker: How does shooting lightning allow the cloud to move itself? <:| No to the cloud being solid. How much lightning can this cloud produce before dispersing or whatever would happen and how much can it shoot per post?

Moon Cloud: Same as previous tech

Dark Barrier: Nerf it pl0x

Infamous: Same size as the previous move, right? Nerf it as well, more so the continuous fire in the last part.

Devil Form: Thinking of saying no to growing 6 feet larger, but I guess it's not too bad.

Defense Devil: Doesn't work as a branch from Devil form. No spinning air blades around him.

Emperor Form: No gravitational control and no to "need to be as strong as Daisuke to stop it"

Destiny Form: ^ and fix the branch names

Legacy Form: No stacking the previously branched moves <:|

Scion winds: Needs a better description. What do you mean by much different? It says it makes it difficult for range projectiles to reach him, but explain what it's actually doing. Is it just throwing off the accuracy of the shot? Completely deflect? Etc.

The Wrath: Can't use it with the gauntlets. How large is the range on vacuum effect from the tornado?

List each individual link in your sources. Makes it easier to track your stuff, especially with all the scoops.

Could probably say some other stuff, but I'm tired and this took a long time to read. So fix that for now and I'll get back to you next time.
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Cloud Walker: How does shooting lightning allow the cloud to move itself? <:| No to the cloud being solid. How much lightning can this cloud produce before dispersing or whatever would happen and how much can it shoot per post?
You do know clouds move without the added effect of lightning? Lightning is there to make the ship prettyful, and it's One Piece. He's making clouds out of nothing. e.e. Also, I figured solid cloud was legit due to the fact r14 generally is at the supernatural range, and solid cloud is supernatural, but it's nothing like the science fiction shit r28 does, same goes for the commanding tech.
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Dark Barrier: Nerf it pl0x

Infamous: Same size as the previous move, right? Nerf it as well, more so the continuous fire in the last part.
I don't get it, what am I paying my TP for? The barrier technique is r34, why does it have to be smaller? And seriously? Infamous does the amount of damage as a normal strike from Daisuke, without it being continuous the blow would be equivalent to taking a single normal punch from Daisuke. Which at r36 would be underpaying, which is why it's ranked so high in the first place, and now it has to be smaller. Why pay this shit if it has to be weak sauce by your standards.
Huh?
 
Defense Devil: Doesn't work as a branch from Devil form. No spinning air blades around him.
Here we have a rank 30 technique that allows Daisuke to create a sharp projectile around himself. At rank 14 characters are able to create sharp projectiles from their hands and feet, and at rank 18 I can't create one around his body? Why even mention the branches don't work, if the technique's purpose is omitted? Which makes me ask myself yet again, why are my r28 and above techniques weaksauce, when quote on quote "28 - Techniques at this level begin defying logic. Powerful melee-generated ranged attacks, feats of supernatural nature, spirit-generated illusions, etc. are possible at this level."Sure these techniques are hax and powerful, but isn't that the point of them being so high ranked.
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Emperor Form: No gravitational control and no to "need to be as strong as Daisuke to stop it"
Once again, the negation of the entire purpose of a technique. Here we have a limited rank 32 technique, that lasts for X amount of seconds, that give Daisuke the ability to uplift items smaller than 100 pounds. Yet, it's too hax? Rather than explaining why they don't work, you're just outlawing them for one reason or the other. I don't get why they wouldn't work. Especially considering the fact another member of this site got techniques less presentable then these that dealt with gravity. Bare that you know them, no need say any names.
Legacy Form
 
No stacking the previously branched moves <:|
The idea isn't really stacking the moves. It's the idea of two of the barriers coexisting with one another. Meaning? Daisuke could be in defense devil form, while using destiny form at the exact same time. Hell, I didn't even think something like this deserved a technique for it, but now you're saying at rank 36, it's not legit? You know, I think you're scared of me getting the power, rather than being a mod and being fair with these techniques.
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Scion winds: Needs a better description. What do you mean by much different? It says it makes it difficult for range projectiles to reach him, but explain what it's actually doing. Is it just throwing off the accuracy of the shot? Completely deflect? Etc.
Throwing off the accuracy completely.
The Wrath:
 
Can't use it with the gauntlets. How large is the range on vacuum effect from the tornado?
Fortune/2 yards.

Yeah, I'm complaining. Yes, I'm mad. I've spent two entire months coming up with these techniques, and the majority of the techniques you're contesting got the okay from other mods. I don't get it, and call me what you want a whiner and so forth. I don't care. But this is just unfair shit, if you're going to judge the legitimacy of techniques, at the very least be fair with everyone. But you know, I'm starting not to care, so I'll delete every fucking technique you had an issue with. You know, since they're so non-legit and all.
The Official G. Fist Topic
Sacrilegious - The Official OPRP Manga.

"I don't know!~ Crimson makes me think of red, which makes me think of that our previous captain, Daisuke. I'm a little uncomfortable with that considering as I cringe often when I remember what a disgusting person he was."
Daisuke G. Fist, 446 SD, Bounty: 105,000,000
"2/10 Would not bang."
Hana Matsui, 170 SP, Pirate, Bounty: 15,000,000
[Rin's Report on Takuya]
"Takuya doesn't seem very much like a marine. Anger issues, lieing about his age, drinking problems, and a potential rapist, yet somehow he gets shit done."
Takuya, 139 SD(Marine Commander, 25 Commendations)
I'm lost. Why does Hiryuu have a thing for Amilia? I don't even...."
Hiryuu, 66SD(Pirate)
RainingBlades is a sex demon
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It's hard to have other mods give their opinion when you delete the techs.
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