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Leo D. Rosso (Pirate); Flagged
Topic Started: Jul 5 2011, 04:28 PM (839 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Leo D. Rosso
Nickname: Red Paw
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 0
Achievements: N/A
Profession:
Primary: Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves.
Secondary: Merchant
Merchants are fairly charismatic people who are skilled in both bargaining and selling things to others. Their expertise means that they are very knowledgeable of the economy, and deal with all manner of merchandise.

Position: Martial Artist (Captain (If make own crew))

Physical Appearance
Height: 5 foot 8 inches, about 165cm
Weight: 160 pounds, 72kg
Hair: Short and red, with 2 strains going over his ears (1 on each side), and the rest spiked up on an angle.
Eyes: red
Clothing/Accessories: He wears a large red vest that sinks to the top of his legs, this is then met by a white sash only slightly visible above his pants. His pants are black and are similar to that of a martial artist. His shoes are black raibans and he has bandage-like wraps around his hands.
General Appearance: He has a large scar along his chest (explained in bio), although it doesn’t hinder him in battles it is quite the eye sore. His general expression is more or less someone full of contempt and confidence, he retains a light smile that although seems to reflect pride and confidence, has a friendly personality behind it. His body is actually quite defined with muscle. He has a trained lean muscular body.

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The Character
Personality: Leo has a big heart, he always thinks about others and aims to always both achieve the best he can and help others achieve the best he can. He will not step over a Nakama to get further ahead. Leo is quite outgoing and friendly, his motivation for both meeting new people and initiating conversation stems from his early childhood. Leo also considers himself to be somewhat of a counsellor or that he has adopted aspects of a counsellor, he likes to initiate personal conversations not in their pursuit of knowledge, but rather the pursuit of understanding.
Leo, although friendly, always stands confident, he will be seen mostly with his arms folded unless communicating with someone. He is also true to his morals, he classifies his sense of humanity through his own experiences with the individual rather than classifying them through a group. He will not initiate violence, but is more than happy to deliver a healthy dose of pain if it is either to wake someone up from foolish actions, or stop someone who may not have the best of intentions for Leo. Leo likes helping people a lot, he will often go up and beyond simply to help someone in their task, this is based around his own moral of “I shall help, that which has no help” which is derived from his own experiences.

Hometown: Shimotsuki Village, East Blue
History: Leo was abandoned on Shimotsuki Village at the age of 5 along with his 10 year old brother, Ligar D. Rosso. His father, Tig D. Rosso was a renowned pirate both in East Blue and the Grand Line. The abandoning of Leo and Ligar was their fathers way of saying “Do not become a Pirate”. Their father had travelled through out the 4 Blues and further, he had always told them stories of the Grand Master at the Dojo in Shimotsuki Village, Rikuu Salvatore.

When Tig came across him, Tig found that he was one of the few who could challenge him in weaponry and match him at every step. For this the 2 found new respect for each other and trained a lot together. Tig even left his crew to train with Rikuu, after 10 years however, he went out mysteriously to make a crew without Rikuu knowing. Years later he returned and only briefly to leave his boys under his care.

As Leo grew up, he and his brother Ligar had to perform dangerous “chores” eg climbing a 20 metre high tree to obtain a coconut or brave the ocean and grab a fish with a single pike. Leo and Ligar also grew up in the dojo, Ligar was unsurprisingly a natural with weapons, he was fluent and graceful in his strikes. Leo however appeared to have no skill in armed combat, he found he was only able to focus greatly on one aspect of his fighting rather than decently focused on several aspects. He would often trip over his feet or drop the swords due to lack of technique.

Leo gained a large scar through his chest after a frustrated Rikuu tried that hard to “awaken” his weaponry skills that he decided to use his own katana, and put Leo in a life/death situation, this however failed and only succeeded in leaving a large scar on Leo’s chest.

No matter how much Rikuu tried to teach Leo he couldn’t. However one night Leo was practicing hard with 2 swords hitting them violently against a tree, however due to lack of strength and skill he barely grazed it. After countless hours he was exhausted and fed up, he threw his swords on the ground and called out in anger violently performing direct punches against the tree. Rikuu noticed some strength and fluency behind his hand-to-hand fighting and decided to train him in unarmed combat.

A noticeable change happened in Leo, he was a lot more confident and fluent in his steps, his arms and legs appeared to be quite durable in taking blows with weapons, and his strikes were both accurate and effective. Leo decided to become an unarmed martial artist, this was all surprising to Rikuu as he had thought that due to his father and older brother Leo would inherit some skill in armed combat.

Ligar left at the age of 17, Leo believes that he would seek out their father, their relationship was quite strong so Leo knew he wouldn’t get mixed up in the inhumane side of piracy. It is thought however that Ligar fought Rikuu just before he left, however this wasn't proven. Rikuu believes that its up to people to make their own choices and learn from them, however he also wants to fuilfill Tig's wishes.

Leo dedicated everything he now knew to Rikuu, after his help he found a new sense of duty to help others. The constant invasion of low-level pirates gave Leo the will to, as a pirate, defeat all other pirates with ill intentions and shape a new age of piracy.

Leo hopes to spread his form of combat throughout the world and be renowned as one of the highest ranked martial artists in the world.

Core Beliefs:

* "My Fists are my weapons, and my Heart is my drug"
* "Help those who need it."
* "Clean The World."
* "A Journey is most fulfilling with Nakama"
* "The Journey is, in itself, the destination."


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Leo fights Calculatingly and unarmed as an unarmed martial artist, he will never throw the first punch, but block for a while and simply analyse his opponent, their flaws their strengths and when he can penetrate their defences. Although many assume this is because he cannot fight back. Once he searches for a weakness he either throws a flurry of techniques to catch the opponent off guard, or, time 1 technique to perfection. His unarmed martial arts also includes some acrobatics within it that mixes with some feirce anamalistic strikes.
Weaponry: N/A
Items: N/A
Beli: 500,000
Upkeep: N/A
SD Earned: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 32
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 15 (9 + 6)
    • Speed: 13
    • Stamina: 5
    • Accuracy: 5
    • Fortune: 8




Traits:
Traits:
Fate of the Strong [2 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your strength stat.

Martial Art Mastery [Acrobatic Pounce] (1 Trait) – The character masters a style of unarmed combat. All techniques which are based on the central theme of this style will get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for these techniques is two higher than the natural maximum.

Profession Trait:

Anti-Weapon Specialist (1 Trait) – Through training and experience in fighting armed opponents when unarmed, the character gains special Technique Points, of the amount of half their fortune, for techniques which are aimed to disarm, disable or block the use of a weapon.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 16
Used Regular Technique Points: 12/16
Special Technique Points: 4
Used Special Technique Points: 0/4

Techniques
Leo Spiral Claw 5 (4 + 1)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Leo dashes full speed at the foe and whilst a few metres away leaps so his body is spinning horizontally in the air, upon approaching his hand takes the shape of a claw and he hits the side of the face of the opponent

Leo Followed Elbow 5 (4 + 1)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: While In melee range, Leo instantly turns 180 degrees whilst ducking and leaps up with an uppercut elbow with his left elbow.

Leo Dropped Kick 5 (4 + 1)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Upon approaching Leo drops to balancing on one hand and instantly pushes off the ground with a kick to the centre of the opponent’s face.

Stance of The Prowling Feline (Free Stat Altering Tech) 5 (4 + 1)
Type: Supportive
Range: short-long range
Stats: + 3 Speed
Description: Leo clenches his fists and stands on one foot, his other leg is made on an angle touching his thigh, Leo folds his arms and slowly leans forward preparing for quick dash.




Development History
Gains/Losses: N/A
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Edited by Big Bang, Jul 20 2011, 09:17 PM.
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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Could do with listing units for Height and weight

Ranks of techniques should be listed a Z(X+Y) and your max rank of martial arts techniques are 6 and you get 1 of those ranks free but must pay for 5 with your own TP, for any techniques that arn't martial arts the max rank is 4.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
Things i look at when i'm feeling blue

King of the Pirates


An Unreachable Dream


Finally a Father, they make you so proud
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no worries ill make the nessecary changes
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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Did't know whether or not "Leo Feather Steps" should be classified as rank 6, cause it is a martial arts forms of movement for Leo?
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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anyway ready for evaluation.
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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really hope this gets accepted soon so i can start rping....
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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Don't spam. It doesn't look good and in the end it just makes it take longer for your character to be reviewed since we go from the back of the Character Registration.

Can only have one fated path at a time I believe, so put those 2 traits in whichever you choose.

Remove the last sentence from your merchant profession

Why does Cross claw leave a cut? He doesn't have claws or any sort of bladed weaponry

Father steps would be more rank 8, which is out of your reach at the moment

I hope when you say that his hand takes the form of a claw in Spiral Claw that you mean he just claws his fingers.

Followed Elbow is too much of a combo

Remove the stat bonuses from all of your techniques.

Don't forget you still have your free martial artist buffing technique to add. (Be sure to specify which one it is) I'd suggest a stance of some sort for this that would "logically" boost one of his stats.

Fix your tables, techniques should all be in a single table.
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Ok, made all the nessecary changes, except the single table, wasn't quite sure how to do that...
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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Alright, looking good. Though, now your techniques only get a +1 so put them all down a rank and change your buff to a +2 and you'll be good to go.


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kool :) tyvm will make the changes now!
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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I should be more picky on that stance

So I will. Getting mad won't make you stronger till rank 14. You need a real physical change. Feet shoulder width apart, for example. The buff would last as long as that stance did.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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bit confused, so the stance should be something like, points one arm at the opponent, focusing all his strength to his opposite arm?
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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His core beliefs should belong in personality.

You free martial arts technique shouldn't be receiving +1 from your trait how it is worded now. If it involved your specific style of fighting (acrobatics n such), then it would receive that addition.

I suppose the stance works for me. Another mod can argue though.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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The moves listed are of the style
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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dont really know how to do an acrobatic stance :/
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Leo D. Rosso
|Crew Position: N/A |Martial Artist|Crew: N/A|Bounty: 0|SD Earned: 0 |Beli: 500,000 |Location: East Blue

Strength:15
Speed:13
Stamina:5
Accuracy:5
Fortune: 8
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