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Hitori Smith; Now an NPC
Topic Started: Jul 3 2011, 04:30 PM (468 Views)
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NPC Type:Crew (Kensai G. Fist's

Basic NPC Information
Name: Hitori D. Smith
Nickname: "The silver Flash"
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 13,600,000
Profession:

~Chef
A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients.
Position: Chef

Physical Appearance
Height: 6'2
Weight: 163lbs
Hair: His hair is a deep silver that hangs like curtains around his face.It extends about an inch below his shoulders ending in spiky strands.In the front he usually styles it to cove his left eye.
Eyes: His eyes a shocking blue.
Clothing/Accessories: He wears simple black loose fitting jeans with a semi-dark jacket open down the front revealing no shirt his bare chest a deep tan brown shone brightly,showcasing his carefully toned body
General Appearance: Usually his long silver hair covers the left side of his face while his brillantly blue right eye gives the appearance of seeing though someone light into your soul.He almost always wears his usual attire in rain, snow, or else.

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The Character
Personality: He mostly stays away from people as he isn't one for talking and he's really lazy.He one of the most laid back people you'll ever meet even when in battle his calmness reigns supreme.More often than not you'll find him sighing however he never backs down from a fight never. However he's usually blunt and very forward with people.

Hometown: Rukon,East Blue
History:
As dawn broke the horizon the water sparkling as the morning rays of light hit beautiful Rukon Town.Rukon was a small isolated town used for refugees and to few pirates who had given up that life in order for peace and family.Every morning the sun would alite upon the roofs of the twenty or so brick homes and a rosy glow engulfs the town.Many here were farmers and made their living the honest way the port made little money as fish didn't come often but they survived that is they had been surviving.The mast of a ship slowly rose out of the mist surrounding the Island Hitori now just four years old had remembered sitting on big hill watching as the Navy blue uniformed soldiers began to come ashore.His parent's had told him much about the sea and the moment he saw that they were in fact Marines he began running downhill to his home.

His Home was one of many built also stood the futherest from town and most didn't approach it Hitori was usually seen alone as his parent's tilled the land to bring in fresh crops.Bursting into the house his parent's had already begun packing knowing that is was for them that the Marines had come."Mom what are you doing?"He asked in a whiny sort of voice.His mother a short woman of 5'4 turned to him her eyes were a blazing blue her hair hung down around her face a blindingly bright silver.She was well shaped not fat but not to skinny either just right his dad used to say."We have to go Hitori it's not safe here."She replied her voice so soft it sounded musical but it was hurried, strained, frightened.Hitori heard the screams coming from the village the dull clank of metal against bone and the hiss of fire that came from a house set on fire.

"Yes!"His father exclaimed turning around holding a large chest in one hand the key in the other.His father was tall over 6'1 weighing roughly 200lbs his face was rounded with brown eyes while his mouth was small.His hair a pitch-black extending to his shoulders.He was a beefy man with strong hands and a tanned body it was from him that Hitori would later gain his raw physical power."Time to go."His father stated moving towards the door they had never had furniture or really anything but the essentials and Hitori didn't want to leave his mother turned to him her hair swaying catching the dull light of morning."Let's g-." she began before they heard the knock on their door followed by a deep voice reciting something,"Open up by order of Admiral James Lawson we are searching for the Vice-Admiral's Guns and have just cause to search your home."His father swore quietly as he passed the chest to Hitori along with the key opening a hatch covered by the fur of a bear killed long ago."Get in run and don't look back."He whispered urgently giving his wife a look that said they were staying."No daddy no."He protested but it was futile pushing him roughly down the steps he closed and latched he door.

At he precise moment the door was burst open as Hitori began to run though the underground passage he heard screams coming from behind him and closed his eyes the tears streaming down his face as the passage opened into a cave deep underground with stairs that lead back to the fields.Taking to the stairs quickly he arrived lost in the middle of a wheat field.Falling right there holding the chest and key he stayed all day and night hearing listening to the screams watching the hiss of the fire over the horizon his tears seemed to have no end.By the next morning his tears had run dry his stomach ached with hunger as he looked to the box in his hands he placed the key in it's lock turning as the chest emitted a faint click before opening to reveal two Twin Guns. Mouth watering he hunted the Guns seemed infallible feeling stronger he vowed revenge and began walking to a boat harbored on the other side of the Island and setting off. He still searches for that revenge , he lived by stealing and performing shady jobs but he got by he hopes to met Ex-Vice Admiral James Lawson soon in blood.Learning the names of the blades he became a master chef and weapons master. He met Ken while heading to the GrandLine and the two formed a friendship.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Crescent Moon Dance-

This form of fighting is extremely elegant hence it's name. It completely relies on the pacience of the user calmly waiting for openings and releashing devasting attacks by exploiting them. The technique involves graceful flips to easily evade the oppenents attacks. Skyward kicks and punches when available. The "dance" is broken into several forms or parts. All named after phases of the moon finally ending in Full Moon.

Weaponry: Katanas:Each a bright silver with a red hilt. Along the blades ran two dragons that joined at the tip from each hilt extended a ribbon two feet in length. Although bright silver in look they are made of a low quality steel simply colored silver.

Items: N/A
SD Earned: 89
Stats 113
  • Used for Stats: 113
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength: 30
    • Speed: 65 (41+24)
    • Stamina:16
    • Accuracy: 26
    • Fortune: 28
Traits:

Ludicrous Speed (3 Traits) - This character's speed is boosted by 60%.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 56
Used Regular Technique Points: 22
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Sweeping the floor (8)
Type:Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:N/A
Description: Hitori uses this particular move while in a fight often dropping down to one leg and spinning clockwise to trip up and oppenent to send them crashing to the ground.
Spinning away? (14)
Type:Offensive
Range: Close
Stats:N/A
Description: Hitori stands on one leg while spinning rapidly with the other. His high speeds causes the wind to increase his velocity allowing him to harm any nearby enemies or deflect certain objects. (E.g stones, debri, blunt weapons such as clubs, etc.) He can spin for up to one post. The wind itself is not doing the deflecting.....



Edited by Hurtkaku, Jul 29 2011, 02:00 AM.
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You have him listed as a crew npc. Do you plan on having him in the crew and does someone have an npc trait?

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SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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He's the Gift NPC Reworked for my scooped char
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Could do with listing who it belongs to and then

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Spinning away is fine as long as it's not the actual winds doing the deflecting, edit to include this

Also need the source as Rayne mentioned
Edited by Hideo, Jul 10 2011, 06:20 AM.
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NPC start off with 24 earned, so you can actually add 2 more to his stats

From the wording of the NPC gift it appears that this character will not grow along with Kensai. I just want you to be aware of this before I approve that the stats you set now are pretty much what this character will be stuck with. It's pretty much fine and ready to be approved unless you want to make more edits. So yeah, just drop me a PM when you're ready to go.

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i idn't know that but okay

Yak gave it to e and he said this

yaksha91 (7/11/11 12:33:19 PM): It grows as if it were an NPC from Born Leader.
Edited by Hurtkaku, Jul 11 2011, 09:35 AM.
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sweeping the floor can't knock anyone down at this rank. Rank 8 is where this tech needs to be at.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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  • You missed something. Read everything. Respond with all changes made.

  • Look at Kensai's profile. There are some problems with it.

  • History mention twin guns. Were they given to Kensai?

  • As per Hideo, SD earned still doesn't match Kensai's. Fix this.

  • The spoiler is there for images. Put image inside.

  • Offensive gatling, with deflection powers, which is sped up by the power of its wind is not rank 9. Keep one of the first two elements and it may work as 8. That last effect will have to wait until 14+.

  • Under the same technique, etc is not a specific object. Make up a standard or limit as to what it can deflect.
Edited by JOLS, Jul 20 2011, 02:04 PM.
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