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| Aoi Akemi | Jul 1 2011, 09:08 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||
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That One Bitch
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NPC Template [-----] NPC Type: Crew NPC [Born Leader Trait] [Ian Salinas] Basic NPC Information Name: Eris D'Angelo Nickname: --- (No Epithets Yet) Age: 19 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Pirates Bounty: 0 Profession: ~Entertainer An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific. Position: Entertainer Physical Appearance Height: 5'7.6" Weight: 118 lbs Hair: Blonde, Bangs swept over, Well Kept Eyes: Sky Blue, Eccentrically Open Clothing/Accessories: The first thing one would notice about her right away is that Eris looks very futuristic as compared to the times. She wears a white sleeveless jacket, which zips in reverse of normal, usually partially unzipped to reveal her belly button. From the bottom of the underarms a yellow ribbon like fabric looks like a stripe which extends down and off the shirt, connecting to the strange tasset by a strange large bolt, and then even further. After the belt the fabric of the ribbon is semi-transparent. Eris wears a pair of short shorts which help accentuate her curves and hug her figure for the most part. She wears leg-warmers and arm-warmers which have varying designs each, but share the same features in that they gradate from opaque black to transparent from top part to bottom part. Strange feature the leg-warmers also share is a plastic intrusion which looks like a speaker (though they aren't). Her shoes are white and yellow. Her final accessories are a little hair-band which always has the large bow on the top, no matter which design, and variously designed hairpins (though the ones in her hair always match) Of course this is only one of many outfits, but this is the most common one to date. Let it be known that she also makes her own clothing. General Appearance: Eris is a medium height woman who has a modern pop-idol body. She is fairly well proportioned, her curves are for the most part in the right places though naturally, they could be a little more accentuated, which she tries to do in her outfits. She has fair skin, not too pale, not too pink, and she is Caucasian, if it wasn't clear. Eris has a very eccentric aura about her that really energizes people, in contrast to her best friend Ian's lazy aura. Her eyes are always well open and sparkle on occasion. Her hair is very well maintained somehow. Usual Outfit Her and Her Guitar Her and Ian The Character Personality: She is a very kind-hearted and sweet person, commonly helping people she doesn't know when not assisting Ian in his various shenanigans. She has a heart for adventure, and is more prone to it than Ian, sometimes coercing him into some adventures he would otherwise pass up. A notable feature to her is that she obviously shows signs of love towards Ian, however he is oblivious and therefore she has come to believe she is very sneaky and clever about it. (Common signs of love towards Ian: Blushing, giggling at things he says, trying to tell him but not having words come out, jealous glares at other girls he talks to, etc. etc.) When possible she would prefer not to fight, but get her angry and she'll go ape-shit on you. Most of her patience is used putting up with Ian's lazy attitude, but if anyone wants to hurt Ian or any of her friends or crew mates, she'll become pissed. A few personality quirks of hers. Her favorite candy is butterscotch. She plays the guitar, more specifically the electric guitar. She is a dog person, not a cat person. She enjoys birdwatching. She dislikes peppermint. Her least favorite instrument is the French horn. She never naps unless there is absolutely nothing else to do, or she is just that tired. Hometown: Mirrorball Island, East Blue History: Though Eris was born 5 years after Ian, she grew up enjoying his presence. Their families were on good terms, and their mothers were friends with eachother, had the same job and work environment. When Ian would go on his adventures, though I refer to his later adventures when he was 12, Eris was the first to jump and join in. She was seven when she started adventuring around Mirrorball with Ian. They were very good friends throughout their childhood. However, when Ian had to stop adventuring for a while to focus on his academics, Eris continued her adventuring. All this while learning to play the guitar. When she was 10, she already took up playing guitar, and to this day is one of the better guitar players the world has seen. Around when she was 16, note that Ian is 21 at this point, Eris started looking into romantic novels. Reading through, it always showed that the one lazy guy that nobody ever expected was always the best lover. Around age 17, Eris gave up on that, because she figured it was false. But since then a deep-seeded feeling has blossomed inside her, making her curious about Ian. Since that point she started following him around, sorta like a ninja (*cough*stalker*cough*). Eris followed his daily routine a few times a week to see what he would be like in day to day life. Soon came a time, very recent though, Ian decided to take off for a big adventure. In her mind, Eris knew that she couldn't let him have all the fun, and while following him, she managed to get on board his stolen dinghy. Though Ian found it awkward, and even she told him that she wanted to be with him at least for his journey, Ian still remains oblivious to the true reason Eris came along. Abilities and Possessions Combat: For combat she is an all out acrobatics expert, mixed with use of a hardcore style of using her guitar as a weapon. Her main weapon, as stated is her Guitar, but not in your usual entertainer way of making music for buffs. She literally takes the guitar, and uses it to bash the enemy. She uses it like a battle ax and as such, she uses heavy crushing blows. Weaponry: Iron Guitar: An electric guitar with very sturdy technology inside of it, which she uses both to play, and to smash with. No matter how much of a beating she gives this guitar, it will remain functional. It does have a very strange sound though, being made entirely of iron. Items: N/A SD Earned: 0 Stats
Fate of the Swift [1 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your speed stat.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 13 Used Regular Technique Points: 11 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Edited by Aoi Akemi, Nov 25 2011, 08:25 AM.
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 1 2011, 08:18 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Flip is free formable Jump flip is borderline free form <edit> it's easiest just to say that most of this is free form. Wall jump isnt really offensive. I don't exactly have a problem with this tech, seeing as it can be probably be free formed as well, but another mod can stand to correct me. You're going to need rank 4 for trip slide. Overhead smash needs to be rank 4. Edited by Chips, Jul 1 2011, 08:19 PM.
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| Aoi Akemi | Jul 1 2011, 08:53 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||
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First Off, R1 Techs are pretty much supposed to be free-form anyways, and I don't really think being able to hook your leg on some bars with so little as a half-flip is really free form combat. Secondly there is no rank 4, she has 6 fortune, meaning her max rank is 3 which was all I could provide... if I need to tone down the attack power of any of them I will though. |
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 1 2011, 11:25 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||
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First off, I know rank 1's are free form techniques. I was merely pointing out what is free formable to hopefully save you a few tp, but whatever. Second off, after thinking those two techs over, I guess the limitations you put on them would work for ranks lower than 4. So I will allow it as long as no other mods have a problem with it. Wall jump still isn't an offensive technique. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 2 2011, 03:53 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Wall jump can be freeformed? Really? I thought this was pirate-land, not ninja-land. Wall jumping should be something like a rank 8 support. It's sorta like the urban-only precursor to limited personal flight. |
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| Aoi Akemi | Jul 4 2011, 07:16 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Erased tech on account of max rank being 3... so... fixed. | ||||||||||||||||||
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||
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| ♥ Singularity | Jul 6 2011, 06:15 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Dairy 4 T4
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I can only see 9 technique points used as oppose to 11 other than that Topic is flagged for Approval |
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| Hideo | Jul 10 2011, 06:04 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Now a banana man
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This NPC has been approved. |
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