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| Nary | Jul 1 2011, 01:48 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Nary Basic Character Information Name: Fran C. Osgrave Nickname: "Bull-Skull" Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Human/Cyborg Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 57,000,000Achievements: - Affiliation with the Artisan Pirates. - Involvement with the 'Loguetown Massacre' and involvement with crimes of assault, murder, endangerment of the public. - Involvement in defeating Sasa Dion and the pirates working under her as well as causing major destruction to Saline City and other areas of Salt Island. - Defeated Gordon Blu of Sasa Dion's group. - Involvement on the partial collapse of Rust Pit Island due to a fight which Marines believe was caused by the Artisans and the Strawbeard Pirates. - Involvement for the crimes of multiple homicide, structural damage, resisting arrest, being drunk and disorderly and disturbing the peace on Labourado Island. Profession: ~Navigator The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job. Navigators will have the skills to navigate the Grand Line. Anyone travelling the Grand Line without a Navigator will be at the mercy of the moderators in their journeys. ~Chef A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients. Position: Navigator Physical Appearance Height: 5’9 Weight: 162lbs Hair: Black, spiky afro complete with sideburns. Eyes: Fran has a pair of half-opened eyes, in which his black pupils are located. Under his left eye are three vertical lines which arcs upward. Clothing/Accessories: Fran would usually wears a single-sleeved cherry pink juban; a traditional Japanese shirt. The juban’s sleeve has a zipper in which can be separated from the shirt. He also sports a pair of black pants adorned with pale purple swirls on the right thigh which stops just below his knees. He keeps a rather thick belt over a purple sash that suspends his pants in place. Fran wears a pair of brown multi-purpose boots. Fran dons a piece of necklace with four small sea king fangs on his neck, a single jade bracelet on his left wrist and a belt buckle with the jolly roger of the Straw Beard pirates. General Appearance: Fran has a moderately built body, mostly from his practice of his chosen martial art style. His muscles are apparent but not sculpted thoroughly, which often makes people believe that he does some level of manual labor. As he lost his right arm in one of his adventures, he has replaced it with a cybernetic arm. Picture The Character Personality: Most people who know Fran would describe his as a nice individual, honest and hard-working. He loves showing off his skill and be praised more than anything else, and so he often likes to volunteer himself to anyone who needs assistance. And though he does have a very keen sense in directions and an impeccable memory for faces, pictures and such, Fran has trouble remembering dates and names which he calls ‘trivial matter’. While he does look stupid with his eerie smile, Fran possesses good insight and a good grasp of given information. Thus, he can usually paint a picture in perspective, though he does bulldoze his way through most of the time. Fran has commendable awareness which proves useful as he acts as a bodyguard. One of Fran’s most distinctive trait might be his professionalism towards work. He’s punctual and precise. Moreover he certainly has his priorities straight, which translate as: Family – Friends – Self – Work. While this would sound noble and all, Fran does not think twice to pull some punches under the belt nor steal when deemed necessary. He can stoop as low as he could but he would never kill civilians, besides, he detests the smell of blood. Extra: -Fran has a nasty habit of scratching his bottom. -He has troubles with women because of his nasty smile; they claim that the smile looks ‘pervy’. - He carries a blue and white strip shoulder bad in which he keeps his four other sword together with his spare clothes, compass, etc. -Fran has a thing for naming his attacks as elaborately as he could, which sometimes he get confused for. -As seen in Fran's first adventure, There is Honor Among Artisans, But Not Thieves, he has exceedingly bad luck. Hometown: Port Village, East Blue History Fran started his pirate career at the age of sixteen, where he left Port Village in a small raft with a single sail, half a month’s worth of rations and a coffee-powered motor. Of course, it was well against his old man, who wanted him to take over the family business, being the eldest son. But young Fran wanted adventure, romance and so forth, not to throw away his live living in some predestined path. His first week at sea was quite bad, right after he set sail a huge storm gave him a very unpleasant welcome. Half of his food were either lost to the ravaging torrents or to soaked to be eaten. And he met sea kings along the way which he narrowly escaped from. Luckily his torn raft drifted into the island of Louge Town where he spent a month or so recuperating. Funds are an important part of a pirates travel, and since Fran had spent almost every penny he has on living expenses, he was broke. It was a good thing he ended up in a trading town where everyone came to buy and sell. Thievery was quite an ongoing thing in a town like this, so Fan joined the band wagon. The first few skirmishes were easy pickings, and with every successful run, Fran’s confidence grew. Fran was young, and lacked experience to distinguish which ones not to steal from. As he approached a large man with a funk straw-like moustache, he skilfully slipped his hands into his pocket. When he had extracted a small leather pouch, Fran quickly strides of, or so he thought. Apparently, he was followed. Once Fran was all alone the straw-bearded man along with a handful of rough-looking men came about. They asked him what was he intending to do with the beli he stole, Fran said it was for his pirate expedition. Everyone laugh they told him it wouldn’t be enough. The straw-bearded man then told Fran if he wanted to be a pirate, he could join them, the ‘Straw Beard Pirates’. Reluctantly he joined but due to fear more than anything else. His days as a member of the Straw Beards was quite a fruitful experience, there he learned several fighting style from commendable fighters, his talent for inventing blossomed with the guidance of the deck inventor and most of all made a handful of good friends. Fran had his fun as a pirate and a fair share of adventures. As their pirate crew grew, so did their infamy and gain a notable reputation amongst the pirate ranks. After an adventurous three years, Captain Gary Faux von Feasog a.k.a. ‘Straw Beard’ suddenly announce the disbandment of the crew with no explanation whatsoever and disappeared without a trace. Fran returned to East Blue and worked as a bodyguard, butler, delivery boy and miner while he searched for clues concerning straw beard’s whereabouts. Abilities and Possessions Combat: By transcending his earlier fighting style, the Anything-Goes Martial Arts to another level, Fran’s over all style has become more focused; more controlled and has more finesse than compared to his earlier, more brutal and all-around fighting style. His new and improved fighting style involves using a giant bansho fan to either blow away his opponents or defend with wind related techniques or use his cyborg arm to its maximum potential with heat and fire related techniques. Fran still favors close quarters combat above anything else, his common fighting pattern would be to launch ranged techniques to build momentum while keeping his opponents off balance, he will the seize the opportunity to close in and duke it out, relying on his massive stamina to prevail. There are times that Fran can become really witty and resourceful in the middle of a fight, in such cases, he can pull some very interesting moves, despite his horrendous luck. Weapons : Amihan – Amihan is a 6 feet long and 3 feet wide bansho fan, the whole fan is made out of a special type of wood called the Narra. The wood is very lightweight and as durable as titanium. The wooden handle has intricately carved designs into it which shows a beautiful woman clad in a wind-like dress. The carving holds a key chain of a small lamp in its hand which glows when its user is in danger, Fran never gets to use it since he is a very unlucky person; it constantly glows when he uses it. The fan’s ‘blade’ is held by a shaft which is a continuation of the handle, there are a pair of swirly deigns on opposite sides of its surface while the edges are sharp enough to cut like a sword. Along the upper portion of the fan’s surface is a Chinese word for wind, the lower portion has three dots forming a triangular shape. On the tip of the shaft is a blunt edge which is actually made out of seastone. Along the shaft near the handle are three diagonal groves used to hoist the fan on its holster. Spoiler: click to toggle Fist Launcher Ver. II – Fran’s cybernetic fist/hand can be launched from his wrist to punch far away enemies. A spring mechanism attached to the wrist increases the force which the fist can generate. A single steel rope (30 meters) is then attached to the wrist to retract the fist. Items; Madness Pills x10 – These are peculiar pills that can give a +10 to a random stat and a -10 to a second random stat for 10 posts. During this time they act completely irrational and crazy. Baby Den-Den Mushi x1 – Their shells are orange with black spirals and the numbers "6" in a white circle on the sides of one and "28" on the other. They're good for communication for up to three miles. They sound like they get bad reception, but in reality just have sore throats, so they're a bit crackly. Hotaid – When Fran drinks this, he can negate any upkeep he has from his cybernetics for the current SL. In addition, for the next seven posts, he can break through any walls that may be in his way, but only if he cries "Oh Yes!" Beli: 83,300,000 Upkeep: 450,000 for cyborg fuel SD Earned: 217 Stats:
Traits: Devil Fruit Fated(6): Fate of the Mighty (X Traits) - When the character next earns a trait point, they gain X+1 trait points instead, where X is equal to the number of traits points spent. 3X is added to stamina. Basic Cyborg (1 Trait) - This is the most basic level of cyborg, and the most commonly encountered type in the blues. A Basic Cyborg begins with up to 3M Beli worth of modifications. Their bodies are made out of Iron and do not vary from their original size. They may have one concealed weapon per arm or leg, and one basic system per other appendage. Note that these weapons or systems are very basic. Specs Battle Helmsman (1 Trait) – By using Fran’s skills in predicting weather patterns, he has somehow managed to infuse his knowledge of manipulating weather and nature to a certain extent to create a unique style of fighting. Fran gains special technique points the amount half of his fortune for techniques that fall under this category. In-Training (2 Traits) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. Techniques Regular Technique Points: 137 Used Regular Technique Points: 66 Special Technique Points: 26 Used Special Technique Points: 24
Development History Gains/Losses - 8 SD and 3,500,000 beliEdit Log
Edited by Nary, Nov 23 2013, 05:03 AM.
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||
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| Nary | Jul 2 2011, 05:36 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||
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Ready for checking. | ||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 2 2011, 04:19 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||
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What does the BSHT thing in your techs' ranks mean? Windy Style - Eddy: Should be rank 18, for being both ranged and having an affect (the knockback). Windy Style - Buhawi: The blocking projectiles is fine, but creating a physical barrier against opponents with less strength/fortune than you is probably too much for a rank 20. Weakening/slowing enemies that cross it would probably make more sense: at rank 20, you could give a -2 str/spd penalty to all enemies crossing it (at rank 28, this would jump to -9). Also, a duration should be given. The other techs all look fine. Also, I think your cybernetic modifications should be listed somewhere; all we can see right now is that you have the trait, unless I'm missing something. Everything else looks great, especially the fan (even though it's pr0nographic). I'd flag this if the above changes were made. |
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| Nary | Jul 2 2011, 08:14 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||
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BSHT is Battle Helmsman Special Tech. I removed Windy Style - Eddy for now since it wouldn't fit with how much special tech points I have now. I fixed Windy Style - Buhawi accordingly though i pumped it to -5 strength and speed at rank 24. I added the cyborg specs, I forgot that one. |
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 3 2011, 03:17 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||
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Windy Style - Buhawi still needs a duration on it, but other than that... Topic is flagged for approval. Edit: New upkeep for cyborg fuel - 150,000. Edited by Chips, Jul 3 2011, 03:29 PM.
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| Nary | Jul 3 2011, 05:38 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||
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Added both in. | ||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 6 2011, 11:12 AM Post #7 | ||||||||||||
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Eh sorry. 450,000 for upkeep. Reflagged. |
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| Nary | Jul 6 2011, 06:32 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 7 2011, 08:09 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||
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Everything looks tidy! Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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