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Diego Diaz; My Fourth (Opened Slot By Speak) [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 30 2011, 01:41 PM (1,030 Views)
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Account Name: Orion


Basic Character Information
Name: Diego Diaz
Nickname: The Black Guitarist
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human Cyborg
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 4,000,000
Achievements:
-Gained a Crew and bounty for murder and assault of Marines
Profession:

~Marksman
The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. A marksman will be able to start with more ranged weapons than normal. They also do not need to pay upkeep for their ammunition.

~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.

Jack of All Trades

~Entertainer
An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific

~Navigator
The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job.

Position: Captain


Physical Appearance
Height: 5’9
Weight: 220
Hair: Black
Eyes: Hazel

Clothing/Accessories: Diego wears a long black leather trench coat with a large black Fedora hat. His upper body is covered with a black long sleeve button down shirt and his lower body is covered with black slacks. On his feet he has black boots with black socks. Around his neck he carries a chrome black cross on a silver chain. Around his back he carries his black guitar on a black leather strap.

General Appearance: Diego doesn’t look as strong as most men covered in layers of clothes, in fact he is generally a normal sized man with a well structured body. His right arm, left and right legs are all cyborg limbs. His cyborg legs are more for just walking but his right arm opens up into a mini crossbow which he uses to defend himself. His hair is long and rather straight and he has a goatee as well. His skin color is tan and his body and face are virtually smooth and cleared of all scars. His cyborg limbs are fueled by alcohol.

Diego


The Character

Personality: Diego is a generally silent man, he sits and plays his guitar to sooth himself. He would rather get lost in his music than speak to people in general. When talked to, he would generally continue the conversation if the other is willing but with a sort of attitude that says “Why are you still here?” He doesn’t like to get to close to people so he stays at a distance at first until he feels it’s appropriate to let his guard down. Its not that he doesn't trust people, he just doesn't want to lose anyone else who is dear to him. So instead of letting them get close to him or the other way around, he keeps them at a distance. He will always have this problem, no matter how long he's been with a person.

Hometown: Gunsmoke Island- West Blue
History:

Diego was born on a pirate boat where his mother and father raised him. He was a healthy and very active child. The only child on the ship in fact, his mother was the ships marksmen and his father was the ships brawler. His algid uncle was his favorite character on the ship, he loved to fool around and play with Diego as a child. The crew as a whole lived under the belief of attaining true freedom by roaming the seas, this was inserted into the mind of Diego. He loved the fact that they were free to do what they wanted without any consequences. Right around the age of 8 Diego picked up his very first guitar and his uncle taught him how to play, he was the ship’s entertainer after all.

Over the years the crew his parents ran with fell into hard times, Diego himself never acted on any piracy but the crews fight with the marines would soon become his own. Seeing as the marines were hassling the crew, his mother and father argued about teaching him some defense skills. His fathers finally convinced his mother to teach him some marksmen skills while he showed him some basic hand to hand combat skills.

It wasn’t until age 15 that the crew met its end at the hands of the marines, the ship was destroyed and Diego was sent adrift as its only survivor. He landed on a nearby island where he was saved by an older woman who patched up his limbs with cyborg parts. He spent a few months in rehabilitation under the woman’s care. Then asked for some upgrades as he continued to master the basic skills his parents gave him. As he trained all he could imagine was the faces of the marines as they cheered after destroying the ship he knew as his home. Once he turned 18 he left the island with his skills and ventured off into the world in search of a crew to keep his parents will of true freedom alive.

Abilities and Possessions

Combat: Diego likes to fight from a distance but sadly that isn’t always the case. He’s been trained as a kickboxer during his rehab for this very situation. He likes to fight using his hands and legs when in close combat, swiftly moving through his opponents movements in order to avoid getting hit.

Weaponry: ALL WEAPONS AND AMMO ARE IRON QUIALITY.
Normal Weapons

Cyborg Hidden Weapons

Items: Notebook, Pen, Spanish Guitar and Compass.
Beli: 3,150,000
Upkeep: 450,000
SD Earned: 25
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 57
  • Used for Fortune:

    • Strength: 28 (20+ 8)
    • Speed: 12
    • Stamina: 10
    • Accuracy: 15
    • Fortune: 14
Traits:

Basic Cyborg (1 Trait) - This is the most basic level of cyborg, and the most commonly encountered type in the blues. A Basic Cyborg begins with up to 3M Beli worth of modifications. Their bodies are made out of Iron and do not vary from their original size. They may have one concealed weapon per arm or leg, and one basic system per other appendage. Note that these weapons or systems are very basic.

Super Strength (2 Traits) - This character's strength is boosted by 40%.

Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name:
Devil Fruit Type:
Devil Fruit Ability:


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:28
Used Regular Technique Points: 16
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Techniques
Feeling Lucky? 4
Type: Offensive
Range: 10 to 15 feet.
Stats: N/A
Description: Diego uses his Pistols to shoot his opponent(s).
Target Practice 4
Type: Offensive
Range: 20 to 30feet
Stats: N/A
Description: Diego concentrates on his target and carefully aims and shoots with his mini crossbow, one arrow at a time at his target.
Jaw Breaker 4
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Diego delivers a strong uppercut aimed at his opponent’s chin.
Tearful Melody 4
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Diego jumps and delivers a strong kick to his opponents temple or rips which ever body part he can touch but he usually aims for the temple.



Development History
Edit Log goes here
Diego’ Progress

Edited by Onion, Feb 1 2012, 02:11 PM.
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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Nary
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Are you sure you don't want to take another profession? You can't add another once you're approved.

Personality could use a little more fleshing out.

6 shot revolvers and the 10 shot automatic crossbows are gonna cost you, are they iron quality?

So your cyborg limbs have no hidden weapons?

Feeling Lucky - remove the one after another part.
Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' OsgraveArtisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line
Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55

Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51

Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33
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Onion
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Edited.

I gave him Navigator.

Hows the personality now?

Yes all materials are iron quality.

Its my fault really, I didn't make clear that the crossbow was one of the hidden weapons. I explained how it comes out of his arm and how it works. Hopefully that was ok. I also added two mini canons on each of the legs at the heels. I'm not gonna use them in attacks at the moment because I ran out of tech points. plus I believe the drop kick canon tech I was thinking of is way to much for a 4 rank.

I edited Feeling Lucky? How does it look now?
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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Chips
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Specify a blue for hometown please

Did the math, unfortunately you would have to pay for all those weapons and you can't really afford any of them. Not to mention, you would need at least 50 strength to fire the cannons with any sort of accuracy.

If you switch the crossbow arm to single shot before reload, change the revolvers to flintlock (one shot), and find some other basic weapons for your legs, then you should be good in terms of weapons.


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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Edited.

Didn't want the leg canons from the start anyway so I gave them up. If I want them in the future I'll upgade later, along with the revolvers and the crossbow.

So how does it look now?
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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Techniques look fine; I do hate called shots, since they technically do absolutely nothing without the proper trait, but whatever. Too much other stuff to check over, though, so I'll abstain on flagging.
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Onion
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So whats my Upkeep?
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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Please specify a cyborg fuel source.

Upkeep will be 150,000.

Edit: Also, 1000th post. Be honored!
Edited by Chips, Jul 3 2011, 03:27 PM.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Onion
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Didn't know where to put the specification of the fuel so I put it in general appearance.

Edited the upkeep.

And sweet I do feel honored lol.
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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Sorry to jump on your profile like this, I'm sure you guys won't mind. The character is cute, did you draw that?
Joy Ayane • N/A • Entertainer • Bounty Hunter • SD Earned: 62 • Beli: 17,220,000 • L: West Blue

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No I didn't lol I'm not that good an artist. Its Van from Gun X Sword.
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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revolvers aren't really revolvers if they are one shot.


Topic is flagged for approval.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Yeah sorry about that, been editing from my phone up until yesterday. anyway hows it look now?
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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My apologies. Upkeep for cyborg is actually 450,000

Reflagged.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Ouch! Your killing me lol. Edited.
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Name: Godric G. Fist
SD Earned: 440
Beli: 3,000,000
Bounty: 100,000,000
Ship: -
Position: Member/Family
Crew/Group: - / G. Fists
Professions: Martial Artist/Smith
Location: Grandline
Legend: Normal
Strength: 88
Speed: 85
Stamina: 74
Accuracy: 65
Fortune: 90
Focus: 6
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