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| Diego Diaz; My Fourth (Opened Slot By Speak) [Flagged] | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Jun 30 2011, 01:41 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Orion Basic Character Information Name: Diego Diaz Nickname: The Black Guitarist Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: Human Cyborg Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 4,000,000 Achievements: -Gained a Crew and bounty for murder and assault of Marines Profession: ~Marksman The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. A marksman will be able to start with more ranged weapons than normal. They also do not need to pay upkeep for their ammunition. ~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Jack of All Trades ~Entertainer An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific ~Navigator The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job. Position: Captain Physical Appearance Height: 5’9 Weight: 220 Hair: Black Eyes: Hazel Clothing/Accessories: Diego wears a long black leather trench coat with a large black Fedora hat. His upper body is covered with a black long sleeve button down shirt and his lower body is covered with black slacks. On his feet he has black boots with black socks. Around his neck he carries a chrome black cross on a silver chain. Around his back he carries his black guitar on a black leather strap. General Appearance: Diego doesn’t look as strong as most men covered in layers of clothes, in fact he is generally a normal sized man with a well structured body. His right arm, left and right legs are all cyborg limbs. His cyborg legs are more for just walking but his right arm opens up into a mini crossbow which he uses to defend himself. His hair is long and rather straight and he has a goatee as well. His skin color is tan and his body and face are virtually smooth and cleared of all scars. His cyborg limbs are fueled by alcohol. Diego The Character Personality: Diego is a generally silent man, he sits and plays his guitar to sooth himself. He would rather get lost in his music than speak to people in general. When talked to, he would generally continue the conversation if the other is willing but with a sort of attitude that says “Why are you still here?” He doesn’t like to get to close to people so he stays at a distance at first until he feels it’s appropriate to let his guard down. Its not that he doesn't trust people, he just doesn't want to lose anyone else who is dear to him. So instead of letting them get close to him or the other way around, he keeps them at a distance. He will always have this problem, no matter how long he's been with a person. Hometown: Gunsmoke Island- West Blue History: Diego was born on a pirate boat where his mother and father raised him. He was a healthy and very active child. The only child on the ship in fact, his mother was the ships marksmen and his father was the ships brawler. His algid uncle was his favorite character on the ship, he loved to fool around and play with Diego as a child. The crew as a whole lived under the belief of attaining true freedom by roaming the seas, this was inserted into the mind of Diego. He loved the fact that they were free to do what they wanted without any consequences. Right around the age of 8 Diego picked up his very first guitar and his uncle taught him how to play, he was the ship’s entertainer after all. Over the years the crew his parents ran with fell into hard times, Diego himself never acted on any piracy but the crews fight with the marines would soon become his own. Seeing as the marines were hassling the crew, his mother and father argued about teaching him some defense skills. His fathers finally convinced his mother to teach him some marksmen skills while he showed him some basic hand to hand combat skills. It wasn’t until age 15 that the crew met its end at the hands of the marines, the ship was destroyed and Diego was sent adrift as its only survivor. He landed on a nearby island where he was saved by an older woman who patched up his limbs with cyborg parts. He spent a few months in rehabilitation under the woman’s care. Then asked for some upgrades as he continued to master the basic skills his parents gave him. As he trained all he could imagine was the faces of the marines as they cheered after destroying the ship he knew as his home. Once he turned 18 he left the island with his skills and ventured off into the world in search of a crew to keep his parents will of true freedom alive. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Diego likes to fight from a distance but sadly that isn’t always the case. He’s been trained as a kickboxer during his rehab for this very situation. He likes to fight using his hands and legs when in close combat, swiftly moving through his opponents movements in order to avoid getting hit. Weaponry: ALL WEAPONS AND AMMO ARE IRON QUIALITY. Normal Weapons Cyborg Hidden Weapons Items: Notebook, Pen, Spanish Guitar and Compass. Beli: 3,150,000 Upkeep: 450,000 SD Earned: 25 Stats:
Basic Cyborg (1 Trait) - This is the most basic level of cyborg, and the most commonly encountered type in the blues. A Basic Cyborg begins with up to 3M Beli worth of modifications. Their bodies are made out of Iron and do not vary from their original size. They may have one concealed weapon per arm or leg, and one basic system per other appendage. Note that these weapons or systems are very basic. Super Strength (2 Traits) - This character's strength is boosted by 40%. Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist.
Techniques Regular Technique Points:28 Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points:0 Used Special Technique Points:0
Development History Edit Log goes here Diego’ Progress Edited by Onion, Feb 1 2012, 02:11 PM.
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| Nary | Jul 1 2011, 03:26 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Are you sure you don't want to take another profession? You can't add another once you're approved. Personality could use a little more fleshing out. 6 shot revolvers and the 10 shot automatic crossbows are gonna cost you, are they iron quality? So your cyborg limbs have no hidden weapons? Feeling Lucky - remove the one after another part. |
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Jul 1 2011, 03:20 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Edited. I gave him Navigator. Hows the personality now? Yes all materials are iron quality. Its my fault really, I didn't make clear that the crossbow was one of the hidden weapons. I explained how it comes out of his arm and how it works. Hopefully that was ok. I also added two mini canons on each of the legs at the heels. I'm not gonna use them in attacks at the moment because I ran out of tech points. plus I believe the drop kick canon tech I was thinking of is way to much for a 4 rank. I edited Feeling Lucky? How does it look now? |
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| Chips | Jul 1 2011, 09:35 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Specify a blue for hometown please Did the math, unfortunately you would have to pay for all those weapons and you can't really afford any of them. Not to mention, you would need at least 50 strength to fire the cannons with any sort of accuracy. If you switch the crossbow arm to single shot before reload, change the revolvers to flintlock (one shot), and find some other basic weapons for your legs, then you should be good in terms of weapons. |
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| Onion | Jul 2 2011, 05:32 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Edited. Didn't want the leg canons from the start anyway so I gave them up. If I want them in the future I'll upgade later, along with the revolvers and the crossbow. So how does it look now? |
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 2 2011, 04:08 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Techniques look fine; I do hate called shots, since they technically do absolutely nothing without the proper trait, but whatever. Too much other stuff to check over, though, so I'll abstain on flagging. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Jul 2 2011, 10:25 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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So whats my Upkeep? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 3 2011, 03:26 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Please specify a cyborg fuel source. Upkeep will be 150,000. Edit: Also, 1000th post. Be honored! Edited by Chips, Jul 3 2011, 03:27 PM.
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| Onion | Jul 3 2011, 08:58 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Didn't know where to put the specification of the fuel so I put it in general appearance. Edited the upkeep. And sweet I do feel honored lol. |
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| Pernix | Jul 3 2011, 09:12 PM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Sorry to jump on your profile like this, I'm sure you guys won't mind. The character is cute, did you draw that? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Joy Ayane • N/A • Entertainer • Bounty Hunter • SD Earned: 62 • Beli: 17,220,000 • L: West Blue | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Jul 3 2011, 09:27 PM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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No I didn't lol I'm not that good an artist. Its Van from Gun X Sword. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 5 2011, 10:42 PM Post #12 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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revolvers aren't really revolvers if they are one shot. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| Onion | Jul 6 2011, 10:35 AM Post #13 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Yeah sorry about that, been editing from my phone up until yesterday. anyway hows it look now? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Chips | Jul 6 2011, 11:08 AM Post #14 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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My apologies. Upkeep for cyborg is actually 450,000 Reflagged. |
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| Onion | Jul 6 2011, 11:42 AM Post #15 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Ouch! Your killing me lol. Edited. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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