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| Berry | Jun 30 2011, 04:51 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||
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![]() Neira Burēdoネイラ ブレード ----------------------------------- This character was made by a user called Levi This character is completely original in the its role-plays, to the characters personality. Please don't say I copied anything from anyone, thanks for reading this. ----------------------------------- Information about me 私についての情報 Name: Neira "Avan" Burēdo (Ne-ra A-van Bu-ri-do) Alias: Cursed flute True age: 22 Gender: Female Race: Half-Daemon What IS a 'Daemon' Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 ![]() Achievements: N/A Profession ~Entertainer An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific. Entertainers can use their performance skills, be they song, dance or anything else, to influence others and use them as buffs, debuffs, etc. ~Inventor An inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build explosives and battle engines if they have enough materials. Position: Entertainer ----------------------------------- What I look like 私はどのようなもの Height:5''7 Weight:115 lbs Hair: Neira's hair is very long and would be able to reach around her waist, but she usually has it tied up with a black band. It has a scruffy feel to it, being all over the place but it reflect one of the reason which she wanted to be a pirate. Her hair has many tones of red flowing though it, at the base it's dark red and at the ends its light red, giving it a flame like look. Sometimes she has her hair flowing straight down, usually when she trust the person who she's with. Eyes: Neira's eyes are a emerald tone, which looks light the sun shinning down on a newly grow leaf in the morning. If you gazed deeply into the you'll notice that they seem to sparkle with a high amount of intensity. Neira's eye shape makes a impression that she is lazy or wondering a lot, but it does show a lot of her beauty if carefully analyzed. Her eye lashes color has been intensified with eyeliner and seemed to be perfectly curled. When ever she's angered her true eye's form appears to a red pupil with black eye whites. Clothing/Accessories: Neria's idea of dressing up usually is more or less playful. She likes to experiment with clothing and the colors of it. Her style of clothing usually involve being free, which is shown in her exposing her body one way or the other, if it was short jeans, to having the curves of her breast being shown in a shirt. The main colors in clothing which she seems to enjoy is black with a scarlet red match or navy blue with a contrast of baby-blue to emerald green. This is mostly due to the fact that it goes with her hair or her eyes. She is often seen wearing the clothing which her mother used to wore as a teen, a black leather jacket, brand name of course. A very dark blue jean which were very skinny to the point where you could see her curves, followed up by a pair of black sneaks with a decorative white whirl on the side. As a bikini she would be wearing a stripy bra, consisting of the colors red and white, with a same decorative color of knickers, covered by a sandy brown mini-skirt. However there is one item that she always wears. A bandage covering her stomach, hiding a tattoo which was laying there. She never takes this bandage off, apart from when going a bath/shower, as if she had a reason to hide the tattoo which laid dormant around her belly button. General Appearance: Seems to have a lot of youth inside of her. Her bright peached face, shows no wrinkles or any kind of facial tweaks which stand out. Her lips are a pale shade of red, slightly smaller than the average female's. She find that her face is somewhat problematic, due to the fact that it gives someone a impression that she is a clueless person when she is the complete opposite. Her figure is quite curvaceous, as she is also quite taller then a medium size person. Her curves seemed to be shown mainly around her breast, as their size seems to stand out, even though Neira doesn't seem to mind it. In fact, she tries to show it off using her clothing as a indicator. One of the main features, is the two strange arch shape tattoos which laid on her stomach, and one a inch above the gap between her breast which leads down upon it, with some sort of writing upon it which had the words "Freedom" in a different language. Her appearance ----------------------------------- My hidden secrets 私の隠された秘密 ![]() Getting to know me better? [Neira's theme song] Personality: A woman who has many sides to her being, Neira is confused herself at what she is really like, but on average she is a kind person at heart. Putting on different kinds of acts to her personality every day, she tries to find the best personality for herself. One day she could be very serious and the other day she could be playful, all of this is brought into her music making her quite spectacular at her work. In the past, she used to be a flamboyant young girl, who would take care of anything and everything there was around herself, trying to path her own destiny. The reason why her personality changed was the fact that she chose to become a musician and express her feeling with her musical melodies. She has became so good at flute playing she decides to show it to others, even if they say no and try to get the to join in with her. Her personal opinion of her hobby of playing the flute, isn't that its just another job, but its one thing that can branch peoples lives together. Even though she is peppy and mostly funny on a daily basis, once she steps into an fight one way or the other, she puts all of her silliness on hold and beings to concentrate on the battle, putting all of her known skills to work, this is maybe why when she was young she trained at a local dojo for five consecutive years. She actually has a knack of getting to wrapped up in a fight, and forgets about the surrounds which surround herself and may break a lot of objects in to process of the fight or maybe hit a civilian by accident. Even though she has some bad habit, her good ones overflow them, that why she is who she is. She has a knack from time to time to say word puns which have to do with her devil fruit powers such as "Bet your jelly of me." or "This isn't a matter to be wobbled about." This can lighten the mood of others due to the unexpectedness of those puns. Hometown: Stearr Island (North Blue) History: Her Story ----------------------------------- Skill and equipment スキルと設備 Combat: She doesn't have any combat abilities at all, putting her in a disadvantage, But she can use her music to help people and de-buff others in a fight. However in emergencies, she can switch her flute to a pitch where it is so loud, it would effect everyone and probably break their eardrum including hers. Her jelly powers come in use for defensive moves and she uses them when coming up with a offensive move, which is barely the case due to the fact that she rarely gets into fights anymore. Weaponry: A iron flute, which was modified to have a high range of pitches, by the turn of a switch on the side of the flute. Items: N/A Beli: 500,000 Upkeep: N/A SD Earned: 0 Stats:
Performance Assistant (1 Profession Trait) [Aviary Kara] – Plenty of good entertainers need someone to help them carry out their routine. The character gains a special Performance Assistant NPC which is under their control. This NPC, like normal trait NPCs, needs to be applied for separately, and linked to the main character. They also start with 24 SD. However, unlike normal trait NPCs, they gain 2 SD for every 3 SD you gain. Specific Devil Fruit (3 Normal Traits) [Jelly Fruit] - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion.
----------------------------------- Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Edited by Berry, Jul 10 2011, 12:35 PM.
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| Berry | Jul 1 2011, 04:21 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||
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| Berry | Jul 2 2011, 05:43 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||
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Completely finished V2 of this character | ||||||||||||||
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 2 2011, 04:24 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||
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I'm afraid that DF's not going to work. The way you want it to falls into the catagory of "production" paramecia, which thusfar all seem to have a more substantial theme, producing things like bubbles, wax, poison, etc. "Disks" are a little too mechanical sounding for that particular type. You may need to make her a human. Site has some strict anti-furry race rules, and a tail may trigger them. On the bright side, your performance techs all look fine. |
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| Berry | Jul 2 2011, 04:33 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||
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Other than that i'll change the tail into red eyes to stop getting rid of my history plot. Edit, actually i see what you mean. I'll try to edit it from what i've seen or maybe just change the fruit itself. Edited by Berry, Jul 3 2011, 01:48 AM.
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| Berry | Jul 3 2011, 05:11 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||
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Change df to Jelly, hoping that this one works out. | ||||||||||||||
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 3 2011, 05:35 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||
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So it's like a very soft, pliable, mushy version of the gomu gomu? I think somebody else once posited something similar to this. Given the lack of paramecias and the relatively harmless and organic nature of this DF, I won't contest it. If the other mods are okay with it, I am too. Red eyes is okay. Topic is flagged for approval. Edit: u jelly? Edited by The Unspeakable, Jul 3 2011, 05:38 PM.
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| Berry | Jul 4 2011, 02:35 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||
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Yes it is, maybe the thing similar was that slime slime thing i saw at the beginning of the list for random devil fruits, but it wouldn't be that much similar. Anyway, thanks. Edit: And no, no i'm not. Oh, since you kinda approved the devil fruit, i'm going to add puns to my character's speech kay? =p Edited by Berry, Jul 4 2011, 02:07 PM.
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 7 2011, 08:32 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||
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Not 100% of the stickiness, since you're not turned into jelly so much "becoming jellylike", but everything else seems fine. That note aside, I'm fine with this DF. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| Hideo | Jul 10 2011, 07:23 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||
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Guess the fruit is fine Remove the "sold for high prices" part of the Daemon race. If you want them to be valuable find another way. "She also has the ability to make disk that she throws at a opponent during battle of uses it to protect herself" - Remove that from her combat section Used TP should be 16 The history could probably explain a bit more why people despise this race besides the weird eye color, but I suppose it isn't needed. What I don't understand however is why they would leave her alone at 4 because the town people hated her mom. I mean, people can tell that Neira is one as well, so doesn't that just leave her just as open to abuse minus the protection of her parents being around? Maybe I misread or missed something along the way? |
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| Berry | Jul 10 2011, 12:35 PM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||
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Fix: All. Isn't the df change a free move? Well its a perm change which is used once the df is eaten. She left her due to it being her home-place, and her mother has more or less a positive outlook any everything, thinking the human side of her will be enough for her to live normally. |
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| Hideo | Jul 10 2011, 06:22 PM Post #12 | ||||||||||||||
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You have 4 techs besides your DF one and all of them are rank 4, thus 16 TP spent. Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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