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Corpsemoney Cleo; Finished.
Topic Started: Jun 29 2011, 01:37 PM (667 Views)
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Cleoss Tyne

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Account Name:c0nflikt


Basic Character Information
Name: Cleoss Tyne
Nickname: Corpsemoney Cleo
Age:20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 2,550,000
Achievements:
Profession:
~Entertainer
[Actor/Storyteller]
An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific. Entertainers can use their performance skills, be they song, dance or anything else, to influence others and use them as buffs, debuffs, etc.


~Weapon Specialist
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips.

Position: Captain


Physical Appearance
Height: 6'4
Weight: 183lbs
Hair: Golden Blonde Hightop Fade
Eyes: Red
Clothing/Accessories: White Linen Under-shirt and white underwear. Beige Linen pants. Leather belt. Tan robe, Tabi Shoes.

General Appearance: Cleoss looks like some sort of flamboyant priest, modest clothes, and yet exotic hair. He naturally handsome with a square jaw, and perfect dimples. His eyes are beautiful often described as like rubies. He is almost never seen without his signature staff, and easy grin.


The Character
Personality: Cleoss is a general life loving rogue of a pirate, He seeks to learn everything he can about the world. His goal in life is just to leave his own notable story and enjoy every moment. Although friendly and fun loving, he is morally bankrupt. He believes money and knowledge is power, and lives to earn as much of both as he can. He is also a schemer, he is always harnessing his knowledge to his monetary advantage. He is also notably greedy, although logical and calculating in his attempts to attain wealth. Although he is an average rogue he does have a few good traits. He is loyal to those who he can trust, although overall he is mistrustful. He is also stubborn and when he gives his word he will stick to it even if it means his life.
Hometown: Dawn Island, East Blue.
History: Cleoss was born and raised in Goa City, he lived in edge town. His parents Trent and Karessa Tyne were both librarians near town center. Cleoss was raised with a love of books, by age ten he had read hundreds of books. About this time a noble of high town visited the library, he was angered by the fact that he couldn't buy any of the books. He later bought the entire library and closed it, They spoke out but were soon killed by the noble. Cleoss then became an orphan of Goa City, he then survived how he could. Earning little money telling stories in the streets, he was taken on by a troupe of performers. Acting came natural to him. By age 17 Cleoss had performed all over east blue, he always returned to his home dawn island. Around this age he fell it with a negative crowd about Goa, he had always leaned towards playing roles as gangsters, villains, and thugs. Soon he accepted the fact that he was a pirate. He quickly became a little known sellsword amongst criminals.
Cleoss is known amongst thugs for his scholarly nature, for a decent price he has taught many a thug to read. For a higher one he would even teach them to write.
Cleoss is best known by his nickname Corpsemoney, He doesn't even know how he came by the nickname. He often tells a story of a night he got into a vicious barfight where he stabbed a man in the face so hard he money came out of his pockets, that night all of the patrons of the bar had free drinks on the deadman and cleo.
Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Cleoss is a fierce fighter, being a nerdy child taught him to be vicious as less will try to bully you. When engaged he is merciless, and stoic. He doesn't enjoy killing or fighting, and thus attempts to maim or disarm. Though will kill when necessary.
Weaponry: Spine- Spine is a quarter staff 7 feet and 6 inches long, It has a core of hardened whale bones, on the outside it is ribbed with segments of steel nine in all, each 7 inches long, with 3 inches of space in between.
Apex- A basic steel dagger, 8 inch blade shaped like a scimitar but double edged. With a basic cross hilt. 15 inches in all.
Items: Small Notepad, mechanical pen. Pouch filled with various cleaned hand & finger bones.
Beli: 3,950,000
Upkeep: 0
SD Earned:39
Stats: 71
  • Used for Stats: 71
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength:20
    • Speed:15
    • Stamina:20
    • Accuracy:16
    • Fortune: 17
Traits:

Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion.

Dazzling Performer [Acting](1 Trait) – These entertainers are so skilled in their chosen field that they can use their performance skills to actually bring about changes in others. These entertainers gain special Technique Points that can only be used on their performance support techniques, of the amount of half their Fortune.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name:Hone Hone no Mi
Devil Fruit Type:Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability:This devil fruit gives the power to manipulate bones. They may freely sculpt and change the shape of any bones they can directly touch, as well as altering their density and volume.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 34
Used Regular Technique Points: 8
Special Technique Points: 8
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Hone Hone No Mi (8)
Type:Support
Range:Melee
Stats:N/A
Description:This devil fruit gives the power to manipulate bones. They may freely sculpt and change the shape of any bones they can directly touch, as well as altering their density and volume.
Limits

Skeleton Key (4)
Type:Support
Range:Melee
Stats:N/A
Description:Cleoss can form keys of bone, that can open any average sorts of locks.



Development History
Gains/Losses:

Two Year Anniversary! + 5 SD

Hot Yuri Action + 9 SD 1,750,000 Beli, Bounty Increased by 50,000

Watch out for Droppings 22 SD & 5,300,000

Henrik L Frost Scooped to Cleo

July Contest Rewards + 2 SD

July Contest Rewards + 1 SD & 200,000 Beli
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Edited by C0nMoney, Aug 2 2011, 12:16 PM.
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I'd like a little more in clothing please. It is hard to visualize your characters clothing with little detail (i.e. no color).

Specify a blue for his hometown

Another paragraph for history please.

I don't know what tier that bone fruit is, but until another mod says something, I suppose t3.

For your free rank 4 DF tech, you need to give your fruit some limits.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Alright fixed all you asked, except the fruit description. I got the fruit from another user who got it from another user, and its always been that way. It's also always been t5, this is a scoop and my character had it before the scoop and it was t5 with the same description.
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oh wow. I totally meant t5. I was thinking 3 traits in my head. Ignore my previous statement about the df. My bad.

Do this
 
the user gains a free rank 4 DF Technique that is essentially a summary of their Devil Fruit powers, at their current level. It will not do to simple copy the description of the Devil Fruit, but you need to specify limits if they are applicable for their current level of Devil Fruit Powers.

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Added some good limits.
Edited by C0nMoney, Jul 6 2011, 03:29 PM.
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That works

3.8mil for the weapons

used tp is 12

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Blue Euringer
SD Earned: 392
Bounty: 75 million
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: Martial Artist / Thief
Devil Fruit: Pamu Pamu no Mi

Crew: The Black Sale Trading Company (BSTC)
Position: Captain
Current Members: 3
Crew Bounty: 193 million
Current Location: Sea Train Zone - Pucci

Then Tommy tries to think up a plan to defeat this guy and after a few seconds, thought of the perfect plan to knock him out which was to punch him in the back of the head. He then out maneuvers him by side stepping to the back of him and punches him right on the back of his head perfectly which then knocks him out for the rest of the bar brawl. "That took care of him, now who next?"

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Alright fixed
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Chipsnub, Used TP is 8. He upped the rank of the basic DF tech

Skeleton key is fine I suppose, though you'd have to actually know the shape of the lock in order to pull it off so don't expect to just open everything you find.

Link all gains and losses rather than just the character

Could generally use more detail, but I guess it's not too big a deal.

Limits need more detail though, pretty much how much he can alter the size, density, etc. A fortune formula of some sort would work.

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