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| Kalevala | Jun 29 2011, 12:20 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||
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Lady Lunari
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Lady V Basic Character Information Name: Kelly Paran Nickname: Age: 16 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Other Threat: 0 Achievements: Profession:
Position: Chef :D Physical Appearance Height: 5'4 Weight: 100lbs Hair: Kelly has short chin length hair. The hair is straight and well maintained, with bangs that reach just pass her eyebrows. Her hair's colour is very light orange hue. Eyes: Large innocent indigo coloured eyes. Clothing/Accessories: Kelly is a rebellious young teen and her clothing shows it. A simply white tube top covers her torso and a very short mid thigh red checkered skirt covers her lower half. White and black horizontal stripped leggings cover most of her exposed legs, with a pair of large thick black leather boots on her feet, secured by many buckled straps. One thing about Kelly though is she's obsessed with accessories. The young girl loves to dress up her outfits, seeing it as making her more appealing and mature. As such her thick black belt is covered in fake pearl studs. Her belt buckle is skull and cross bones in design, even though she herself is not a pirate. Matching her belt buckle, Kelly wears a pair of skull rings, one on each index finger. Likewise she wears simple iron rings on her thumbs and middle fingers as she thinks they look nice with the skull rings. Adding to her excessive accessories, she wears two chains, both with a matching cross. Both are worn around her neck, the outer most one nestled just at the top of her bust, the second inner one two inches higher. Helping keep the necklaces always in their correct positions, is a tight brown leather choker. Her outfit is finished off by a hooded jacket. The jacket is black, with thick white fur all along the outer edges including those on the sleeves. This short jacket reaches only to the bottom of her ribs and isn't designed to be done up. The cuffs of the jacket, like her belt, have a thick band of fake pearls. The signature piece of her jacket however, is the hood. The one thing Kelly loves more than accessories and cooking, is bears. As such her hood is custom tailored with a pair of bear ears, one of which has a thick metal ring piercing. This hood is almost always up on her head, and seems custom tailored so it doesn't easily fall off. General Appearance: A small and slender girl, there really isn't too much to Kelly. She isn't muscle bound or built for combat, and she isn't some plumb lazy slug either. As a chef the young woman knows all about nutrition and proper foods to eat, and applies that to her daily living. All and all this petite girl is remarkably average. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: An upbeat and cheerful girl, Kelly loves to have fun. She loves exploring new places, seeing new sights, and is easily distracted by strange and unusual things. Despite her passion for cooking, Kelly is quite lazy. She hates doing other chores and will go to excessive lengths to try and get out of them. When not working the young woman does her best to be mature. Rather than smiling a lot or playing games, she tries to be very calm and serious, as in her mind that's what adults are like. Despite her best attempts though, its often very easy to make her smile and laugh, and more often than not in a fun situation she'll forget about her persona and just be herself. That, and the fact her clothing doesn't exactly scream adult, make it clear that Kelly just tries way too hard. When put in a tough situation her youthfulness also shows. Kelly's temper flares up quite easily, and she isn't afraid to hit people or yell at them when this occurs. In addition to her intense anger, the young girl is terrified of bugs and other gross slimy things. She isn't particularly brave either, in dangerous situations letting others lead the way and do the dirty work, while she stays behind as much as possible. Hometown: Boyardee Island, West Blue History: Kelly was born on Boyardee Island, an island renown for its chefs, and in particular, its noodles. Named after the legendary founder of the islands first settlement, Chef Boyardee. Known for his delicious canned noodles, for a time they were shipped across the blues, making Boyardee an island for some of the greatest culinary minds in all of West Blue. Though over 50 years has past since Chef Boyardee's time, the island has continued to flourish as a place renown for its talented chefs and some of the best tasted food in West Blue. Kelly's parents were two of the islands chefs, who owned a bakery and sweets shop. From a very young age kelly learned to cook, even if early on she just helped make simple things like cookies. For her it was a chance to involve herself in her parents work, and really nothing made her happier. While her parents provided her with a fun loving environment, outside the home things weren't so great. To put it mildly Kelly was a shy girl. She didn't like being away from her parents, and while other kids ran around playing with each other, Kelly would be off on her own, playing with her large teddy bear named Mr Snuffles. Kelly loved Mr Snuffles more then anything. He was always there to give her a much needed cuddle, he always smiled, always listened to her troubles, and always was fun to play with. Whether it was trouble at home, with the other kids, her cooking, or anything else she always knew she could rely on him. On her 13th birthday Kelly decided she was a grown up. Hey body was beginning to change, and to her that meant she was an adult. Though she no long openly brought Mr Snuffles with here everywhere any more, she still talked to him often. On this particular occasion she whispered to him about her plans to go exploring, to get rare fresh ingredients, planning to make an amazing meal for her parents, and prove to them she was all grown up. Much of Boyardee was still wild and untamed, as a lot of the resources used in cooking were the finest ingredients and thus imported. As such there were plenty of unexplored areas, and rumours among the younger chefs of a secret hidden garden Boyardee once owned, hidden somewhere in the wilderness. supposedly it had all the most delicious tasting fruits and veggies in the world. It was these rumours that Kelly was hunting for, knowing that with her still budding skills, and her lack of funds, she needed every advantage she could get. Several days passed as Kelly explored the island. She wasn't sure if her parents had found out that she hadn't gone to visit a friend in a distant village. Though she was dirty, hungry, and missed her parents (and Mr Snuffles) terribly, she continued her search, confident in her childlike way that she'd find this supposed secret garden. Eventually she did come upon a clearing in which an old abandon cabin sat. The wood was well rotted and while there were no signs of a garden here, she figured because it was such an old area maybe the weeds had just taken over. Her eyes soon came upon a single tree near the house. The tree was ancient, but what really caught her attention was the strange fruit that had grown on its branches. They were oddly shaped, a deep crimson in weird grey speckles on them. Her first instinct as she gazed at the dark red fruit was that it must be delicious. All the animals in the forest obviously loved whatever these were since there were so few of them on the tree. Every Good Chef knows the taste of their ingredients though, but in her inexperience Kelly forgot all about tasting the fruit. Bitter or sweet, she had found the secret garden! She'd worry about the details once she got home. By the time she returned home, things were in a frenzy. She had been declared lost, and many had feared she'd been abducted by kidnappers or pirates. Feeling scared, Kelly hastily began to make a pie with her ingredients. She was in a rush, only sampling a tiny portion of one fruit, which she discovered was very sweet. When her pie was done Kelly was finally ready to face her parents. Surely once they saw and tasted her masterpiece their anger would go away and their faces would beam with pride! So with a smile on her face Kelly returned home, much to the relief of her parents. However things didn't go happily ever after. Recieving a stern scolding from her parents, Kelly revealed the fruits of her labour, offering a nice big slice of pie to each of her parents. To her credit it did indeed look delicious, and beaming with pride she watched her parents each take a large bite of the pie, which was crammed full of that weird fruit she'd found. The fruit unfortunately was poisonous and made people incredibly sick. The trees that bore the fruit had been removed from most of the island, though it seemed the absolute interior of the island hadn't been as thoroughly cleansed. Realizing what they had eaten, her parents rushed to the nearest doctor. Unlike their daughter, who had only taken a small bite of a single slice of the fruit, her parents had ingested large portions of the sweet fruit. Being as young as she was, Kelly was horrified. Her parents were confined to their beds for days and couldn't even move. She had poisoned them and in her mind it seemed as though she'd sentenced her parents to death. In tears, the young girl returned home. She didn't want to live in this world without her parents, and she knew the entire island would hate her forever for what she'd done. Gathering all her things she left, determined to never return home ever again. Three years later Kelly can honestly call herself a young woman. Since she left home she had gone to many places, and learned many things. Her culinary skills have improved, and she can defend herself now. Though she has since realized her parents wouldn't have died from her mistake, her shame keeps her from heading back home. Going place to place, entering cooking contests, and paying for her travels by serving as a chef, Kelly is just scrapping by. Her future uncertain, the young girl just keeps her head up and continues on, hoping one day she'll be able to make her parents proud by becoming the worlds greatest chef. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Kelly prefers not to fight whenever possible. Having no experience with weapons, she focuses instead on self defense, and disarming / disabling targets instead. Weaponry: Kelly dislikes weapons. She does however own a pair of iron knives, used exclusively for cooking. Items:
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 46 Used Regular Technique Points: 22 Special Technique Points: 11 Used Special Technique Points: 11
Development History Gains/Losses: Scoop of Adelia Gairden +27SD +9,837,500 ![]() [url]The thread I failed to finish. D:[/url] +3 SD, + 750 000 ![]() Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Kalevala, Jul 10 2012, 10:56 PM.
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| Chips | Jun 30 2011, 09:18 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||
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Account Name: Fill this in please We need links to all of your past gains and losses please. |
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| Nero | Jun 30 2011, 09:27 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||
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Could you link to Adelia in your gains and losses section so we can check the math on the SD and and Beli stuff. Everything else seems good, the only thing I'm iffy on would be Pie Anyone, because the victim doesn't really eat the pie and that's how the chef debuffs usually work. Although, maybe if she filled it with a special blend pepper or spices or something similar to irritate the victim's eyes I would be fine with it. Chips ;( Edited by Nero, Jun 30 2011, 11:03 PM.
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| Kalevala | Jul 1 2011, 12:24 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||
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Lady Lunari
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Account Name Added. I linked to her old profile as well~ Also I see your point about the pie thing. :x I'll steal your suggestion and have her use cooking knowledge make it not just a pie to the face, but a pie to the face that is highly irritable. :'D |
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| Nero | Jul 1 2011, 03:35 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 2 2011, 04:31 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||
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Cookies! should be a bonus to stamina, rather than endurance. The last technique should be changed to work in posts, not minutes. Also, it should be explained a bit better. Is this like a senzu bean or something? If so, it's way too low ranked. |
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| Kalevala | Jul 2 2011, 07:41 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||
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Lol I did say endurance didn't I? Whoops. As for the last tech, I guess it is kinda senzu bean like? I originally was thinking more like Ivankov's use of horu horu where he suppresses pain for a while so people can keep fighting. The only difference being your injuries aren't suppressed, so much as your exhaustion / muscle fatigue would be. Then just like the horu horu thing once it runs out you come crashing back to reality. Just out of curiousity though, what rank would my concept of basically an overglorified onepiece style energy drink be? I guess if its possible to have Senzu bean style techs I may as well as the rank of those too. Sure I didn't exactly mean it that way, but any dbz-esque move is too One Piece appropriate to ignore :'D Edited by Kalevala, Jul 3 2011, 11:15 AM.
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| ♠ The Unspeakable | Jul 3 2011, 05:31 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||
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Well, something that acts as a complete reset button on all damage entirely no matter what would have to be a very limited rank 44+; that sort of thing tends to trivialize way too many mechanics to be allowed to run rampant. A "complete suppression" of pain and fatigue would be somewhere between superhuman and supernatural, hovering in the 18-20 range. It's still very powerful. A minor, partial suppression of pain and fatigue combined with extra energy would fit into the rank 8-12 range. Hope this all helps. |
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| Kalevala | Jul 4 2011, 01:20 AM Post #9 | ||||||||||||
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Lady Lunari
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xD looks like I'd have a lot of fortune whoring to do. ~_~ Though i'm not a doctor so that really doesn't matter too me much atm anyways :D Anything else that needs tweaking or am I good to go go go~? |
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| ♥ Singularity | Jul 6 2011, 06:08 PM Post #10 | ||||||||||||
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The cupcake technique needs to be swapped from endurance to stamina then, Topic is flagged for approval |
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| Hideo | Jul 10 2011, 05:35 AM Post #11 | ||||||||||||
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Ugh, approval process is slow enough at the moment. Just be sure to change that endurance part to stamina, everything else is k. Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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