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| Helio | Apr 2 2011, 09:19 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Helio Basic Character Information Name: Yvan Toldoro Nicknames: “Pinkbeard” by childhood friends, “the Okamafly!” by people he knows now and most of the pirate world, “Beauty Incarnate” by himself. Age: 22 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirates Bounty: 0 Profession: Primary: ~Navigator The Navigator profession gives knowledge about reading sea charts, currents and weather, reading the stars for a position and a lot of practical ship knowledge, too. Plotting a course along with the related mathematics, all of these are part of the Navigator's job. Navigators will have the skills to navigate the Grand Line. Anyone travelling the Grand Line without a Navigator will be at the mercy of the moderators in their journeys.. Secondary: ~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. ~Entertainer(Dancer) An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific. ~Scientist A scientist is a different name for those primarily interested in chemistry, the making of explosions and poisons, gas or the like. They get primarily the same basic mathematical skills as the Inventor, and a lot of knowledge about various materials. Position: -- Physical Appearance Height: 5’10” Weight: 128lbs Hair: Pink, not dyed. Very long, and normally left to do as it pleases. Quite straight and lacking in body. Clothing/Accessories: Starting from the top, Yvan wears a white piece of material over his shoulders, hanging down to just before his elbows. A pink band extends all the way around the material, and it is held around his neck by a pink necktie with golden fringing. He also wears pink glasses, though he doesn’t specifically need them. Under the material, he wears a black and white skin-tight suit shirt, which is too short for him, exposing his midriff. He wears very skimpy black shorts, and his legs are normally bare. At times he will wear fishnet tights. His feet are covered by a pair of white boots with pink soles and a very noticeable heel. His outfit is designed to let his wings unfold without having to rip through everything. General Appearance: His skin is extremely pale – you would be forgiven for thinking he hadn’t left his house in years. It is smooth and unblemished, though he does have callouses on his hands and feet. His face is quite angular, with a well-defined chin and ears that stick out slightly from his face. His is extremely slender, and he maintains his tiny waistline vigorously. Note: All red in the below picture should be seen as pink. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Yvan is the epitome of flamboyance. The typical gay guy. He has a love of fashion, and an almost narcissistic love of maintaining his own body. Despite this, he's a nice enough guy - he doesn't judge those generally considered to be "less" than him, unless they are being antagonistic towards him. He can, at times, be hard to get along with. He has no time for those that wax philosophical, and values beauty very highly. He feels that the Devil's Fruit he was handed by his father, and the form he takes, are some of the most beautiful things in the world. Generally he gets along with girls better than guys, but will not closet his homosexuality for anyone. His promiscuity does not extend far past casual flirting, but at times he has expressed a bit too much admiration for men that he's met, and has fallen hard. Luckily for him, he can bounce back quicker than most. Even when wandering the seas, Yvan does not allow himself to get lazy or flabby. He likens obesity to death, and finds it hard to talk to larger people without a disgusted look on his face. He may not be tactful, but his honesty is valued by most of the people he meets. In combat, Yvan is quite chatty. He often compliments the beauty of his opponent's attacks, but prefers to comment on his own attacks. He has the habit of announcing himself when entering combat, but he knows not to do so unless in his human or hybrid form. He doesn't often feel fear, unless presented with an opponent quite obviously out of his league. As a martial artist, he is generally able to accurately gauge his opponent's assumed strength based on their physicality. He will not fight a battle he does not feel he can win, and though he doesn't run off at the first sign of trouble, he is definitely not the guy you want to have watching your back. Hometown: Lashlane Island – A small farming island in North Blue. Doesn’t get many visitors. History: Lashlane Island was one of many islands in North Blue to hold nothing more than a farming community. They did not export or import anything, and never longed for the mainland. Every boy there was expected to be a farmer when they grew up. And every girl was expected to be a housewife. A very old-fashioned ideology, but it had supported an entire community for many, many years. It’s not that they lacked ambition, just that they didn’t know what else there was for them. Yvan Toldoro was born the second child of Miki Toldoro, a vegetable farmer, and Lacy Toldoro, a housewife. His older sister, May Toldoro, always had an impressionable mind. It was her ambitions that changed Yvan’s life forever. In his youth, Yvan was a flamboyant boy. He expressed distress at the idea of working in the fields all day, for fear of becoming anti-socially dirty. His older sister was thus roped in to help. Arguably, it was this that changed her into the tomboy she grew up to be. On the other hand, Yvan would sometimes help out his mother with the cleaning, knitting and cooking. It was highly irregular for Lashlane Island, but nobody thought much harm could come from it. That was, of course, until pirates visited the Island when Yvan was six and his sister was ten. They had not been visited by pirates for several centuries, so it came as a surprise to everyone. The pirates were friendly enough – they came seeking a place to stay and restock, and though wary, the islanders were happy to oblige the pirate’s captain and his small clue. He called himself Bluebeard, because of his comically large blue-tinted beard. He was a jovial man who enjoyed a good drink and was great with kids. The pirates stayed docks for several weeks, enjoying the company of the islanders. Intrigued, both Yvan and May would make the trip to the inn at least twice a week, and watch the pirates. They had become something of an attraction on the small island. Over the few days that Bluebeard had to spend with Yvan and May, he became attached to the two. He came to know May, with her tomboyish ways and indomitable will, as the “Little Cannonball”, and Yvan – with his flamboyant nature and bright pink hair – as “Pinkbeard”, a name that stuck with him for the rest of his life. When Bluebeard and his pirates left for the Grand Line, Yvan happily returned to his work. May, on the other hand, found herself distracted by the stories of Bluebeard and his pirates. She began working harder in the fields, and sometimes Yvan would wake up in the middle of the night, look out the window and see May in the fields training with a rake, using it as a staff. It wasn’t until she turned fifteen that she finally made her ambitions clear. When Yvan was eleven, his interest in dance had already manifested. He would pirouette and dance around the house, mimicking the dance moves his mother spoke of from her brief time on the mainland. He developed extremely fast, his body taking well to the strains dance placed on him. He became more and more flexible, and more and more flamboyant. It was around this time that May chose to leave home. It was very sudden. She took with her nothing but a bag of food, her savings and a headless rake from the store room. She left the island early in the morning, leaving a note for her parents to find. It was hard for Yvan to understand at first, but then thinking back to how in awe May was of the Bluebeard pirates, he came to understand her desires. Their parents were distraught, of course, but Yvan comforted them. He had every faith in his sister, and guaranteed that she would be fine. Despite his youth, there was something so impressive about his conviction, his parents really did find it easier to accept their daughter leaving. From that moment on, Yvan took on both the domestic chores and May’s farm work. He also continued his dancing, developing it more and more as the weeks passed. He thought back to the times of Bluebeard, and began to miss his sister. At the age of 12, he resolved that one day he would become a pirate himself and find his sister. He would often fantasize on his sister’s fate. He often dreamt of her as one of the great warlords of the sea, or an amazing pirate that wandered the seas with her motley crew, and liberated islands under the rule of bandits and miscreants. It was around this time that, with his increased physical fitness, Yvan began to develop his own martial style based on the multiple dances he had become familiar with over the years, thanks to his mother’s monthly trips to the mainland. At the age of sixteen, much like his sister, Yvan hoped to leave his hometown as quietly as possible. But he couldn’t – not after his parents had already lost one child. He explained to them his desire, he revealed that he had been training, and he assured them that he had a sure-fire way of getting to the mainland. Impressed by how prepared he was, Yvan’s parents gave him their blessing, and his father handed him a strange fruit that he had found growing on a tree on the mountainside several years back. He kept it, thinking that it may be worth something, but decided to give it to Yvan as a parting gift. Yvan took a small fishing boat to the “mainland”, an island known as Tvea Lorees – a city on the water. It was an elegant city, with impressive architecture and a big entertainment community. It was only upon reaching Tvea Lorees that Yvan became aware of the fact that he didn’t have enough money to even rent another ship, let alone get his own. Wandering the city, he came across a club. Upon entering, he found a troupe of dancers performing to a large, excitable audience. After the show, he approached a member of the troupe. After quite a bit of conversation, he was offered an audition. The next day, he auditioned and was accepted into the prestigious Lasventa Dance Troupe. Not only was it a way for him to gain a respectable income, it also allowed him to gain more dance experience, thus improving his combat abilities. It also opened his eyes to more of the world. He began to focus on what he would need at sea – the ability to navigate, the ability to fight, the ability to create. And so he studied, gaining the relevant skills. Skills that would help him in his later life. It wasn’t until he was twenty two that Yvan finally gained enough money to make it on his own. His time with the troupe changed him dramatically – he not only embraced his own underlying homosexuality, he also became a very accomplished navigator, scientist, dancer and martial artist in his own right. He left the troupe, bidding farewell to his friends, and boarded a ship out into the world. During the trip, he was absently searching through his stuff, and accidently ate a piece of the strange fruit his father gave him. Now, arriving at his destination, he feels a change occurring within him. The change caused by one only thing – a Devil’s Fruit. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Before he was a martial artist, Yvan’s main desire was to be a dancer. He studied several styles of dance over the years, and has become proficient with all of them. It wasn’t until his older sister left to become a pirate that he became aware of how close combat and dance could be. This put him in a prime position to develop his own martial style. In combat, Yvan focuses on grace and speed, as well as his own rhythmic sense. His techniques mainly consist of hard-to-follow movements that require great physical ability and dexterity. It exemplifies obscurity over pure speed and strength, and thus is it useful against multiple other styles and against even the most seasoned martial artists. It is a very hard style to predict and thus defend against. He often employs his Devil's Fruit in combat, when he needs to take the fight to another level (namely the air). He also makes uses of it's enhanced speed, and accuracy, as well as his ability to rapidly decrease and increase his mass when using his full transformation. Weaponry: None. Items: He carries with him several handfuls of confetti, tap shoes, copious amounts of glitter and a tutu. Though they don’t add anything practical to his combat style, he does like to bust them out every now and then, just to add something purely aesthetic to his fights. Beli: 500,000 Upkeep: 250,000 - Bombs SD Earned: 0 Stats:
Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Helio, Apr 5 2011, 03:52 PM.
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Yvan Toldoro • No Crew • Navigator; Entertainer, Scientist, Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Mirrorball Island. Kimberly "Kimmi" Friedmann • Ensign • Navigator; Carpenter • No Crew • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Loguetown. | |||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Apr 2 2011, 03:00 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||
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I notice a lack of personality. Wanna fix that? Zoan - Mushi Mushi no Mi (Bug). Pick your model. Edited by Yaksha, Apr 2 2011, 03:13 PM.
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![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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| Helio | Apr 2 2011, 10:13 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||
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Hellooooooo Yaksha~ Personality added, sorry about that. =S Edited fighting style a little to incorporate the fruit. I chose the butterfly model. Also added another technique - rank 4. Hope all is okay now. |
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Yvan Toldoro • No Crew • Navigator; Entertainer, Scientist, Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Mirrorball Island. Kimberly "Kimmi" Friedmann • Ensign • Navigator; Carpenter • No Crew • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Loguetown. | |||||||||||||||
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| Nary | Apr 4 2011, 07:58 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||
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If stag Leap is just a simple ballet leap then rank 1 is fine, if its a knee attack, then it should be rank 4. Pirouette should be rank 4 since both are basically a defensive technique. Reine de Danse and Jet en L'air Arrière are both attack and thus should be rank 4. |
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Apr 4 2011, 08:05 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||
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To clarify what Nary is saying: Magic Queen is almost a textbook rank one. The rest of them could TECHNICALLY be done at rank one, but to get any use out of them you'd want a rank 4. | ||||||||||||||
![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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| Helio | Apr 4 2011, 08:22 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||
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Left Saut de Mâle as it is. It is just a simple stag leap. It is not designed to be a knee attack, though anyone performing a stag leap should have their front leg bent. So while the knee may make contact, it is not specifically supposed to. I'd say it's within the abilities of a dancer, and indeed most people, to perform a simple leap. Edit2: Some fairly big edits. Please re-read. Edited by Helio, Apr 4 2011, 03:41 PM.
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Yvan Toldoro • No Crew • Navigator; Entertainer, Scientist, Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Mirrorball Island. Kimberly "Kimmi" Friedmann • Ensign • Navigator; Carpenter • No Crew • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Loguetown. | |||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Apr 5 2011, 02:47 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||
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"The pattern on his wings has a hypnotic quality (though it has to be activated via a technique not yet gained)." Let's save this for when he gets that technique, yes? The bomb will give you an upkeep of 250,000. |
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![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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| Helio | Apr 5 2011, 03:53 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||
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Okay, added upkeep and removed that sentence. =) | ||||||||||||||
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Yvan Toldoro • No Crew • Navigator; Entertainer, Scientist, Martial Artist • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Mirrorball Island. Kimberly "Kimmi" Friedmann • Ensign • Navigator; Carpenter • No Crew • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 50,000 • Location: Loguetown. | |||||||||||||||
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| Nary | Apr 8 2011, 08:39 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||
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Looks good. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Apr 9 2011, 10:36 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||
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Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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